New Akdha FF:With Every HeartBeat....I Luv U Epilogue update on pg 35 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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fantastic chappy dear...
waiting 4 next update... pls continue soon..
Edited by sony23akdha - 9 years ago
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Chapter 3 :

Both Jalal And Jodha Went To Their Respective Hostel

Jodha After Completing Hostel Registration Formalities Headed Towards Her Room Which She Will Be Sharing With One More Girl

Jodha Knocked The Door Of Her Room

A Girl, Same Age Of Jodha , Drapped In Tunk Top And Shorts, Opened Door

Jodha : Hello, M Your New Roommate

Sonu : [Was looking Jodha From Top To Head ] Hi, M Soni And Whats Your Good name?

Jodha : Hi, M Jodha

Sonu : Welcome To Your Room, Oops Our Room

Jodha Placing Her Bag In Room, Roamed Around Her Room , Which Was Full Of Mess

Sonu : Who Was Behind Jodha , Said Sorry I Know Its Mess , But I LikeTo Be Like This , As M Kinda Lazy

Jodha : Smiling Towards Sony Said Don't Worry I'll Take Care Of Yours And My Thing Too, Ill Clear This Mess As I Like Cleanness

Sonu : Wooow You're An Darling, And You Are So Cute , Will Be You My Friend??

Jodha : Ofcourse Sony...

By This Both The Girls Became Friends

Morning 8:55am

Jodha : Sony We Will Get Late , Come On Walk Fast , We Have To Go And Meet Principal First , Then Have To Attend Class

Sonu : Oh God Jodha, We Are Actually Early You know..I Don't Like To Attend Classes, Atleast Not First Hour...Come On Will Go To Canteen

Jodha's Eye Was Wide Open, As Its First Day Of College And This Girl Planning To Bunk Class ...

Sonu : Hey, Yi You looking Me Like This , Am I looking like Ghost

Jodha : No You Are Not, But We Are Going To Class Not To Canteen

By This Jodha Pulled Sonu's Hand And Went Straight To Meet Principal

In Parking Area :

Jalal And Abdul Stepped Out From Jalal's Car

Jalal : Abdul You Go Ahead , ill Park The Car And Meet You In Class

Abdul : ok Jalal , Come Soon

After Parking His Car, Jalal Was Heading Towards Class , But Stopped In this Tracks, By Seeing Sussanne [ nickname sus ]Standing Infront of Him With Flirty Look

[ Sussanne Is The Jalal's Past ]

Sus : Hi Jalal Said Sussanne

JalaL : What The Hell Are You Doing Here ?

Sus : What If I Say, M following You Said Sus By Licking Her Lips

Jalal [ Giving Her A Disguisting A Look ] : Just Get Lost From Here

Sus : Get Lost ?? really...If You Forgot Sweetheart , Let Me Remind You , You Use Like Me Said Sus With Confident

Jalal : That Was In Past And It Was Mere An Attraction ,Thankfully I Got To Now Your Real Face, An Ugly Bitch Who Traps Boys To Fullfill Their Needs

Sus : Ugly Bitch ?? Oh God U Just Broke My Heart... M Not Ugly Bitch, M Just Too Sexy , U can Say Sexy Bitch Said Sus With Winking Towards Jalal

Jalal Looked Sus By killing Glare And Thought He Is Wasting His Time On A girl , Who Is not Worth Of His Time And Moved Towards Class Without Saying Anything

Sus Talking To her Self : I Will Bring You In My Arms Jalal And That's My Promise , Just Wait And Watch

Outside The Principal Room, Sonu Was Waiting For Jodha

Hi Jaan , What You Doing Outside Of Principal Room ?? Don't Temme Again You Did Some Naughty And Got Punishment , So You Are Here??

Sonu Turned Towards The voice

And Smiled Seeing A Man Standing Infront Of Her ,Who Was Looking Her With Full Of Love In His Eyes

Sonu : Haha , No No Abdul [ Sonu Is Abdul's Girlfriend And Jalal's Best Friend Cum Like Sister]I was Waiting For Jodha

Abdul : Who Is She ? As Far As I Know You Don't Have More friends Except Me And Jalal

Sonu : Jodha Is My New Friend And Roommate Too, And You Know What, She Will be In Our Class , Isn' That Interesting

Abdul : Sounds Like You Like Her ..Dont You ?

Sonu : Ofcourse I do...She Is Too Cute

Both Sonu And Abdul Were Talking About Jodha , But As Soon As They Saw Jalal Coming Towards Them With Annoyed Face , They Stopped Their Discussion

Jalal : Hi Sonu Said Jalal by Hugging Sonu

Sonu Breaking The Hug : Hi Jalal , What happen , You looked Annoyed

Jalal : Ahh , Nothing Like That

Abdul : Come On We Are Friends From Long Time , And We Know You Very Well, SO Just Spill It Out

Sonu : Yes , Abdul Is Right , And Don't You Dare , To Hide Anything From Us, O else Ill Punch Your Nose Hard Said Sonu by Showing fake Anger

Jalal Smiled Thinking God Blessed Him With Amazing Friends

Jalal : I Just met Sus In Parking Area, She Is So Disguisting

Sonu : What ..She , Here ?

