RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 7

Bhavuben...👏 Sorry for not commenting on last few chapters. Last three chapters you have outdone yourself. You deserve a big hug and appreciation from all the readers. Since yesterday, I am reading your RKG. If you compare yourself from the first chapter of IS IT on Facebook and this, it appears like two different people have written. Actually, I thought RKG chapter 12 was your best of all... then I read chapter 13 and then 14. Every chapter you have surprised me with your writing. Bhavuben Truth and dare time... I loved your Is It story more than your writing. I enjoyed the way you wrote emotions and variety of the tracks, that was the main reason I was hooked on Is It but now I am a fan of your writing too. You know how much reading I do and usually, I prefer to read well-known writer books. Whose writing is polished and intriguing? Now this chapter seriously you have outdone yourself. You well deserve a big hug. I love this story so much that I requested once that if you let me continue when you took a long break. I think I was stupid to even ask you. What you have done in last few chapters, I can't even imagine coming close.

Best of all in this chapter: Jalal and Hamida scene. The way you have sketched Hamida's character, she looked royal and graceful from every angle. The way she dominates Jalal. I can't believe it and Jalal is not even an inch less, he kept holding his weapon of silence and eventually burst with harsh words. I never thought you would curve story like this and connect to that scene. Just super.

One side Radha is annoyed and going crazy waiting not knowing what Jalal is going through she decided to defy. And another side Jalal is blaming her for his sudden outburst at Hamida. He is already the brink of losing his mind, he pulled Jodha in his chamber. My god he was so angry. I pictured Rajat. I wish to see Rajat playing that scene. And big mistake Radha did, not understanding his temper she hurt him with harsh words. I can't believe while reading in the next second he almost killed her. (Bhavuben this is call writing.) Readers feel every emotion in every line. Not even for second my concentration moved. I was stuck on your chapter.

I will read more in detail rest.

But overall this chapter I feel story moved in better speed. Hamida and Jalal on a direct conversation about Radha. Jalal has doubt on Jodha. Gradually Jalal loves deepening for Radha. His obsession turning into love but still he is not ready to admit in front of Radha. At least he talked to himself that he will not hurt her. His action will prove his love. I was surprised when Jalal shared by mistake, his and Hamida fight, that was another progress. Jalal thinking about marrying Radha also part of progressing. Only from Radha's side story still at the same stage. Surya has already come, so probably next chapter it will move further with their plan. I DON'T THINK STORY IS MOVING IN SLOW SPEED. I just read a few ppl comment and requesting to move faster, but I feel will not enjoy story moving fast. Let's say Jalal comes to know next chapter that she is here on a mission. I don't think he will be able to forgive her at this stage. I want her to continue her mission first then he comes to know that is more fun. I want to see him real lion king.

My most fav character Jalal and Jalal. His anger fascinates me. His obsession makes me crazy. He is powerful and kingly. I can't wait for Radha to submit him. I think lately I am dreaming too much.

This chapter I do not want you to change even a word. Perfect revolved of emotions. You are a superb writer. LOVE YOU BHAVUBEN. I will write more about Jodha and Jalal conversation in next comment. I don't want to bore you, last time when we talked you whined for not commenting and now, this time, you will scream for long boring comment.

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

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Originally posted by: JalalLovesJodha

Bhavuben...👏 Sorry for not commenting on last few chapters. Last three chapters you have outdone yourself. You deserve a big hug and appreciation from all the readers. Since yesterday, I am reading your RKG. If you compare yourself from the first chapter of IS IT on Facebook and this, it appears like two different people have written. Actually, I thought RKG chapter 12 was your best of all... then I read chapter 13 and then 14. Every chapter you have surprised me with your writing. Bhavuben Truth and dare time... I loved your Is It story more than your writing. I enjoyed the way you wrote emotions and variety of the tracks, that was the main reason I was hooked on Is It but now I am a fan of your writing too. You know how much reading I do and usually, I prefer to read well-known writer books. Whose writing is polished and intriguing? Now this chapter seriously you have outdone yourself. You well deserve a big hug. I love this story so much that I requested once that if you let me continue when you took a long break. I think I was stupid to even ask you. What you have done in last few chapters, I can't even imagine coming close.

Best of all in this chapter: Jalal and Hamida scene. The way you have sketched Hamida's character, she looked royal and graceful from every angle. The way she dominates Jalal. I can't believe it and Jalal is not even an inch less, he kept holding his weapon of silence and eventually burst with harsh words. I never thought you would curve story like this and connect to that scene. Just super.

One side Radha is annoyed and going crazy waiting not knowing what Jalal is going through she decided to defy. And another side Jalal is blaming her for his sudden outburst at Hamida. He is already the brink of losing his mind, he pulled Jodha in his chamber. My god he was so angry. I pictured Rajat. I wish to see Rajat playing that scene. And big mistake Radha did, not understanding his temper she hurt him with harsh words. I can't believe while reading in the next second he almost killed her. (Bhavuben this is call writing.) Readers feel every emotion in every line. Not even for second my concentration moved. I was stuck on your chapter.

I will read more in detail rest.

But overall this chapter I feel story moved in better speed. Hamida and Jalal on a direct conversation about Radha. Jalal has doubt on Jodha. Gradually Jalal loves deepening for Radha. His obsession turning into love but still he is not ready to admit in front of Radha. At least he talked to himself that he will not hurt her. His action will prove his love. I was surprised when Jalal shared by mistake, his and Hamida fight, that was another progress. Jalal thinking about marrying Radha also part of progressing. Only from Radha's side story still at the same stage. Surya has already come, so probably next chapter it will move further with their plan. I DON'T THINK STORY IS MOVING IN SLOW SPEED. I just read a few ppl comment and requesting to move faster, but I feel will not enjoy story moving fast. Let's say Jalal comes to know next chapter that she is here on a mission. I don't think he will be able to forgive her at this stage. I want her to continue her mission first then he comes to know that is more fun. I want to see him real lion king.

My most fav character Jalal and Jalal. His anger fascinates me. His obsession makes me crazy. He is powerful and kingly. I can't wait for Radha to submit him. I think lately I am dreaming too much.

This chapter I do not want you to change even a word. Perfect revolved of emotions. You are a superb writer. LOVE YOU BHAVUBEN. I will write more about Jodha and Jalal conversation in next comment. I don't want to bore you, last time when we talked you whined for not commenting and now, this time, you will scream for long boring comment.

Questions:

1. If U were the writer of this story, would U alter anything in this chapter? If so... WHAT? And Why?

>> Stupid question as no one can justify this story more than you!! 😆

2. Do U think story moving at the correct pace?
>> Story is moving at right pace.. but updates are not!! 😡

3. Who is UR favorite character in this story? (Jalal... Jodha... Rahim... Ruku... Hamida... Surya) why?

>> Obviously Jalal.. and you know why!!☺️

Whenever he hugs Jodha.. I too forget all the insult he did just like Jodha 🤣

Originally posted by: melovesja

Bhavi r u gujrati.

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