NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas...🤗</font>



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And Harshu, I found a quote perfect for the situation that matches your reference to 'Master Oogway' from Kung Fu Panda😛</font>

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yup lash its perfectly fitting quote of master oogway... 😉 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
now story is moving towards its destination,a rare love story is about to bloom between the two opposite poles.khan saheb have given a subtle hint and harkha sahiba is already intrigued.it will be worth to read upcoming happenings.thanks for pm.one thing, i am reading again ur NAJPA pleaseee give an epilogue of this masterpiece.i am yearning to witness the most adorable couple's life journey together after post marriage.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Chapter 8

Loved your 'Yesss' baby btw😆

Again a wonderful chapter👏.Felt the chapter is short and wanted to read more and more😳Honestly,only few writers can make the readers forget the world around them while reading and needless to say,you are one among them⭐️
Thank you so much Bindu Kanna 😳

Not just the leads but all the other characters are powerful and intriguing👍🏼.The whole Prince-Ustaad-Khalil scenes were so brilliantly written.I was very tensed as if Khalil had put the sword on my neck😆
Really? Awww don't worry Khan Sahib will come and save you... or maybe Ustaad would have done it himself!

Loved the way you brought out the topic of Parnagarh again by relating it to the steel of tahar and of course the timely entrance of Khalil too.
Thanks darling 😳

The introduction of Ustaad is awesome.I was wondering who this experienced visitor was.Loved these lines the most about him..A master of many arts and yet a man of few words.His words and ways of tackling the egoistic,cold-blooded general was superb.Would love to read more about him😊
Don't worry you'll get to read lots more about him... 😳 and I am very glad you liked his character!

I'm super happy that Shahzaade bruised the monster Khalil's ego🤪What does he think of himself..showing off his skills by risking others' lives and enjoying their plight on top of it.I hate him so very much😡😡
😡😡 He is a maniac

At the same time..can't help praising you for creating such character.Destructive volcanic temper that lay under that calm mountainous exterior..These lines were again 👏👏
Thanks.. those were my favourite lines about Khalil too😊

'I'll sniff out the younger heiress... wherever she's hiding... and have that wretched lady delivered at your fee...'
While reading this,I was like.."No idiot,you can't..she's hiding behind a stranger"😉
Hee hee... 😆

Since it's clear that Khalil isn't someone to step back without seeking revenge for the humiliation..waiting for the interesting battle to start b/w headstrong beast and our dearest,razor-sharp AkHeera😉
Loool... 😉

Good to know Prince isn't a maniac like his trusted general.His respect for the daughters of Parnagarh is evident through the words.Having said that,his power hungry and uncaring(of his people) attitude doesn't befit a so called PRINCE😡 No wonder,the emperor is against him.
Yes, he's a bit more sane... but, he is a fanatic and a power hungry guy...😡

The most delightful news is about the farmaan being safe!😃Guess,Durga's rhyme has something to do with the original farmaan.Heera thinks it's with the Prince and he thinks the other way round
Yeah! That complicates matters a bit...

I read few comments first and then the update..I regret that as it would've caused great relief and surprise to know reg.farmaan, had I read it in the update first,through your words🤔
Hee hee...
😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas... 🤗



And Harshu, I found a quote perfect for the situation that matches your reference to 'Master Oogway' from Kung Fu Panda 😛

It's true 😆

Chellam and Harshu 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"> It's true😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Chellam and Harshu🤗🤗🤗</font>


kalu🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
once more wonderful chapter , Lashy...but I have to read it atleast twice more for more comments..😉. so will post tomorrow..😛.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lashy di, just a random thought and a question to you. Hope you don't mind...😛

Okay just imagine...If Durga Bai was still alive, and our Khan Sahib would have got a chance to meet/know both the sisters...whom do you think would have impressed/interested him more? Or by whom would he have been awed more?
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Posted: 9 years ago


Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Over the past two days, her mind had developed plans, hatched plots and considered all different possibilities for the future of Parnagarh.

However, it was when the time to act came that the momentous nature of her mission struck her. It was when she actually saw the map of the entire Mughal Empire dangling in front of her eyes that she truly realised what an ambitious step she was taking. A dangerous step from which, there was no going back - and possibly a step that no other orphaned 16 year old would've ever taken.

Can't describe how proud and glad I felt reading this.I know its 17th century, know that people were far more matured than the current generation, know that Heera is an heiress who is expected to be responsible and matured for her people.Still,the way she has been dealing with the unfavorable circumstances and has been emerging strong for the future of Parnagarh is commendable👏

Fighting against an ambitious Prince with only people's emotions as a weapon is no mean feat.'Jiji, your Harka Bai will use the voice and influence of the powerful society, to get you justice... to make sure Khalil gets his due... and to ensure Parnagarh is spared!'Loved these lines,depicting her determination,immensely⭐️

Thank you so so so much darling... I am glad she has shaped up as an inspirational character... after all a character like her is the one who could shake Khan Sahib out of his otherwise strong will na...

On one hand,Heera is so soft and kind and on the other hand she is shrewd and strong.How wisely she has planned to garner the support from all the kingdoms suffered at the hands of prince and Khalil.It's like enemy's enemy is a friend.

Yes!

