akdha ff:Trust and Love(Chapter-1 on pg 19) - Page 7

Originally posted by: sho123

yeah to sochna baki hai 🤣

Sochna baki nahi hai cutie pie... 😡
Shagu darling its FF.. 😆 😆

Sry for late reply cutie pie.. I was hell busy.. 😭 😭
Awesome prologue..
I just lovr the concept.. N this trust n love name is better.. 👏
U know first i was happy that ja n jo is married couple... 🤪
But after listening jo talk i broke down.. 😭
Jaruri that jo ko kisi ke sath pyarr karwana.. 😡
I felt likr crying.. 😭
KhabhiKhabhi jo n jo ko khush bhi dikha diya karo.. 😡

Noe come back to prologue..
It is marvelous.. 👏
Ja is excited to taking each step..but he dont one Storm is waiting for him 😉
At starting ja is happy jo is taking to express her love.. 😉
But aftet listening whole convo he breakdown.. 😭
Ja is shocked to see the blood n immediately came out from frozen state..

Pls update ASAP.. Cant wait to read further... 😆

Originally posted by: _Kamal_

Nice one.. 👏
LOved it❤️

thanks kamal

Originally posted by: _Kamal_

Cont soon

i will update today

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice prologue!!!
wel to chng d title is in ur hand only..
as its ur creation!!

thanks di
yup it is and thanks for reminding meme 😃

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Amazing prologue

Jalal is very happy but poor jo

Update soon buddy

Wanna know his reaction on the truth

thanks kavya
yup will reveal jas reaction in chappi

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Thanks for pm Sherry

😊

Originally posted by: swriter

Oyeee update Dede partner 😃

tujhe update chahea 😲

Originally posted by: avika444

Congratulations sherry

Wow yaar prologue sounds interesting

Jo is betrayed by someone and now she hate the words love and trust ..poor girl

Aww Heartbroken Jalal

What will be his reaction to this

Continue soon dear

Thanks for pm

thanks di
yup both r broken soul right now
u will know reaction today
i will update today

Originally posted by: CindyTruong

Congrats for new story... Sherry.
Interesting prologue...dear..
JaJo got married...
Jo loved someone and he betrayed Jo... she don't believe in love any more...
The bitter truth revealed on their first night...
Poor Ja...what will he do ?
Waiting next dear...update fast..
Thanks for pm...Sherry...

thanks Cindy
yup both r married and bitter truth of jo got betrayal revealed
u will know about jas action today
😉