akdha ff:Trust and Love(Chapter-1 on pg 19)

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First of all i am sorry i am changing this story name from 'Relationships' to 'Trust and Love'
Prologue
A newly wedded groom excitingly plus nervously heading towards his sorry their bed room towards his newly wedded wife,the groom is none other than our jalal and bride is of course none other than our jodha and The reason behind his excitement and nervousness is obliviously it's their first night
finally climbing all stairs jalal stands in front of their room but before he could take next step of opening the door he hears some voice plus sobs from their room
Jalal:Its jodhas voice but why is she crying;saying this jalal slowly and silently opens the door and sees jodha who talking someone on phone
Jodha:Mom!
Hearing mom word
Jalal:She must be missing her mom thats why called her and crying i should not disturb their convo;thinking this jalal about to leave but hearing jodhas next word jalal stop in his tracks
Jodha:U know na how much i love him i love him more than anything else in fact i love him more than u mom and u urself know that
Hearing this jalal feels most happy man of the world
Jalal:Jodha loves me so much i wish she expresses her feelings towards me this openly;thought in his mind with hopeful look towards his beloved wife
Jodha:No mom i cant forgive him and i dont think i can Trust and Love jalal ever after getting betrayal from the one who was my first love whom i love with my all heart;said between her crying
Hearing this jalal just stood on his spot like a statue
Jodha:And this u too very well knew even then u forced me to marry to jalal
I know mom u want to see me happy but my happiness died long ago and i dont think i have capability and right to get happy again and make someone else happy;said while holding the phone tightly
Hearing this jalal feels like ground got skip under his feet
Jodha:For me Trust and love r most poisoning words and i can't even like to hear them mom
Why mom why how i will go along with this marriage without Trust and Love;said while breaking on the floor with one hand holding phone near her heart and other hand on floor for support
Jalal who was whole time standing there like statue with one thought in mind 'Why she hide such big thing from me' but comes out of this unexpected trauma after hearing some breaking voice which was of jodhas bangle and when he adjust his vision which got blur with shocking news and mind numb he sees some blood oozing out of jodhas arm,from blood jalals sight got diverted to jodhas face especially on her pink cheeks which was fully covered with uncontrollable tears
Gaining some strength jalal start taking step towards jodha and hearing foot steps jodha who was continually crying just remain still with full fear face
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Now what will jalal reaction on this unexpected revelation of jodha

Will he continue his relationship with jodha after this or will break it

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So hows it guys
This ff is really special to me as its that story which first came in my mind but i always ignore it or should i say i never got courage to write it but finally i pen it and present to u
Lets see whats ur response on this
Do hit like and Do comment and tell me how's it
love u all


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yeah to sochna baki hai 🤣
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Originally posted by: sho123

yeah to sochna baki hai 🤣


tho sochona sherry
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soch rahi hu rukja 😉
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haaa 😃
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i will muskan
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Update his true Love, If u can!!
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Update his true Love, If u can!!</font>

i will payal in within next week pkaaa
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i will dikshu
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decided its a ss 😃

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