New Akdha FF:With Every HeartBeat....I Luv U Epilogue update on pg 35 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Awesome chappy dear
All in same class
Jo is tigress
Sanky is stupid
Jalal should give him gift dear
Adding in group n now jalal got Jo's number
Felt goosebumps 😃
Jalal mesmerized by Jodha
Precap is interesting
Jo will be Jalal's partner in dance

Forgot to say u update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Fantastic chappy dear... ⭐️
sanky is grinit jantu 😡
sanky nd sus 😆 Made for each other 🤣
Aww jallu got jo's number 😳
precap-interesting 😛
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Sweet and lovely update
Tigress jo..nice
Loving their bond
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Chapter 5

In class:

Sonu was blabbering about dj night to jodha from last fifteen minutes , jodha noticed all girls looking towards door, she turned towards door and saw jalal and abdul were entering class

Jodha : Oh my god what will I do know , if in case jalal asked me , yi I didn't reply last night in group, hmmm but I don't think he will ask as we are not good friends yet ,, yeahh m right

Sonu : jodha were you lost , you not even listening to me complained sonu

Jodha : mm nothing , see abdul has come

Sonu : hi abdul , hi jalal

Jalal : Hi sonu said jalal looking towards Jodha

Abdul : Hi baby , And Hi jodha , I hope you like this college

Jodha : ofcourse I like

Sonu : Yi wont she like , after all she got good friend like me , right jodha , sonu self praised herself

Abdul : its other way baby , you are lucky atleast you made new friend , atleast now you will spare me and jalal said abdul by pulling out this tongue

Sonu made a angry pout

Jodha : No abdul , infact m lucky to get friends like you ,and looked towards jalal

Jalal : abdul now come on , come back to your seat

Sonu : jalal please you sit here ,with jodha , today I wanna sit with abdul pleaseee

Jodha : what

Sonu : jodha please , today one day adjust with jalal , please for my sake please please

How can jodha say no to sonu , so she agreed

Sonu shifted to jalal place

Jalal asked permission to jodha before he sit in sonu jalal : can I ?

Jodha who was feeling shy just nooded her head in agreement

Sonu And Abdul were engrossed in their own world

On other side both jodha and jalal were thinking what to talk

Its been five minutes and both were sitting silently , jalal thought to break this silence

Jalal : so you don't like me

Jodha : what ?

Jalal : yea, you don't like me , that is yi you didn't reply yesterday night in group

Jodha was in shock by hearing jalal words and continued : no , when did I say you , I don't like you

Jalal : so you like me , said jalal with flirty grin of his face

Jodha immediately replied : No

Jalal with fake sad : so you mean , you dislike me , you broke my heart said jalal by keeping poker face

Jodha with tensed : No I didn't mean that ,and started explaning yi she didn't reply , that she was new here , so she felt ackward to reply

Jalal : oh then you like me right with grin

And this was noticed by jodha this time

Jodha : u ... u playing with me said jodha with angry pout

Jalal : god jodha , you are so innocent , m just kidding with you

Jodha : you are very bad , I don't wanna talk with you and turned her face towards other side

Jalal felt bad because he made jodha angry

Jalal : ok ok M sorry

Jodha : No

JalaL : please...

Jodha turned back and saw jalal making innocent face and asking Sorry ,this bring smile on her

Jodha : ok ok , stop making faces like that , I forgive you

Jalal : thank god , you forgive me , if not , how ill flirt with you said jalal with naughtiness in his eyes , which was noticed by jodha

Jodha : jalal stop it

Before Jalal they continues , they heard murmer of other classmate who were telling teacher is about to come

During class before lunch break

After discussing about MBA subjects , professor made an announcement

So boys and girls there will be dance competition after three days , so choose your dancing partner and all have to participate , its mandatory for everyone

Lunch break in canteen

Sonu : wooow guys , dance competition , m so excited

Abdul : me too

Sonu : jalal Jodha you both soon choose your partners ok , god it will be so much fun , and jalal you have no worries , you will get your partner easily as all girls will be waiting for chance to dance with you

