Chapter 40 Is It Hate OR Love - Page 35

Originally posted by: KanJmaskis

What a fantastic comeback to the story di 👏 ... it was refreshing and a crispy update 😛 ... just loved it ... no matter after how many days u updated just ur one stroke and we all again sailing in that same boat of our first enthralling experience ... even i enjoyed it more than before ... 😛

Kanchan UR comment always brings a smile on my face and after reading this comment I was too happy... First of all, I was worried posting a chapter for this story after so long... might be readers won't come back to read and second I was not involved in the story. I read the entire story from chapter 1 to comeback in Is it hate or love. But after seeing the response from readers I am very happy and especially your comment I loved it because I know you love Rkg more but I felt after reading your comment on this chapter I can tell U truly loved it.

POLITICAL ASPECTS

Well it was the best part of the chappy 👏 y were u nervous of posting it ... Even i would like u to add it in rkg too i really liked this addition The reason is that it has given more large view to the story makes it lively and more than that it enhanced jalal ' s character made it more impactful as a king and giving us a broad view of it Now we more get to see another shades of his life and character ... jalal ud din Mohammad 😳👏

How can I explain to King Bharmal that my aim is not to make Rajvanshis my enemies, instead it's to shake hands with them, without their sustenance I can't achieve my dream of a massive and elongated empire under the Mughals. At this point, everything seems to be falling apart and my main concern right now is King Surya Vadan's father Rawal Harraj and Jaisalmer King Sabal Singh. Both are too powerful to easily defeat because they are protected with their small but protective fort and if they gain support from Kuwar Pratap, then it will be like another Panipat war, thousands of people will die... Yaa Allah... give me some peace... it's been ten years since I have been revolving around the battlefields... It began from the crucial battle of Panipat against Hemu when I was merely thirteen and re-occupied my father's pride, the throne of Delhi back, since then my bloodthirsty sword has not rested...

I was Just concerned because I never wrote a political scene before and wasn't sure if readers will enjoy my writing on the political side.

I will keep in mind... to add some political aspect in Rkg as well

This soliloquy of jalal Aptly represented the shehenshah Akbar who wants to rule in the heart of entire hindustan ... Very attentively he put his strategy to suppress the protest to avoid the battle dealing with everybody individualy ... u very well executed this whole political track 👏 with the big big names like raja sabal singh Raja rai king of bikaner Rawal harraj ... Which were giving more realistic touch to the story ... Really U did a very hard work for it dear ⭐️... Ur writing style is also more enhanced now though it nothing maters with the charm of ur imagination bcoz it is same fr me then and now bt it surely becomes more fancy 😃👏

I really appreciate UR compliment. I did research a little bit before writing.

I am glad U noticed a change in my writing style but what I loved to hear is that I have not lost the charm what readers enjoy in my writing. Lately, my focus has diverted from story to writing before I was writing freely without any concern but I have become too conscious what I add and what not. Probably it has its own advantage and disadvantage but I am hoping soon I will be relaxed in my writing once again.

Oh god, I am not ready for this upcoming killer battle... I want to spend time with Jodha, not in battle fields.

What r u upto di ... Indication of battle

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Heheheh... I am up to the wedding😆

Though I know you will agree to surrender King Sabal Singh, because, you are a wise and intelligent sixty years old, well-experienced person who could see what is best for his people. Currently, you do not have a proper commander or an heir who could run your state efficiently. Also, I know that economically your state is drained due to improper management and circumstances. The main financial strain was caused by your acrimonious relation with your neighboring state Bikaner and you are nowhere in any financial or physical condition to afford the burden of a war against Mughals even with the support of other states." Jalal deviously threatened in a forceful tone while revealing the private classified information of the current hindrances of his state

This convo made me rember of jalal' s first meeting with bharmal ... A Typically shrewd jalal who Knows how to tackle things in his favor 😉... Apt dialogues u fitted here 😃

After reading entire story I felt somewhere I was lacking Jalal's shrewdness in the story. I was, of course, imagine my Rajat while writing the scene how he would have handled.

"What you are looking for someone like me... let's my shadow... My brother... Mirza Hakim who has all this quality and is fortunately not married and obviously not commited . I would be pleased to tie our hands not only with mansabdari but also with the family coalition." Shrewdly he opened his cards at a slow pace to win his ploy.