Jalal : Yep In Same College

Abdul Worried About Jalal : Are You Ok Men ?

Jalal : Don't Worry Guys , M Ok , And You Know I Don't Have Any Hard Feelings Towards Her , It Was Just Attraction , Which Ended Soon

Abdul : Good , She Is Such An Bitch , She Use To Show Interest In You BY Her Innocence But Use To have Affair With Others Too

Sonu : God , If She Came Infront OF Me , I'll Just Slap Her Hard

Jalal : Ok Ok Just Chill , End Her Topic , Come On Lets Go To Class Said Jalal By Moving Backward And Turned Suddenly To Other Side And...

[ On Other Hand Jodha Was Coming Out OF Principal Room]

And Both Jumped With Eachother By Hitting Their Forehead With Eachother

Ouchhh... Both Said By Rubbing Their Own Forehead

Jalal Felt Voice Familiar , Exactly Like A Girl In Airport

Both Were Standing Close Each Other , Its Was Jalal , Who First Saw Jodha , Who Was Busy In Rubbing Her Forehead , Hairs Were Open , Few Hairs Were Kissing her Cheek , His eyes Move Down To Her Lips , Which Were Velvety Smooth Like Rose Petals , Ducked In Blue Shirt And Denim Was looking Adorable To him


Jalal Who Was Checking Out Jodha, Murmured Cute

Jodha Who Was Busy In Her Own World ,Heard Little Murmur ,That is When Her Eyes Spotted Jalal , Standing Close To Her , With His Well Build Tall Body , With Cute Dimple On Cheek , Her Eyes Moved To His Eyes

Both Were Looking Into Eachother Eyes , One Had Chocolate Brown Eyes , The Other Had Eyes Full filled with Innocence

Their Checking Out Session Broke By Sonu's Voice

Sonu : Hey Jodha , Meet My Boyfriend Abdul

Jodha : Hi Abdul
Abdul Too Greated Back Jodha

Sonu : And Meet My Bestie , Jalal , And Jalal This My New Friend Jodha

Both Looked To Each Other Again , And Something Flow Inside Their Heart, Which Is Now Unknown To Eachother

Jalal : Hi Jodha

Jodha : Hi And Sorry...

Jalal's Heart StartTo Beat Fast As He Heard Same Voice Again , Deep Capitative Voice , He Was Sure Now It Was Jodha Last Night In Airport , His Coffee Girl

Jalal : Sorry For What ?

Jodha : Because I Hit On Your Forehead

Jalal : No need To Be ..It Was My Mistake Too

Sonu : Jodha So Now You Not Getting Late ?

Jodha : Oops ..Yes Come , Lets Go To Class

Sonu : Abdul , Jalal ...Are You Both Joining Us ?

Abdul : No You Both Carry On , Will Join You Both In Class

Sonu : Ok Then , Will Move , Bye Jalal

Jodha Said Bye To Abdul And Looked Towards Jalal, Who Was Also Looking Her Said Bye Sonu Without Taking His Eyes Away from Jodha

Sonu Grabbed Jodha's Hand And Took Her Along With Her Towards Class

Jalal Was Still Looking Towards Jodha

Abdul : Jalal

Jalal Turned Towards Abdul

Abdul : Shall We Go ?

Jalal : Oh Yes

By This All Headed Towards Their Class

Edited by k2luvsparijat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
lovely chappy
except that idiot
pic is so cute n beautiful
update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

lovely chappy

except that idiot
pic is so cute n beautiful
update soon buddy

thanks for pm too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb chapter yar
I loved it
College life
Ssussane is so disgusting lady
Loved the first meet
Just by her voice he has recognized her
Lovely
Sonu and Abdul couple to cute
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update dear... ⭐️
Aww pic is beautiful
nd sus 🤢 Ugly bit**h 😡
waiting for next update.. plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update sis 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely chappy dear..
Hate sus..
Yup ja your coffee girl is jo..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4


9:30 Am in class


Both jalal and abdul entered class


All girls who were busy in their show off , now was busy in
drooling jalal, after all he was handsome greek and famous personality,
ignoring girls jalal and abdul moved towards there bench


Jalal saw jodha who was playing with her hairs, her eyes
twinkled and glittered , both girls where busy in talking


Both Jalal and abdul sat in next row , next to jodha and
sonu


Sonu first noticed abdul and jalal in next row


Sonu : Abdul , I don't want to attend first hour, its so
boring , all because of jodha , m here , sonu complained to abdul with pout


That is when jodha
turned towards her left and saw jalal and abdul sitting in next row


Abdul : wooow good baby , atleast now you will attend class
,on which sonu wrinkled her nose , this made jodha to smile


Jodha Smiled and Looked
towards jalal , who was looking her


Jalal to himself : Her smile is so mesmerizing , and
innocence in her eyes , anyone can drown in her beautifull eyes . ...god whats
wrong with you jalal, its just few mins back you saw her , and she already
captured your mind .. what if she is too like other girls..