Jalal saw jodha was looking tensed

In class after lunch break

Many girls asked jalal to dance with them but he just smiled and said no

All were excited , and gossiping about which song they will dance , what to wear n what not

Jalal jodha sonu and abdul were talking with eachother

A girl entered wearing sexy frock till knee , all boys were drooling except few which includes jalal and abdul

Hi guys said girl which was none other than sus

All turned towards her

Jalal sonu and abdul were looking at her with angry and sanky who was sitting in last row saw jalal with his devilish grin

Sus moved towards backward by passing other student , her eyes fell on jalal

Sus with flirty look : hi jalal

Jalal turned his face to other side and jodha noticed sonu abdul jalal dislike this girl

Sus moved backwards and sat next to sanky as she knows once sanky had crush on her

During class :

Professor : so guys hope all have decide there partners , so one by one come with your partner and enrol there names with me

Line by line all enrolled there names , and only few were left out which include sanky sus , jodha and jalal

Professor : so only you four left out , and jalal how come you didn't get partner , as we know you are girls favourite said professor by laughing , ...ok anyways soon choose your partner and let me know

Jodha : oh god , first of all I don't want to dance with anyone , yi cant they keep solo dance ,,arghhh on top of that I don't want to dance with this idiot sanky and how can I ask jalal about dance, you know I feel something happens to me when ever he is near , god what to do know , jodha was murmuring to herself , which jalal noticed

Sanky thought to take revenge from jalal and jodha for his insult which they did yesterday,, oh my my , now what you will do jodha , ill gonna ask you to dance with me infront of everyone and you still don't have any partner . so poor you

Sanky : professor my partner will be

Before sanky continues

Jalal :jodha will be my partner , ill dance with her

All were shocked by this announcement specially jodha , she was in shock

Sanky again felt insulted but he maintain his poker face and thought in his mind , he will take his revenge next time

Professor : ok then jodha and jalal you both are in one team and sus and sanky , as you both don't have partner , so you both will dance with eachother , ok ... so all prepare well and all the best

Precap

Jalal and jodha moved along with rhythm and

Music stopped in between

And something happened
Edited by k2luvsparijat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Oh very nice precap waiting for their dance eagerly wow ... waiting for the update liked the scene where jala asks jodha if she likes her...awesome chappy in short
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome chappy dear
Jalal asked about chat
Poor jo got shock
Both are sitting together
Jo n jalal dancing
Precap is interesting
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Awesome chappy dear

Jalal asked about chat
Poor jo got shock
Both are sitting together
Jo n jalal dancing
Precap is interesting
Update soon buddy

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice update
Ja choose Jo as dance partner
Precap is interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
amazing story dear
read all 4 chapters in a go
JJ falling for each other
Jo will be Jalal's dance partner
Hehe
update asap
do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6 :


professor left class after making announcement with that all
other students too left except jalal and
jodha


jodha was seeing jalal with open wide eyes due to shock and
was thinking what happened few mins ago


jalal who blurted out infront of everyone that he will dance
with jodha now was in dilemma, that what he will answer to jodha as he didn't
ask before about dance to jodha


jalal moved towards jodha , stood infront of her : jodha ,
actually


Before jalal proceed with his talk , jodha interrupted


Jodha : oh my god jalal , thank you , you know I was in
confusion what to do and ofcourse I don't want to dance with sanky and started
to do little jump and was saying continuosly thank you , thank you


Seeing this jalal was surprised , jodha was looking like a
small kid , jumping in happiness , seeing all this jalal was smiling foolishly


Jodha stopped her little jumping session and saw jalal
smiling at her and she come to her sense


Jodha with clearing her throat : jalal , everyone left ,
even sonu and abdul will be waiting for us , come lets go


Jalal : ok come lets go


With this both went out and joined with sonu and abdul


Outside in campus area


Sonu: wow jalal jodha
you both will be dance partner , m so excited to watch you both dancing


Jalal : even me too said jalal while winking towards jodha ,
which was noticed about abdul


