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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing chappi
so cute
but I didn't get any of my Jalal's scene
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update asap buddy
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update
both rahim and Mirza behaving like little kid
everybody really care for jodha
family movement is so beautiful
poor jodha
Abdul ignore her
she feel bad
but in the end everything is fine
both brother and sister patch up
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice one dear
Rahim and mirza are really naughty monkeys
Jo and abdul part good
The feeling of a bro are beautifully written
But no jalal
Update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update Eshali..Nice bonding btwn jo and abdul..lovely and cute antics of mirza and rahim..No jalal..why.?Thanks for pm and sry for late..Going to finish this.?R u planning to start new story..?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Jodha is finally having good time. All are taking care of her. Mirza and Rahim are having fun.Abdul is angry with Jodha, chalo patch up ho gaya. where is Jalal?

Nice update and thanks for pm dear.




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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic chapter n thnxx for pm dr
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Mirza also turned to a kid with Rahim
Jo and Abdul share a cute bond
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely chappy...
Rahim n Mirza is so cute...
Abdul is angry with jo..
Final is good..
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Posted: 8 years ago
update dedo dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys I'm really sorry for not updating dis story nd make you all to wait for a long. As I tips told to before soon I'll end dis ff may be in two r three chapter .Thank you all for loving my work .Actually

CHAPTER 17
At 8 O'clock jalal comes to his house nd see hamidha rukku nd mirza watching television in living room nd says hi to everyone nd directly went to his bedroom thinking jodha is in their room bt he didn't find her in the room .He went to bathroom to freshen up thinking that she is in the kitchen. After freshen up he went to downstairs nd see Hamidha is waiting for him in the dinning table to serve his dinner
Jalal:hi mom you had your dinner
Hamidha :ha beta I already had it
Jalal :hmm mom where is jo I didn't find her anywhere
Hamidha:he is in the garden jalal
Jalal :what!!!!!in the garden in dis time it's so cool outside what she is doing there .God mom you should call her she is 7months pregnant what if she fell sick .k I'll go nd call her
Hamidha:I call her jalal bt she didnt come ..she is very upset nd sad from morning .I think you should ask her it's not good for her nd babies health .I think something is bothering her.
Jalal:k ammi you don't worry I'll ask her you go nd take rest I'll eat afterwards
Hamidha :hmm k beta nd jo also didn't had her dinner
Jalal:k ammi I'll take care of her
Hamidha:teke beta gudnyt nd she went to her room
Jalal went to garden nd see jodha sitting on the grass .she looks very divine nd cute in her white nd black border Saree with matching black blouse .Her pregnancy make her more beautiful he thought .She looks like a goddess with open hair to jalal he walks near her nd stands behind her
Jodha:she feels someone presence behind her she turns back nd see jalal is standing she gives him a sweet smile to him
Jalal :he too smiles at her nd sits besides her
Jalal:what my beautiful wife is doing here in dis hours
Jo:nothing jalal it feels gud sitting here
Jalal:hmm k come let's go inside its very cold na
Jo:she didn't reply to his question nd she put her head on his shoulder nd says I'm sorry jalal
Jalal:he put her hand around jodha waist nd asks with confusing face for what jo
Jo:for everything jalal for going away from you with my foolishness I don't know what I had done on that day with anger I did it .I'm so sorry jalal what I had done was wrong I should ask you nxt day .I forget that you have drunken on that day .I make you worry about me .I'm really sorry jalal nd starts to sob (abdul told to jo about that it was all misha plan to separate joja on that day )
Jalal:shhh...dont cry baby you know na i dont like tears in your eyes .i also did a mistake by slapping you on that day becoz of that bi***h misha( his blood boil remembering misha ).beooz of her i slap you I shouldn't do that becoz of my mistake you left me .I'm sorry jo .Now I'm happy that my jo nd babies are with me bt never leave me jo. I can't live without you .
Jo:me too can't live without you jalal
Jalal:k come let's go inside jo nd get up from.the grass nd forward his hand to jo
Jo: she holds his hand nd slowly get up while holding her baby bumb with a smile
Jalal: he smiles at her nd says I think my babies are hungry he said while caressing her baby bumb nd feel a strong kick
Jalal:with shock god jo what's dis
Jo:with smile she put her palm on his hand on her belly nd says your naughty babies are saying hi to their abbu jalal by kicking
Jalal:with tears in his eyes he kneel up to her belly nd gives a soft kiss to her tummy nd says hi my dear babies be healthy nd come soon I'm eagerly waiting for you both
Jo:she shivers by jalal kiss on her bare tummy
Jalal:is it hurt jo becoz there kick was very strong
Jo:she put her palm on his cheeks nd says not much jalal but feel little uncomfortable
Jalal::ohh...nd says to his babies !!! My dear babies be easy on your Ammi becoz she want to carry you both in her tummy for another long three months is it clear my babies again he feels another kick nd says that's my cute babies nd he again gives a kiss to her tummy nd get up the grass
Jalal:he sees his wife with lot's of love nd gives a forehead kiss to her nd hugs her tightly
Jo:she too hugs him tightly with tears
Jalal:thank you so much jo for giving me two beautiful gifts my babies I love you so much
Jo:I love you too jalal love you so much nd your babies are two naughty boys
Jalal:he break his hug nd ask really jo
Jo:ha jalal morning mirza told me I'm very happy
Jalal:me too very happy jo bt i thought that ill have my little princess atleasst one princess he said with cute pout
Jo:she pinches his dimple cheeks nd says next time better luck my dear hubby bt now it's boys
Jalal:with naughty smirk he pull her by waist towards him nd says ohh next time better luck na nd kisses her checks
Jo:blushes heavily nd hides her face in his mainly chest
Jalal:my life is complete with you jo I love you so much
Jo:I too love you jalal
Jalal: seeing her trumbling cherry red lips he cant able to control himself nd starts to kiss her lips passionately it's being 6months he is craving for her touch nd love finally he got time after damm six months without breaking the kiss he lifts her in his arms nd headed to their bedroom
Jo:while breaking kiss she says with worry nd blush jalal put me down I'm so heavy you may feel pain in your spine
Jalal:ha Mrs.jalal you have doubt in your husband stamina ill show my stamina on you when we reach our bedroom. I can't live you today I'm craving to make love to you nd to touch you nd he winks at her
Jo:she totally become red with his words nd hide her face in his chest
K guys done with my chapter. Hope you like it .plzz give your feedback .Hope I don't disappoint you with dis chapter. Love you guys muahhh 😃 😳

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