New Akdha FF:With Every HeartBeat....I Luv U Epilogue update on pg 35 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Nice chappy dear
Surprise song
Abdul noticed everything
Eagerly waiting for dance n confession too
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Nice chappy dear

Surprise song
Abdul noticed everything
Eagerly waiting for dance n confession too
Update soon buddy

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
nice chappy
JJ dancing together
interesting precap
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
wow
amazing
JJ trying to know each other
jalal flirting with Jo
Hehe
update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hi dear dis FF is really awesome...
Continue soon
Plzzz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Very nice chapter..
Jalal is very naughty
Haha
Wow jo ja dance partners..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Chapter 7


On competition day


Everything was ready , from Costume to dance , everyone was excited for their own performance , somewhere two evil people were making plan to spoil performance of jodha jalal


Sus : sanky , are you sure your plan will work out


Sanky : yes , if sanky makes plan it has to be work out , just wait n watch sus


7: 00pm


Jodha : sonu how m looking , temme frankly


Sonu : goshhh , jodha you asked same question from last half an hour , baby you looking just wow, you just see all boys will be blown out


Jodha : god sonu , I don't want to know what others think about me


Sonu : oh then yi you so worried just relax


Jodha to herself : sonu you wont understand , I don't care about others , but I want to look good when I stand with jalal, I want look best for him , jodha said to herself


Sonu : jodha m going now , you give last touch up and come in five mins ok, after my performance , yours and jodha will be , don't be late


Jodha: ok you go now



Near stage :


Sus : sanky when will start your plan


Sanky : just after Jodha and Jalal start dancing , my men will off the music , haha poor both , it would be fun to watch there faces


Sus : I want your plan to work , jalal should know , only with me he looks best said sus with her attitude look


Sanky in his devilish mind : I don't care about you sus , I just want my revenge , and ill use you as my prey, if I need


Back Stage


7:10pm


Jalal : sonu where is jodha , next is yours and abdul performance but she is no where to see


Sonu : jalal, chill , she will be coming , I informed her to come soon


Jalal : hmmm , hope she comes soon , m getting tensed


Sonu laughed out loudly


Jalal raised his left brow and asked : whats their to laugh sonu ?


Sonu : haha , jalal I never saw you like this , tensed n all and its first time m seeing you waiting for girl


Jalal : leave it you wont understand , anyways next is your performance , so go and rock it


Sonu hugged jalal and went on stage for her and abdul performance


Performance of sonu and abdul was on full fledge and on other side jalal was eagerly waiting for jodha


Jalal : where are you Jodha, please come fast soon , I don't want to miss this chance of dancing with you and get disqualified


Jalal was moving from here and there , looking towards back stage entry door


Sonu and abdul performance got end and both joined jalal


Abdul : jalal , what happened ?


Jalal : abdul , look still jodha did not , I hope she is alright


Abdul can see jalal Is worried for jodha


Abdul : jalal, calm down she will be on the way


Announcement for next performance was made and jodha and jalal's name was announcement


Sonu: jalal you go , ill bring jodha


Jalal : ok ok , get her fast


Jalal went towards stage , on other hand sanky gave signal to his men to be ready


Jalal was seeing audience and all were excited


Jalal turned towards back stage , and frozen at this place , he was just staring at jodha , she was looking damn gorgeous in her red gown , she was looking like princess , jalal's princess


Jalal went towards jodha , his eyes was fixed on jodha


Jodha saw jalal coming towards her , he was looking dashing, handsome, charming prince in his black suit , his capitative eyes were looking her


Jalal gave his hand to jodha and with shy jodha placed her hand on jalal's hand


Jalal brought jodha in center of stage


Jalal kept his one hand on jodha's shoulder and he put his one arm around jodha's waist , which gave jodha a butterfly flattering feeling in her


Jalal slowly whispered to jodha : this song I dedicate to you


Music began slowly


both slowly moved according to rhythm


Song :


From this moment on


And music stopped according sanky plan his men stopped music


All started to murmur , nervousness started to build in jodha , jalal hold her tightly and assuring her , its ok ,


Something happened , which jodha and jalal will remember throughout there life


Sonu abdul along with them other students started to sing song in chores


Jalal : see jodha all singing for us , now relax


Jalal can see jodha still nervous : jodha look at me


Jodha look into jalal eyes


Jalal : do you believe me


Jodha nodded yes


Jalal : then just dance with me


With this jodha gave a smile and holded jalal tightly


Even jalal joined others and started to sing


"From This Moment On"
(I do swear that I'll always be there.
I'd give anything and everything and I will always care.
Through weakness and strength, happiness and sorrow,
for better for worse, I will love you with
every beat of my heart.)


Jalal held jodha close, jodha body moulding into his as if they were made for each other. They were made for each other.they danced silently nothing but short gasps of breath were to be heard. Slowly Jodha moved her hands up to his neck and rested her head on Jalal's chest. Though Jodha's bare cheek was cool from the breeze through the window, yet Jalal's beating heart brought all the heat back to her cheeks.


From this moment life has begun
From this moment you are the one
Right beside you is where I belong
From this moment on


Jalal pulled her impossibly closer as two people slowly resembled one. Jodha's bare feet on top of his scruffy converses as he moved side to side.



Slowly pushing one of Jodha's loose hair behind her ear, Jalal smiled a genuine smile. Jodha was beautiful and she was his. Jodha looked up at him in embarrassment and awe, her face glistening in the moonlight and her eyes glittering with an emotion so intense, Jalal grab Jodha by the waist and lift Jodha straight up into the air.



From this moment I have been blessed
I live only for your happiness
And for your love I'd give my last breath
From this moment on


I give my hand to you with all my heart
Can't wait to live my life with you, can't wait to start
You and I will never be apart
My dreams came true because of you


Jalal slowly brought down on floor and slowly moved her away, Jodha looked up confused, but within a second Jalal twirled Jodha around like a doll and pushed his front into her back, still moving slowly side to side.


From this moment as long as I live

I will love you, I promise you this

There is nothing I wouldn't give

From this moment on

You're the reason I believe in love
And you're the answer to my prayers from up above
All we need is just the two of us
My dreams came true because of you


Jalal slowly brought his nose on the side of her long, feminine neck and grinned. She smelt so good. His smile against her skin, and strong arm across her upper shoulder as they danced with a melody no one else could hear. Afterall they were in complete harmony as they danced the night away.

From this moment as long as I live

I will love you, I promise you this
There is nothing I wouldn't give
From this moment I will love you as long as I live
From this moment on


Song come to an end

Both were looking deep into eachother , tightly embracing eachother with full of love , jalal once again twirled jodha and bent his knee and dip jodha into arms

And song ends

Edited by k2luvsparijat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice update dear
Jodhas dress was awesome
The dance description was too good
Suss and sanky's plan has backfired
The whole college helped them
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

amazing chappy dear
so beautiful
pics r awesome
all sang song for them
wanna see sus n sanky's reaction on this
update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


amazing chappy dear
so beautiful
pics r awesome
all sang song for them
wanna see sus n sanky's reaction on this
update soon buddy

thanks for pm

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