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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

Welcome to the forum and the story too.. glad to read your review... and from reading it, it seems like you've been following our discussions too.. so, please jump in as and when you can!

And... what can we call you 😳

Hiii everyone When I read about durga in first few chapters, I was curious to know how you are going to make heera different from durga and still admirable...
Cause all heroic qualities were possessed by durga but as the story progressed we got to know about heera more. And what a MASTERPIECE she is!!
Courageous ,smart, sharp and as said by her sister wisest 16 year old and most importantly open minded.
Thank you so much... yes.. not many have brought this point about her... she is open minded... a forward thinker!

Coming to akbar, what to say about him, like all other forumwaasi's I too fell for him. Sabne itna bol diya ab mai kya kahu "khan saahib" ke baare me!!!
I LOVED THIS LINE❤️ made it all worth it!

The convo between akbar and bahadur reminded me of maharana pratap- chetak. The unique connection warriors shared with their pets is fascinating.
Yes it is... 👏

The politics part is just as amazing. Getting interesting with each chapter!!
Thank you so much!

The historical theme and timeline is just perfect. Hindusthaan must be in chaos then.
It was!

Prince is just as cruel as khalil, trying to shift blame on khalil. It was his orders to get the farmaan by hook or crook. Not that I like khalil he is worse than beast but Prince is so cunning.
Yes prince is cunning...

Durga's death was biggest shock till now but now farmaan is safe so this seems to be biggest shock though in positive manner of cource.
True...

So your akbar is counting hunars of heera baisa . Great going
Whenever they met there is magical chemistry which is hard to describe.
Again, fell for this line ... fell hard!❤️

Hats off to you for creating such intriguing characters .
Will come back soon .
Thanks a lot... 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">'Languages... medicine... and numbers too?' he frowned, a hint of sarcasm prevalent in his pitch 'That's quite a few areas you're skilled at...'</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">'Skilled?' she acknowledged his sarcasm with similar doses of scepticism 'But, you're not far behind yourself, Khan Sahib...' her gazes trailed around her own crossed palms 'That was quite some display that night, at the canal... I must say, I haven't seen anyone else possess such good aim!' She waited, eager to hear what he had to say to justify himself</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">'Was that a compliment? Or another one of your underhanded investigations... like the one you've just sent your guard on, Harka Sahiba?'</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Taken aback, she glimpsed up.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">In spite of her limited vision and even through the blue of her veil, the ire flashing in those deep eyes were unmissable.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">But, how did the merchant come to know that she'd had him followed?Drawing in a sharp sigh, an embarrassed Heera decided to come out with the truth straightaway, since there was no escape from this one 'Yes I did... but, how did you find out?'</font>

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fantastic musing kal... ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Chellam

Somehow... even if you might have spent much longer with other musings, this felt like the best musing to me.. I don't know why... the blue veil ...their expressions were all SPOT ON!..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

'Languages... medicine... and numbers too?' he frowned, a hint of sarcasm prevalent in his pitch 'That's quite a few areas you're skilled at...'

'Skilled?' she acknowledged his sarcasm with similar doses of scepticism 'But, you're not far behind yourself, Khan Sahib...' her gazes trailed around her own crossed palms 'That was quite some display that night, at the canal... I must say, I haven't seen anyone else possess such good aim!' She waited, eager to hear what he had to say to justify himself

'Was that a compliment? Or another one of your underhanded investigations... like the one you've just sent your guard on, Harka Sahiba?'

Taken aback, she glimpsed up.

In spite of her limited vision and even through the blue of her veil, the ire flashing in those deep eyes were unmissable.

But, how did the merchant come to know that she'd had him followed? Drawing in a sharp sigh, an embarrassed Heera decided to come out with the truth straightaway, since there was no escape from this one 'Yes I did... but, how did you find out?'



wonderful👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Yes he is an exception, Harshu 😉


Possessive of Harka Sahiba... awww... she'll just wrap you in her arms, Chellam... 😆

I'll happily go into her arms 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aiyo wait part 2 coming!! 😡😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

Hey Lash, 🤗 u deserve a big big round of applause👏👏👏👏...not just for the story, but the way u use few special words of Urdu/Farsi to make the special impact of that era, of that particular situation...and then the way u take efforts to help ur readers to understand the exact meaning of those words...really commendable...👏👏

Thank you so so so much... in this chapter, I took the help of SorathSheikh to get the right 'address'.. but I am glad it's impressed you, dikshu.. you have no idea how much this means to me!

