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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Hi didu

It has been long tym since i came to forum
I read last two chappies as usual ur rocking

How R U doing my dear😛

i really loved the way u carried the whole emotions of both jalal and jodha
the fight between jalal's heart and mind

Oh... really...many readers liked it too...

hope he soon hears what his heart says

He knows he has fallen in love but his hands are tied.

incase of jo she is also suffering the same but her betrayal towards jalal was really unexpected since jalal trusts her so much

I agree it was unexpected and sudden but she is here on mission so she has to follow the mission

He must be devasted when he learns the truth but i think he will never let his radha to be away frm him he cannot live without her

I agree to that he can't live without her.
Surya's emotion his doubts jelosy were penned down beautifully
and over all its an osomatic update didu
loved it to the core

Awww... I am glad to read lovely words of your comment
and the final part whr both were abt to hav convo i'm eagerly waiting fr nxt update didu
Thnks fr this wonderful update and pm
And yes I too watch chandra nandhini...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa111

hey di, howz u ?

its really long i hv read an akdha story ..as i m very less active...
bt really happy to read such a long update...

update is fabulous..no need to say how u wrote every emotion so beautifully after all we all know ..what say frnds😉
well thetre r so many things happen in this update..
firstly how jalal heartbroken after listening radha's letter😭well i dont know whast to say..
both r heartbroken ..nd head overheels in love with each other bt the circumstances not letting thm to get close nd sought their differences n seems like its not going to b easy too.

ja fighting battle between his heart n mind nd he cant able to conclude what he should do or not .becoz one thing is sure that he cant love jo alot nd he is not going to let her go bt after readingthe letter he hving second thoughts..

ja getting every min info about radha nd amused to know her reply to adham..
he surely guessed that adham's intentions to harm whichhe will not going to happen to her...

ja n abdul convo part was really gud nd fun too..
abdul loves reva 😳nd that from past 5 yrs..grt..
although he not confessed his feelings yet he always look after her ..
ja surely hurt that his best buudy not confront with him bt he is happy to know about him..nd give ultimatum to confess his love to reva soon..

surya nd jo convo reveals so many things..
bt i wonder that if jo knowsthat it was adham behind moti's condition then why she hate him so much nd accuse him ..as far as i think his motive to capture rajputana will surely not b the only reason of her hatred..
even i too think that this acharya is also doubt his intentions using jodha for this misssion nd that in that way,,why he hv to choose raha to win ja trust,his heart nd get their secrets info..let see whats the mystery..

ja will surely shattered knowing that jo betrayed his trust when he found about the missing decree nd her motives to know about their weapons hide out nd most importanly her real idntity..

ja felt so much jealous nd furious to see thm so lcose nd seeing surya kissing jo's forehead add fuel to fire..he cant think straight now..

again both put their feelings in arguemnt forgetting their surroundings..
well i hate to admit to say bt i really hate ja pointing on radha's character even if his anger,frustration,hurt or whatever ..
he really not a way to compehend his anger nd heart break in this way..
suryaa realised that both ja ja madly love each other and their pain too bt he cant let jo to put herself in danger as he know ja may b love her bt after revealtion of truth can bring a strom which will ruined everything...


the ghazal was so soo beautiful nd perfectly defining the feelings ...tansen too indirectly tried to point out their feelings which they r hiding bt nevertheless it only upto thm to whther take the hint

pinaz tried to seduce ja bt ja lost in radha's thougts so much that he only think of radha in everything...
he cant able to get close to anyone as his heart n mind only lost i n radha..

bt whyy radha comes to meet him now????
waiting to know..
uppdate soon..


omg..after a long time i hv commented such a long commnt😆
bt i cant stop writing when it comes to ur stories😆..



Deepu ... I will reply tomorrow.. Love U ... loved your comment😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Bhaviniii You're Backkk!!!! Missed you so muchhh 🤗
Getting Your PM is such an awesome Gift. Thank you so muchhh for this wonderful Tohfa my Love. 🤗 🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lionsroar

Bhaviniii You're Backkk!!!! Missed you so muchhh 🤗
Getting Your PM is such an awesome Gift. Thank you so muchhh for this wonderful Tohfa my Love. 🤗 🥳

hope u enjoy the chapter :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Deepu ... I will reply tomorrow.. Love U ... loved your comment😃

Edited by shahbhavini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


I want to know the but soon, so you better update soon di . 😆
And yep , I'm a combo of human and devil 😆
About motherland and love...Idk , I'm confused 😕
My unrealistic dreams are growing ...like I'm imagining myself as Radha and zayn as Jalal and how we'll both get married blah blah 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priyadogra

This story is fantastic and i love its concept very much


Thank U so much for encouraging comment😃


I love ur way of writting as ur way of depicting emotions is wonderful


When it comes to emotion... I feel I don't have to work hard, my mind flies with words and feelings... sometime I do over in emotions😆

I really not able to understand what jodha is upto as one side she claims of killing jalal and on other hand she love him so much

It's a complicated situation, she fall in for the persona she should hate... One side she wants to take revenge and wants to save her land and other side when he is near her, her heart becomes to weak and feeble... She herself too confuse between complicated emotions.

I really lookIng forward for the twists and turns that would lead to joja milan
PLS TRY TO UPDATE UR BOTH THE STORIES SOON AND PM ME TOO IF U COULD PLS

Sure... there are many twist and turn in this story but focal point will be the LOVE ...


I will definatly pm next time when I update.😃 Thank U so much😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harini1482002



I want to know the but soon, so you better update soon di . 😆
And yep , I'm a combo of human and devil 😆
About motherland and love...Idk , I'm confused 😕
My unrealistic dreams are growing ...like I'm imagining myself as Radha and zayn as Jalal and how we'll both get married blah blah 🤣



Myself as Radha😲😆

Even while Reading???? in hot scene too😆


U FAN OF ZAYN MALIK😛
Edited by shahbhavini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

woah
what's Jalal planning to do
had he really thought of letting go
well
its better for him if he does so
or else Jo will not be a good thing for his new born heart

I agree with you he should but can he? His heart will allow him...



and what's up with this Jo
she very well knows she is in love with Jalal
she won't be able to kill him
or even if she does..
she would die of guilt

Sometime ... situation becomes so complicated that it's not easy to pick the correct way. And as far as I remember.. you can see pretty clearly what is stopping Radha... and why???😉


hope she understands him soon
& change her betrayal plan
can't see them destroying themselves & each other..

Betrayal is never easy... lets see... will she able to???

they even forgot of others presence when taunting each other


such an emotional chappi
update asap diii

I have started to work on chapter😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

and yeah
congrats for the business...
🤗

Thanks😳

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