Akdha ff - her saviour chapter 4 updated on pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii guys!! M here with ch 2 of her savior...
Thanks to all who have liked n commented ...
Chapter 2
After jalal went to office jodha n hamida were talking
Hamida-how was breakfast beta?
Jo-yummy maa...n after that the chocolate was awesome
Hamida smiles
Ha- beta who were there in your family?
Jo- only mom n dad
Ha- ohh what were there names? N what is your full name?
Jodha starts sweating
Hamida noticed her uneasiness so she thought to avoid this topic
Ha-jodha leave all this..you want to buy cloths na so will you go for shopping today?
Jo happily replied-ya ya sure ma
Yeah m so excited ..woahhh n then she starts jumping
Hamida smiles seeing her childish behavior

In the evening
Hamida was talking to jalal on phone
Ha-ya jalal i. will take bodyguards with me...do one thing na you also join us
Ja-no ammi I have imp. Meeting today
Ha-ok OK
Bye take care
Then she turned n saw jodha coming from her room ..
She was wearing crop top with plazo n was eating her chocolate
She was as usual looking cute
Jo- ammi how I m looking?
Ha-like an angel
Jo-thanku n you r looking like a rose
Hamida smiles
Hamida then take out one more chocolate n give it to Jo
Jo-one more...yeahhh
Luv uhh ammi
Hamida smiles
Ha- let's go beta
Jo nods
Then they both entered the car
After some time
They reach the mall n came out of the car n 4 bodyguards were following them
Ha-so beta let's go to dress section
Jo -OK
Then the went to the shop
Salesman-ma'am what type of cloths you want
Jo-toppers of every type ,plazo,Capri, shorts, etc
Salesman- OK ma'am
Then he shows various designs of cloths
Jo-ammi see na m so confused... They all are so nice.
Hamida-bhaiya pack all of them
Jo was shocked
Jo-ammi...it will be very costly...
Hamida-you r like my daughter only
So I can do this for you
Ji become emotional n hugs her
She remember something
Hamida noticed something
Ha to salesman- plzz show that dress
Salesman then bring it
It was a Saree of net...it wan a combo of royal blue n silver color
Ha- Jo it will look nice on you
Jo -but I don't know how to wear it
Ha- I am there na.
Bhaiya pack this also
Then hamida n Jo buy few shirts for jalal also
Ha-now where we should go
Jo-ammi m hungry... let's go tk restaurant
Ha-ok
Then they came out n move towards restaurant
They were talking when suddenly Jo noticed someone
Jo was Now sweating
She got terrified
She was shivering
Jo hides behind hamida
Ha-what happened beta
Jo-a..a.ammi can we go back to home
Ha-ya sure beta but first have something uhh r hungry na
Then she saw that man coming towards them n then she fainted
When she was about to touch the ground jalal hold her
Then he lift her
Ja-what happened ammijaan
Ha-don't know beta we were talking when suddenly Jo started behaving strangely ..it seems like she saw someone... BTW your meeting??
Ja-it got canceled so I thought to join you...let's go home
I will call Doctor
Then they went back to home
He take her to his room
He make her ly on his bed
Mr. Sharma arrives
Dr.sharma check jodha
Ja-how is she now
Dr.sharma -Mr. Khan it seems like she saw something very shocking ...she is still in shock... Due to fear she has fever too
Mr.khan-ya alaah!!when will she get fine
Dr.sharma-most probably tomorrow
But you have to take care of her
N yes one more thing if she sees these types of things again it could be dangerous for her
Ja-thank you doctor
Then he left
Hamida -jalal beta I will stay with Jo
Ja-no ammijaan ..you r also not well..I Will be with her
Ha-but.
Ja-no more arguments
HA-ok take care
Then she left
Jalal changes into casuals
Ja caresses Jo's forehead n says-kiddo plzz get well soon...n kisses her forehead
he brought a bowl of cold water n cloth
Haan aa...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

He places the cold cloth on her forehead
N then replaced it with another



Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage (x2)

He caresses her head n kisses her forehead

Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye

Seeing her condition a tear drop fall from his eyes

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

He then place the cold cloth on her head

Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Hum the dhoondhte jisey wo kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki sar-zameen ban gaye

He then move towards the couch n think-what is bothering my kiddo

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

O.. aa...

He then drifts to deep sleep

In morning
Jo woke up n saw jalal coming towards her with a tray
Ja-good morning kiddo
Jo-good morning Mr Kane
Ja-call me jalal only
Jo-ok
Ja-how r uhh feeling now?
Jo-m alright but sometimes situations r not right...hehehe
Ja-leave all this n have your breakfast
Jo nods. N starts eating her breakfast
Then jalal gives hers chocolate n she shout so yeahhh
She starts eating her chocolate
Jalal's POV
I know kiddo something is bothering uhh n uhh r trying to hide it from us
But I swear whoever is responsible for your condition I will not leave him
Jalal's POV. End
Jo n ja comes downstairs
Ha-how r uhh now my child
Jo-fine ammi
Ja-thank god uhh r fine now
Jo smiles
Then jalal went to office
N Jo n hamida chat
At office-
Jalal calls his cabin
Alisha enter
Jalal tell hersecretary to send Abdul to his cabin
Alisha-yes sir
(Abdul is jalal's bestie n works In his company)
Abdul enters his cabin
Abdul- good morning jalal
Ja-good morning Abdul
Ab-why have you called me?anything serious?
Ja-ya Abdul..Abdul you have contacts in world's best investigation company
Ab-yaa but why?
Ja-abdul I want a favor from uhh
Ab-uhh just order Bhai
Ja-i will give you photo of a girl..her name is jodha ..I want every details about her...from the time she is born till now every details...
Ab-consider it done...you just mail me her photo n within two days all her details will be in front of you
Ja-thanks Bhai
Ab- anything for you
Then abdul left
Jalal's POV.
Now I will be able to solve my Kiddo's problems
Ja's POV. End
Later that night he reached his mansion
Ja-how is Jo's health now ammijaan
Ha-its good n now she is full of energy
Ja smiles
Then he started moving towards his room
Ha-wait beta
Ja-yes ammijaan
Ha-beta today Jo is sleeping in your room..she said that your bed is very soft
Ja-she really very childish
Hamida smiles
Ha-don't worry I will sleep in guest room
Then he went to his room n saw Jo sleeping peacefully
He caresses her head
He says-2 more days kiddo ..after then all your misery will be vanished..n I promise from now on there will be only happiness in your life
Then kissed her forehead n left
Then he also sleep having many questions in his mind
Precap-jodha missing
Done...
Guys I have tried song first time
So plzz tell how is it
N one more thing I m thinking to start season 2 of hardships of love
So what uhh guys think
Luv uhh all







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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
lovely concept and enjoyed reading it.
apt song 😊
Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute update... 😊
So Jalal is already attracted towards our kiddish JO... 😳
Hope he solves the mistery soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful yar
Bas jaldi SE jodha ki prblm kya hai huma batao
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely chapter dear...
Thxccc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
waiting for next update
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute update!
hope this mystery gets solved soon!
thanx for hte pm!😃
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute update...
jalal nd hamida r so worried for jodha...
jodha is so cute kiddo...
good song...
update soon... nd thanks for pm tanu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow nyc chappy dr
Jo is really kiddo
Precap twist
Updateee sooon

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