Akdha ff - her saviour chapter 4 updated on pg 14

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Superb strt tanu...
Ja saved Jo frm goons...n evn tk her to his house.
hamida is soo nice sweet womn...
Jo is soo sweet n innocent n Ja n hamida loving her innocence...
btw y tht man bhind Jo...
waiting fr nxt
thannk u fr pm

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

It's seriously very cute and lively start...
Looking forward to read more...
Keep updating regularly!!! 😛

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome update sis 😃
So jallu bhai saved jo didi from the goons and from now on wards she will live with him

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

That was a nice start👏
Jo loses her family and thus enters Ja's life after his powerpack performance
Hamida makes her agree to stay with them. All good.
Liked Ja's line "Bye Miss Kiddos" 😆
Can just assume a girl whose mouth is full with chocolate and trying to say Bye. So innocent and cute😃

Do PM me then next time you update. Thanks for this lovely story. Would await your next chappy eagerly

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Heyy tanu 🤗 first of all congo for new story ..
Update was just superb..
Jo was running away in order to save herself from goons when jalal saw her and saved her..
She was not in good condition so her brought her to his house..
Hamida met her and assured that she is safe and from now on she would live with them..
Jalal was finding her very cute when she was nibbling her chocolate..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

amazing chappi
Jalal saved Jo
aww
she is so cute
kiddo
Hehe
update asap

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

cute update tanu...

jo was saved by jalal.. nd she is so innocent ..

update soon nd thanks for pm...

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Sry for late rply...
Awesome chappy...
I loved it...
Wooo my jalu saved his life(jo)..
Jo is leaving with ja .. Wo bhi lifetime..
Who is that mysterious man??