Right ... Before surya ' s father approached him ... He played his card ... While it may brings twist in new love birds story ... As Shivani was already in a shock with the harem truth and now if he agreed to the marriage she will totally go in a trance 😆

Btw mirza 's warming session was very passionate & appealing 😳😳😳 ... For a second i assume them as jo and ja U wrote it soo seductively ... With the depiction of her teenage emotions She is a girl who quite lives in dream land and quite modern too than her other sisters ... 😉😆

First of all, she is the youngest one and all pampered... but she has seen Jodha and Suku how they handle and talk. She knows many think about how girl important to keep their virtue intact and all... and confuse about love... She is somewhat in dreamland... not close practical world like every otherteenager feels when they fall in love for the first time. I tried to show her character bold...immature... quick in decision... blunt... possessive... opposite to practical ... imaginary person... and Mirza opposite to her... practical and mature.

"Mirza... Always remember, King's Lifespan is too byzantine, surrounded by enemies and dangled with conspiracy. Many people desire for my life, they desire for my power and prosperity, but they don't realize how trapped I am in it... I do feel suffocated observing the hope in the people's eyes every day... every minute and every second, when they look at me for solutions to problems which I don't know the solutions for, their hopes scare me colossally but their hopes and faith in me give me strength also to fight in every difficult situation. I would rather say you are forced to learn when you don't have any other alternatives'. If my squad perceives my fear, they will all break apart without fighting, so being a king you also need to learn to pretend that you have a solution for every problem. Now tell me what is bothering you?? Seems like Shivani has snatched your dreams." Jalal jested.

I feel like hugging him so tightly 😃😳

🤗🤗🤗U know I really felt... what I wrote in this paragraph about How king life and how Rajat acted in the serial. Even though many time I felt they giving more space to Jodha instead of Jalal... They were trying to portrait because of Jodha ...Jalal became Akbar... I agree on the change in prospect view... they put Jodha in Action instead of Jalal in most of the tracks.

She will not only be mad at me but very upset for Shivani and Mirza. Unfortunately, out of all my queens, I feel Rukaiya is the only queen that could convince Mirza effectively without hurting him... The combination of her manipulative cunningness and depth of their relation with each other would have solved this issue with an ease. I love Rukaiya's attitude when it comes to politics and for sultanate, she lets no emotion drive on the surface, no matter what it

u exactly explained rukaiya ' s character with some subtractions 😉

I really feel too sad for Rukaiya... I always have a soft corner for her. The only time I truly hated her in Salim track... they have ruined the history and serial by degrading her character to extreme.

'Yah Allah it's been over five months I have not seen Rukaiya even once and didn't even talk about her, but even after that she is presiding my mind and giving me ache... Every time a spy informs me that she has accepted an ordinary lifestyle and is hiding in a small cocoon, it tears me apart. I know she loves me a lot, but her love comes in a bundle with her desire to gain power and authority over me... she wanted to possess me but the simple fact that she failed to understand is that our friendship has a precious space in my heart, I treasure both Jodha and Rukaiya equally, both stay in my heart with different values. Even after snatching her titles ... her power and all her luxuries from her, still she is tangled in my thoughts and heart... I still reminisce the days when her little hands used to caress my hair. When I was depressed and sad she was my strength... Warmness in her friendship kept my heart thriving in those bloody Warfield days... Treating her like an ordinary queen is too painful. Leaving her Alone when we all are celebrating here

This is the true fact of their relation u described ... that rukaiya is his childhood friend How can he discard it ... What she did is painful fr him and and punishment of her deed is also painful fr him that is called relations u remarkably put light on this matter too ... Seems like u gave a many check to the story as u covered many things in the chappy 👏👏

I knew many readers won't like my pov... and Jalal thinking about her but how can he discard her from his life. She was his best friend and first wife. They spent an era together. I am so happy to read your view. See I feel you read and understand me so well. Every scene what I try to display to readers you exactly get it. That is why I love to read UR view on chappy.

"Jodha, I knew you would react like this... Actually, your Masa has instructed me and given me a box of different fragrant oil bottles... It's part of the undisclosed norm of the wedding which only the bride knows." Moti clarified shyly.

