Originally posted by: deepa111
hey di, howz u ?
its really long i hv read an akdha story ..as i m very less active...
bt really happy to read such a long update...
update is fabulous..no need to say how u wrote every emotion so beautifully after all we all know ..what say frnds😉
well thetre r so many things happen in this update..
firstly how jalal heartbroken after listening radha's letter😭well i dont know whast to say..
both r heartbroken ..nd head overheels in love with each other bt the circumstances not letting thm to get close nd sought their differences n seems like its not going to b easy too.
ja fighting battle between his heart n mind nd he cant able to conclude what he should do or not .becoz one thing is sure that he cant love jo alot nd he is not going to let her go bt after readingthe letter he hving second thoughts..
ja getting every min info about radha nd amused to know her reply to adham..
he surely guessed that adham's intentions to harm whichhe will not going to happen to her...
ja n abdul convo part was really gud nd fun too..
abdul loves reva 😳nd that from past 5 yrs..grt..
although he not confessed his feelings yet he always look after her ..
ja surely hurt that his best buudy not confront with him bt he is happy to know about him..nd give ultimatum to confess his love to reva soon..
surya nd jo convo reveals so many things..
bt i wonder that if jo knowsthat it was adham behind moti's condition then why she hate him so much nd accuse him ..as far as i think his motive to capture rajputana will surely not b the only reason of her hatred..
even i too think that this acharya is also doubt his intentions using jodha for this misssion nd that in that way,,why he hv to choose raha to win ja trust,his heart nd get their secrets info..let see whats the mystery..
ja will surely shattered knowing that jo betrayed his trust when he found about the missing decree nd her motives to know about their weapons hide out nd most importanly her real idntity..
ja felt so much jealous nd furious to see thm so lcose nd seeing surya kissing jo's forehead add fuel to fire..he cant think straight now..
again both put their feelings in arguemnt forgetting their surroundings..
well i hate to admit to say bt i really hate ja pointing on radha's character even if his anger,frustration,hurt or whatever ..
he really not a way to compehend his anger nd heart break in this way..
suryaa realised that both ja ja madly love each other and their pain too bt he cant let jo to put herself in danger as he know ja may b love her bt after revealtion of truth can bring a strom which will ruined everything...
the ghazal was so soo beautiful nd perfectly defining the feelings ...tansen too indirectly tried to point out their feelings which they r hiding bt nevertheless it only upto thm to whther take the hint
pinaz tried to seduce ja bt ja lost in radha's thougts so much that he only think of radha in everything...
he cant able to get close to anyone as his heart n mind only lost i n radha..
bt whyy radha comes to meet him now????
waiting to know..
uppdate soon..
omg..after a long time i hv commented such a long commnt😆
bt i cant stop writing when it comes to ur stories😆..
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