Jalal Came Back To His Sense , when he heard few girls
talking about sanky ,


Sanky a rich spoil brat, who changes his girl friend like he
change clothes everyday , he hates jalal , because jalal is quite rich then him
and girls give all their attention to jalal , sanky had crush on sussanne { sus
} but sus never looked towards him and sanky knew about jalal and sus past


Sanky entered and headed towards jalal , having devilish
grin on his face


Sanky : hi jalal


But jalal just ignored , that is when sanky eyes fell on
jodha , who was next to jalal bench


Sanky : hello , beautifull , said sanky


Before Jodha Says Anything
, Sonu Interpreted and continued : just go away sanky . or else ill
broke your nose


Sanky : wooh Chill Lady , M just trying to talk with her said
sanky with this chessy grin



This was noticed by jodha


Sonu : no need , she is my friend and I know how you are , a
spoil brat


Sanky turning towards jodha ignoring sony killing glare
continued : whats Your Name, beautifull
, well M sanky


Jodha who looks innocent , is not dumb to understand what
sanky is trying to do


Jodha : I guess u deaf that you ignored my friend word ,
then let me tell you, ill gonna slap you
hard in front of whole class if you not going away right now


Jalal was Listening all conversation , and impressed with
jodha , oh my she looks innocent but she is a tigress from inside


Sanky shamelessly continued : then it will be privilege for
me , that you touched me


Jalal heard enough , and turned sanky towards him : how
about slap from my hand said jalal giving deadly glare to sanky


Sanky thought to leave now , he will take his revenge for
his insult later and left from there


Jalal sat back , and saw jodha , who was seeing him


Jodha slowly leaned towards jalal bench and whispered thank
you


Jalal : your welcome


And both turned their face towards there friend and smiled
inside


Afternoon 1:30 pm


Sonu jodha both entered canteen


Jalal and abdul were already in canteen


Abdul : sonu jodha here , abdul waved his hand


Both jodha and sonu went towards them


Sonu sat next to abdul and jodha in between sonu and jalal


Jalal : so guys what you all wanna have


Sonu : one pizza and coke


Abdul : me too


Jalal turned towards jodha and asked what you wanna order
jodha


Jodha felt goosebumps on her , her name in his husky voice
was so nice to hear


Jalal waved his fingers infront jodha and continued hey ,
where You lost


Jodha : ohh soooryyy...Ill have pasta


With little chit chat with their lunch all went back to
their class


Night 9: 00 pm in girls hostel


Sonu : Jodha m asking You last time , are you coming with me
for dj night


Jodha : no sonu , see still I need to unpack all my
stuff , you go and enjoy , next time
surely ill join you


Sonu : ok fine , give me your number , ill inform you if ill
be late


saving jodha's number , sonu left for dj night


10:30 pm


After completing all work, jodha lay down on her bed, thought
to check her phone before she sleep , So
started to check messages


she found sonu add
her in group , after going through the group , she got to know that sonu have
add her in group with jalal and abdul .


In Boys Hostel


Jalal after taking shower , placed himself on bed , his eyes
fell on his phone


Jalal saw his phone's light is blinking , so he checked his
phone and found out that sonu have add jodha in their group


Jalal : woow thank you sonu , because of you I got jodha's
number , hmmm but shall I send her good night message ...what if she took it
wrong ...now what shall I do


Suddenly a idea popped in jalal's mind and he send good
night in group message


In girls hostel


Jodha got message in group , she checked and a smile crept
on her face when she saw jalal's message in group


Jodha was in confusion should she send message or not


After thinking a lot , she dropped her idea because abdul
and sonu still didnt message , and she is new in group , so kept her cell aside
, and went in deep sleep


In boys hostel


Jalal was waiting for jodha's reply , has from
messenger reports he knew jodha saw his
message but still no reply , but yet he was happy as he can see her display pic
, so seeing one last time her pic , he to drift in sleep



Precap :


sanky : my dance
partner will be ...


Jodha will be my dance partner


Edited by k2luvsparijat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome chappy dear
All in same class
Jo is tigress
Sanky is stupid
Jalal should give him gift dear
Adding in group n now jalal got Jo's number
Felt goosebumps 😃
Jalal mesmerized by Jodha
Precap is interesting
Jo will be Jalal's partner in dance

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