Seductive body oil massage 😆 😆 😆

U know i used to wonder that in thatvage how many things womens do to please their husband 😳😆... It was only their work to do ...

In that era... I am sure royal women's job were to please their hubby... and when they so much competition... they have to put extra effort.

"Moti... listen, Shahenshah revealed last night that Queen Rukaiya used to put many exertions to entertain him sensually." Jodha, at last, opened up and divulged her

I think As jalal has already other wifes so this feeling of comparison could come in her mind ... Bt it is not only a comparison even ... As for sure she never did these type of things as these things r not her type and when ja mentioned about ruks ... Then comparison remorse disappointment zealously everything occurred to her that ' may be i m not that good ' ' mAy be he expects me to do so ' ... Though she knew that their relation is different from other he loves her and she loves him and in love we don't need to attract our love one its natural bt then how can she admit it to herself that she need not ... So She just need to hear it from him and when he said "I am already smitten by you and your one shy smile is enough to stimulate me." ...

her worries vanished though u did not mentioned it bt i took it as 😉

Also women is women ... We r like that ... Is not it ? 😉 😆

My next chapter starts with the dialog... Jalal repeats and makes her understand she doesn't need to jealous of anyone. He just wants her the way she is. I agree from Jodha's side she needs to hear from him time to time. And this long separation has created many doubts in herself. And she also knows her blunders but she was helpless when it comes to Jalal's life... she put everything behind and followed her instinct.

In calm and peaceful stillness, her mind dipped in the past I have viewed Queen Rukaiya two-times wearing a wrap like this in bath space and one time I even saw Jalal entered and accompanied her in the bath. I never even let him see me changing... My relation with Jalal has always been at a distance, I still feel awkward if he touches me in front of anyone and to the opposite Rukaiya behave with an ease... As soon as Jalal comes back from any journey, in front of everyone, she cuddles him passionately without any hesitancy and I always watched them enviously and waited for Jalal to come to me in my chamber.

Seems like u r in full mood of not leaving even a single notch to add in the story which we utterly wanted to see in the show 😃

I always noticed this hesitation in serial as well. I am glad U like it.

"Ahhh... Moti... Seems like suddenly a magic has stroked your fingers... Keep continuing what you are doing... it feels incredible..." her legs slightly stirred and a dim moan slipped once again Ahhh...'

Her sensual moan and natural reaction to his massage made Jalal eyes widened in shock, a suppressed chuckle sprinted down his lips.

😆 😆 😆 😆

When he grasped that her patience was on edge and she was about to open her eyes, his fingers quickly fondled under the silk and rubbed the nipple of her breast...

It was hillarious di ... U r too much 🤣 🤣 🤣

My Jalal is too naughty heheheh and I am not shy in my writing...

Now it was impossible for Jalal to resist his uncontrollable laugh. Oh, seduction and Jodha... impossible... Does she even know what seduction means?' he thought ...

😆 😆 😆

Dessert was very chocolatey di ... it was utterly romantic and sensually hot ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ... I enjoyed reading it

😳Awww...

Even though now i had read some of the stories still Such a beauty of ur romantic write ups that whenever i read it i felt something different in it than other stories ... 👏 Different not in the sense that they r very bold or hot these r common adjectives with any sensual writing what i think or i would say what i could contempelate is perhaps ... the craveness u filled in the situation 😳😛 ,,,,,, in the character is the beauty of ur romamtic writing along with a smooth furnishings of every scene 😛... Same Just Like u drafted the scene of Red Hot Silk beauty 😛with Grievously hungry lion 😉 ... it was stunning 😛😛😛... too intimate to handle ... The way he was teasing her " seduce me jodha " ... " seduce me jodha " made it more HOT ...

Actually This para... even clarified my confusion... why??? I knew readers love to read romantic scene I write but didn't know why? Yes, I don't show too much but create the atmosphere ... and craving. That make scene more tempting. In this scene... I forcefully hold my pen not to write too sensual but the way it was written I think readers felt too hot. Which I didn't want. Hehehe... but no complain everyone like it ...

At last Sorry di fr being this much late i tried my best bt could not make it early ... Bt i relished reading the update ... loved it Di 👏 👏 👏and excited to read next ... Update soon 😃

Love U Kancha and Thank U for cheering me up with such a lovely comment.