Sonu : and jodha how about you


Jodha hiding her shyness : yeah me too and glanced towards
jalal


Both were steeling glances and all was noticed abdul


Night 9:00pm


In girls hostel


Jodha : so sonu have you decide on which you and abdul are
going to dance


Sonu : ofcourse we did and how about you and jalal


Jodha : I dono


Sonu : what you mean by dono , don't temme you both still
didn't decide anything


To which jodha nooded no


Sonu : you both na , ok do a thing you ask jalal about it


Jodha : hmmm


Sonu : you know m damn excited for watching your and jalal dance
, you know yi


Jodha : yi


Sonu : because I never saw jalal dancing with any girl , you
are the first with whom he will dance saying this sonu engroosed in her work


Jodha was shocked surprised all together , thinking she is
first with whom jalal will dance made her cheek to turn in red


Jodha to herself : oh god yi m blushing , though I have
dance before too but it was quite long back , and about dance with jalal makes
me excited , instead of getiing angry on jalal , I was jumping happily , yi I
feel nice to be with him , god ill go mad , better I concentrate on my dance ,
but how to concentrate , I still dono on which song will perform , shall I ask
jalal , for this I need to messagehim , now what to do


After thinking a lot finally jodha decide to message jalal


In boys hostel :


Abdul was playing game in jalal phone , that is when jodha'
s message was received


With evil grin abdul said jalal , jodha messaged , m going
to read


Before abdul pretends to read jalal snatched his phone from
abdul saying abdul you have your own phone , play in that


Jalal checked his phone and opened jodha's message , it was
a hi from jodha


Chat conversation


Jalal : hello , you mesagged me I cant believe


Jodha immediately replied : woh.. actually I wanted to ask
about dance


Jalal : looks like someone is eager to dance with me


Jodha : shut up jalal , stop flirting , and be serious


Jalal : but I like to flirt with you ..hihi


Jodha : jalal... with angry emoji replied jodha


Jalal : ok ok ill stop now , say me what you wanna ask


Jodha :hmmm did you think on which song we will perform


Jalal had one song in his mind but he didn't want to
reveal it before to jodha : don't worry
about song , ill look after it


Jodha : ok then tomorrow will practice


Jalal ; yep sure


Jodha : ok then bye , good night


Jalal ; bye good night




Next day


after completing all
classes , jodha and jalal were dancing
one of college room and sonu and abdul in other room


Jodha and jalal were checking dance steps in various website
, jalal still didn't reveal about song to jodha by giving reason it's a
surprise


Jalal ; jodha , we have only few hours , come lets start
practice


Jodha : hmmm ok


Jalal stood up and gave his hand to jodha


Jodha was nervous , feeling shy to place her hand on jalal's
hand which jalal noticed


Jalal ; jodha


Jodha : hmmm


Jalal : I know we just barely know eachother and doing a
close dance is not easy , so yi not first we know each other little while
dancing


Jodha liked jalal idea and started to be comfortable and
replied ok jalal


Jalal took jodha's
hand in his hand which gave both a different feeling , ignoring that , jalal
brought jodha in center


Jalal : so jodha temme about yourself where are you from
saying this jalal twirled jodha


Jodha : from india and you


Jalal brought jodha again to same place and answered : same
, from india but me with my family shifted to London five years back


Jalal placed jodha's
hand on his shoulder and placed his hand on shoulder and both started to
talk about eachother


sometime they danced, sometime theywere talking about
themselves, in between jalal flirt with jodha , they were enjoying
eachother company , which brought them close to eachother , but there
happy moments was interrupted by sony and abdul arrival


sonu : guys time to go


both jalal and jodha moved away from eachother


Abdul : come on guys , will practice in hostel by seeing
videos , its closing time of college


Both jalal and jodha nooded


Abdul and sonu went towards gate behind them jodha and jalal
were walking


Jalal : its was nice time with you


Jodha shyly replied : same here


Jalal came close to jodha and said in her ears :bye


Before jodha replied sonu pulled her hand and moved ahead as
they crossed college gate


Jodha turned back and with her eye expression
said bye looking into jalal eyes and went away with sonu


Same Precap😛
Edited by k2luvsparijat - 9 years ago

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