So chap 8 : one more wonderful chapter...rather better than previous ones, coz it not only takes the story further, but it also opens the new faces of the main characters like Heera, Akbar, Khalil and shehzade...

Yesss!😊 it opened up the venues a bit more..

Abt Shehzade, then felt much better to see, that he still has somewhat humanity in him... or may be I m wrong, may be he would have done same hateful thing with Durga, but still, I think there is a very small piece of decency in him, may be due to the influence of his Ustad...just want to know, that Ustad hated Khalil's entire misdeed, or he just hated the fact that Khalil lost to control his lust and failed in his mission... and if the later is the reason, then does it mean, that if Khalil would have been successful in bringing the real farmaan, then both Ustad and Shehzade wouldn't have mind Durga's worst insult by Khalil...and if this is right, then I wish all of them should face much worse fate than Durga...

Ustad is not his Ustad... ustad is ustad only of young recruits... but... yes.. you are right that Shehzaade wouldn't have done something like that.. not because he has a golden heart or anything.. but because he believes in self-control.. and also for his political ambitions this is not good...

Ustaad despises what Khalil is becoming... but Shehzaade is giving him free rein since he's a very successful general...

And abt Khalil, then have a feeling that he is going to be a big back-stabber even for Shehzade🤢...this man has no trace of humanity in him😡...while reading abt him, he feels like combination of Adham , Sharif and that fazal beig (Mahachuchak's man) of our JA😉...

Hee hee dikshu...

Khalil is a bit smarter than all of them put together though... he lapsed at the haveli because Durga totally took him by surprise... but, he is smarter... shrewder

wish, it would be Heera, who will seal his fate, and that too very brutally ...though, that's not her character to be so brutal , still I wish to see her like that when it comes to take revenge for her sister's humiliation...

Hmmm... 😉

And abt Heera ...loved to see her positivity and straight-forwardness...her strength , despite her weakness...her willingness to fight and win against all odds...to use all available resources in her favour...simply amazing...👏

Yes... 👏 she's my girl..

Akbar...again he seems to be a man of his own mind...the one self made...he makes the world to see him, the way he wants, and that helps him in hiding the real self...and that's why he is not comfortable around Heera, coz he knows that she will be the one who will see him through her brain/mind/heart as her eyes...and that vision will give her his real self, not his outer face...and he is wise enough to understand that she can understand him more than he is ready to expose himself...

Yet another aspect of this story that has been brought out by the beautiful readers... how lovely words, Dikshu.. you've put it wonderfully!

Frankly , I m loving this battle btw two...Heera's simplicity, purity and intelligence and Akbar's insightfulness, shrewdness, and sharpness...still her purity will be his undoing...

Of course!😉

But ofcourse, all this will be only if Akbar will be "The Stranger" of ur story... if u decide to make somebody else as Stranger then who knows...afterall the story is always Author's imagination, vision and creativity, right??😉

Iska answer you already got 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
Then you should cookly cookly press 'res' chellam.. it's ok you do it... when I open new thread I'll put it on first page 😆
Especially Heera's expressions... how did you get it so spot on... and you photoshopped her veil

ETA... Wait... I think Khan Sahib's expressions are PERFECT TOO

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

'And if you let me know where I can plant them... I'll bear in mind to stick to the boundaries...' a formal pause followed 'So, I don't inconvenience you, by coming in your way!' she ended her request calmly, with not a trace of annoyance in her voice - making it difficult for anyone to figure out if there was a 'wry remark' hidden in that request at all.

However, he knew what she was doing.

The heiress had returned his 'You were in the way' comment with a subtle retort - but in a manner very few could have done so. Her approach was civil enough so the reply wouldn't be counted an insult, and yet her words were clear enough to remind him that she was capable of being blunt too.

Raising a brow, Akbar sternly looked up to dart her a glance, before turning aside. As a man who'd never let his grit be swayed by beauty or charms - as a man who didn't want to be fascinated by her finesse, this was a juncture where he found himself failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again!

Edited by Kalgi22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27


fantastic musing kal... ⭐️ 👏

Thank you Harshu 😃


Thank you Diksha 😃

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