'W... we... tried telling him... h... he asked us some questions...' Gokul's firm stares were slowly hazed by a film of uncertainty 'We didn't know what answers to give...'

'B... baisa... I... I think it would be better if you met him personally... and explained it yourself...' Bajrang recommended

Ye Khan Sahib bhi na..he is capable of making anyone stutter😆 except few😉.It's his effect that made them falter,right?

Undoubtedly! 😆

How difficult it is to Heera at this stage..she can't trust anyone completely in an unknown place ,she can neither suspect every trivial detail nor ignore them fully

Yes.. one will go mad only!🤪

While everyone is relishing delicious Marwari food..Khan Sahib is adamant to eat only Chachajaan's haath ka khana😆 This is what makes him more interesting😉

Again there is a long reason for this... but will have to wait and watch for that!😉

'A study?' she wondered if she must call the room that - because her own study back at Parnagarh, was a reader's paradise. A bright and sunny chamber that was a homage to books - books that had been resourced by the Mansabdar from various places over the years. Works on religion and poetry. Texts about soil and plants. Scrolls explaining medicine and science. Literary works in Urdu, Sanskrit, Marwari and Persian. Paintings depicting various cultures, and the list went on.

This room appeared less like a study - and more like a mishmash of three chambers in one 'Interesting'

So,its Mansabdar who is the reason behind Heera's in depth knowledge of various things. Poor girl is forced to leave her home..her paradise and live in such a place,now😭I wish she would finally get back to the place she belongs to.

Yes... she was intelligent anyway and loved learning... but after the accident, she couldn't really do a lot of 'outdoorsy' stuff... she started burying herself in books...

and seeing how his daughter must love reading... he must have brought her more everytime he visited the capital...😊

But,Aidabad would become her home eventually,right?😉No problem,I'm sure she would turn this unsophisticated place into a heaven.After all,she is a HEERA😃

Awww... 😉

'A little more than 10 hours... actually, 10 and half hours to be precise' she gave him the answer to their problem..The mathematician Heera😎

'But, that's only if we take no breaks...'well,how can he just accept her answer😆

ROFFFL I liked your answer... 😆

Loved their salutations part

Have you noticed they haven't actually done the adab to her? 😉 and I think she hasn't done the Marwari salute either... abhi bhi keeping stuff very to-the-matter these two..

Akbar's sarcastic compliment-Heera's witty response-HIS unexpected question..I was like 😛😆😲..how did he know?? then it clicked me..it's the Akbar we are reading about.

😉

Just loved the convo that followed.It was so unexpected of him to reveal abt his help to the children,for,it was neither his nature to speak more than required nor there was any compulsion.I feel he shares a similar past like that of those children,hence the change in his tone and manner.

A sincerity that implied that underneath the toughened armour which Akbar Mahmoud Khan always donned, lay a soft-spot, after all...like our Jalal

I felt Jalal was always soft only... especially for a few episodes here and there, he could never really be a real toughie...😕 all that initial 'cruel' 'darindaa' 'haivaan' ads they showed about him didn't last beyond the first 50 episodes 😆

'Yes...' his voice dipped, as a sign of courtesy, and empathy 'Chacha jaan mentioned about your sister... I am sorry to hear that...'

Heera had to be honest with him since he had been the same with her.So,chacha jaan knew abt the death and has also informed their Sahib.

How chachajaan knew - well... just general stuff like their leader has died etc... they must be performing the morning vidhis and all na.. he must have seen...

besides, the first night they arrived itself, Maharaj kaka had to inform them that they were in mourning since he had to refuse the food they offered...

But why she died? How? And all other details they shouldn't know at this stage😊

'I had to fix the bridge... and you were in the way... that's all...' Akbar had scoffed in response, like she was a mere inconvenience to him then

Who on earth would respond this way to a sincere thank you!!😲😡 Is it his tedha way of being modest?I don't think so😆

Its his introvert way of saying... no need of telling me thanks... 'bas hamne bachaa liyaa na... chod deejiye .. isse zyaadaa aur kuch bolne ki zarrorat nahin hai aapko!'😆

because from thanks, sorry and please starts what can be called cordial conversation na... 😉

'And if you let me know where I can plant them... I'll bear in mind to stick to the boundaries...' a formal pause followed 'So, I don't inconvenience you, by coming in your way!'

This is why we love Heera,so much..what a punch this is😆

Yup!

Raising a brow, Akbar sternly looked up to dart her a glance, before turning aside..Khan sahib ki bolti band😆

loool

As a man who'd never let his grit be swayed by beauty or charms - as a man who didn't want to be fascinated by her finesse, this was a juncture where he found himself failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again!

Amazing lines⭐️⭐️

THANK YOU... looks like it's the favourite of a few others too!

Wanna read more..waiting for tomorrow's update.Love you,di🤗.I can't even imagine the kind of effort and time that goes into writing such fabulous chapters.Hats off to you👏

Thank you dear... 🤗 so so much!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Shagun..ahh yes,she said both Shubh ratri and padharjo sa.

Btw,did you read my comment on ur OS?


I did read it di, ...and loved it more than I can supposedly say here! 🤗❤️

Will reply to each word there, just give me some time please...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

What? A secret 🥺? Can't we read it?


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