Akdha ff - her saviour chapter 4 updated on pg 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

Jalal woke up n goes to Jo's room to wake her up
He entered the room n saw Jo sleeping peacefully with one hand on her belly n one on the pillow
He smiles seeing her
Jalal move towards her n says wake up kiddo...
Jodha-ammi let me sleep na
Ja -what?? M not your ammi m jalal
Jo then open her one eye n saw jalal staring at her
She then rub her eyes n sit
Jo-good morning
Ja-good morning... How was your sleep on your new bed n then he winks
Jo -hmm its fine
Let's go downstairs... M hungry
Ja smiles seeing her antics n then they both moved downstairs
They both sat on their chairs
Jo-ammi what is in breakfast?
Ha-alloo k parathe
Jo-ohh yummy
Then she starts eating her breakfast
After she complete the breakfast hamida gave her one chocolate
Jo-one more ammi...but I already have
But then also I will eat this.. Hehehe.
Ja smiles
Ja-ammi I wanna tell you something that today I have to go for a party
Ha-ohhh...take jodha with uhh...she will feel better
Jo-wow party... I will come
Ja-ok so be ready at 7 sharp
Jo- OK
Ja then goes to his room n get ready
He then leaves for office
Then hamida starts cleaning the table
Ha-jo beta uhh r free na so will uhh see our albums
Jo-sure ammi
Then hamida brings the photo album
They start seeing the album
Hamida then showed her their family photo
Jodha noticed a person
Jo- ammi who is this
Ammi-he is my husband beta
Jo-ohh but now where is he
Ammi-beta he died because of cancer
Jo-m so sorry ammi
Ammi-its OK beta
Then in one picture jalal was playing guitar
Jo- wow jalal know how to play guitar
Ammi-yaa beta...but now due to workload he does not play it anymore
Jo- ohhh but one day he will play
Ha smiles
Then the day passed like this
Jo-ammi what should I wear
Ha-beta wear the Saree which we brought yesterday
Jo- but I don't know how to wear it
Ha- m here na
Then hamida helped her
Jodha was ready in royal blue n cream Saree
Jo have made a puff n ready of her hairs were set free
She applied kohlo in her eyes
She was looking the goddess of beauty
Ha-one more thing
Then she goes n come back in 5 minutes
She brought a pair of diamond earings ...
Then she gave it to Jo
Jo-ammi no need of this ...
Ha-beta wear it for me
How can jodha deny
Then she wear it
Jo-how I m looking
Ha-like a royal princess
Then jodha laughs
They came downstairs
They saw jalal coming
He was already ready
He had wore blur coat n pant with white shirt
Jo-are uhh had wore something else in morning
Ja-i have changed in office
Jo -ohh
Ja- let's move
Then they both entered in the car n move towards their destination
Jalal on the FM
Janam janam from dilwale plays
After few minutes
They reached the venue
Jalal came outside n open the door for jodha
Then they both move inside the hotel
Ja meets an old man
Ja-hello Mr.arora
Mr.arora-hello young mam
Is she your fianc?
Ja turn n noticed that he was talking about Jo
Ja-no no she is our guest ...
Then jalal move towards other clients
Jo was getting bored
She then saw a person
Jo-no no this can't happen
God save me
Jo starts sweating
She move towards jalal
Jo-jalal I wanna go home
Ja- kiddo I can't leave the party
Wait for sometime
Jo was sweating badly
She saw the person moving towards her
Then she runs from there n the man follows her
Ja-mr.arora now I should leave
Mr.arora-ok
Then he starts searching Jo
Ja-oh god where is she
He was unable to find her
Then
He goes out n call her
She was not picking
Ja-yaa alah!! She was my responsibility... Where is she
Then he fall on his knees n starts crying
Ja-where r uhh kiddo
Come back...I have to find her n he calls the sp
Then he goes back to his mansion
He enters
Ha-jalal uhh come back...where is Jo?
Ja starts crying
Ha-j..jalal Jo is alright na
Ja then narrates whole story to her
Ha starts crying n hold his collar
Ha-jalal I want my daughter right now
Go from here n find her
Ja-ammi I have already called sp
He is coming here n then we will go together
Ha cries n goes n prays for Jo's safety
Then ja goes to search Jo
At 5 am
Jalal comes back
Ja-where r uhh Jo
I have searched everywhere
Plzz come back
Ha comes
Ja fold his hands n say-m a loser
I am not able to find her
Then she hugs him to console him
Precap-truth unveils

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
awesome chappy tanya
jalal's cute little kiddo n hamida's daughter
precap is interesting
.eagerly waiting for truth
i think he's either surya or adham
update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

awesome chappy tanya

jalal's cute little kiddo n hamida's daughter
precap is interesting
.eagerly waiting for truth
i think he's either surya or adham
update soon buddy


thanks for pm
eshalli thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Awesome chapter dear...
Continue soon
Thxccc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Superb chapter n thnxx for pm dr n update nxt asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Wonderful chappy Tanya
Jo ldressed in beautiful saree n diamond earrings
JoJa go to party
N then Jo is lost Ja trying to find her
His Kiddo's is missing and for her he is crying alongwith Hamida...
Eager to know why did Jo panic n run off from stranger and who is he
Post soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
awesome update
eagerly waiting for next update
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Awesome chappy dear 😳
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Again suspense mein chod diya... 😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Cute update tanu...
Jo was so cute nd jalal nd hanida love her a lot...
Ooh god jo is missing nw hope jalal find her soon...
Update soon...
Nd thansk for pm...

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