RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 64

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Bhavi 🤗 Another splendid update to cherish with lots events covering! 👏👏

Thank U for lovely comment😃

Thank you so much for this long chapter. You're the one writer who don't care about count of words... 😆 Worth the wait. ⭐️

Actually if I even wish to post it in 5k word it doesn't satisfy me. I like a ride of events in one chapter😃

I felt like story is accelerating bit now.

Remember I asked to readers in last chapter... So sometime I listen😉😆

For a change, this chapter came out from Jalal and Jodha and saw the other perspective as well. You've added more tension with the Faizal's entry. But I also disappointed when the guard declared his identity before thinking about anything. How careless!😡

Yap... I felt too much of Jodha and Jalal in last chapter so focused on moving forward. Also, I wanted to show readers Jalal as a king...

Yaap... Shahid made mistake😡

Adamkhan is so cruel I was trembled reading about him. God only save Rabina from his cruelty.😭 It's shocking revelation about Jalal-Rukaiya-Adam. 😲😲 Totally unexpected angle!! Now I'm really worrying about Ratha between Rukaiya and Adam. 🤢

Areee... Rukaiya and Adham don't have affair but Adham has crush on her and Rukaiya take advantage of him.

What decree is lost??😲 That too blank one. Hmm Who's the culprit? I've no idea.

Next chapter😃

Hameda and Salima's POV are understandable. They are the only people supported Ratha but now they are in a hurry to shoo her as far as possible thinking of betterment of Jalal and Ratha. Hmm will wait and see.

Poor Radha...😕

Our heroine is torn between Jodha and Ratha. Her letter was totally emotional and it saw clearly about her confused state.

She is totally confuse She hates him but love him...😆

But what about her mission?

She is working on it😆

If Jalal comes to know about her mission, then what will happen? Can Jodha justify her points?

She does have a valid reason for her betrayal... Will she able to justify??? It's upto Jalal😔

What actually happened on that night? 🤢

Reveal in two chapter😕

Hmm He's now blindly believing her.

He has began to doubt but not revealing to Faizal.

He even gave his confident towards her to Faizel too. So much of question. 😆 Only upcoming chapters can untold. Waiting.. Please update soon dear. 😃

Upcoming few chapters will unfold many mysterious to readers.

Thank U so much for reading and commenting regularly🤗

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Bhavini di,

I have been through chapters 14 and 15 only... so I will comment in details only after I have read all the chapters right from the beginning

Hey... Nandini... 🤗 Thank U so much for reading two chapter... I am eagerly waiting for your comment. 😛

. The chapter was really long and what say, at the end of it, I was kind of completely convinced that you are some form of politician 😆

Politician😲 hehe... This is my first chapter which cover political aspect... I am more on romantic side ... and gutter mind🤣

I mean all the investigation and conspiracy are defined in such details. That was really great!!!⭐️

I am truly happy to read that... because to write about other than your comfort level it is difficult...😳

You have an unique assemblage of so many characters in the chapters and in the story itself, and still you manage to pay individual attention to all taking care to etch all of them perfectly. Splendid!!😛

I am learning that from our writer e khaas...😳 I feel proud to read all this lovely compliments...because writing is not my natural talent, I have to work really hard to satisfy myself.

I have a question, I understand that Jodha has guised herself as a maid named Radha, and Jodha/Radha is involved in some conspiracy...

but if she's pretending to be a maid, should she really speak up to the Emperor, his Begum and his mother with such brazen confidence as to make them suspicious of her identity, and make her mission more difficult to achieve??!!

When U will read from beginning... U will know her weakness is her anger... and arrogance... Yaappp U right... She is not good at playing a maid roll...

I will pester you more after finishing all the chapters😉

Looking forward to😳

Till then, fir milte hai!!😳

See U soon my dear🤗

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

super duper chappy..

Amita🤗

i seriously doubt about mental condition of radha...if she does not want a married person in her life...why she is devastated?

It's confusion between her heart and mind... She has fallen in love with him one side and other side she is hating herself for falling in love with him. Once U R in love... your mind doesn't work... and person feel devastated... person can't sleep ...eat.. feel suffocated... Ur emotions are on verge all time... tears swim in eyes all the time... and feel life is meaningless without the person you love... without him or her nothing left to enjoy... LOVE is that beautiful and equally cruel... No other feeling can touch the intensity of love. and In this case Jalal and Jodha both has their compulsion... problems... both are in so deeply in love but so helpless that they feeling extremely suffocated and helpless.

her turmoil is effecting her mission...

It's a big problem...

i think she deserves a better person who love her unconditionally..

Soon he will prove his unconditional love for her.

no one want to share his husband how painful it would be...mere thought of this make me insane.

I can't imagine husband with many wives... oh god😡 but that was the reality of that era... Not only Mughals but hindu kings same... all of them had extra keeps... and many wives...

i feel their pain within me... i was looking forward for more jealousy in this track with suya arrival as u promised.

He is burning in that fire... but his heart has already recognize that she loves him so he is not feeling jealous but her sharp words hurting him.

what a contradiction?claiming himself a lover is going to enjoy tonight with pinaj begum,is he so weak to control his carnal cravings?

He is frustrated... upset...and feeling so restless... he is starving solace... It's not physical need he is looking for but he is looking for peace... At least he is not forcing her to accept him. at that time women were treated like a thing... just for pleasure... Also Radha has given him ultimatum... and accepted Surya... so he is trying his best to move on so he can release her.

whereas the question of lost decree i doubted maham as well as radha too,because the disappearance of that rajwansi soldier is fishy.

Hmmm... let's see... next chapter

honestly these days i am aching for akdha moments which is key factor of ur story.

Too many request for Jodha and Radha scene... Acutally I seriously thought readers probably got bored in last chapter all Jalal and Jodha... so I didn't put much about them in this chapter... but feels like readers never gets tired of AKDHA SCENE😆

as usual like button does not work.a very very big thanks for pm and update soon can not wait to see his reply to radha'letter.bhavi..

Letter response😲

please forgive me if my comments not upto ur expectation..dear i always find myself miserable when i imagine him with others women.i know as a reader i am a jerk and as a writer it is ur right to write according to ur plot.please bear with me.

Are yaar... don't say that... I also feel the same... but even serial Jalal has so many wives... and in this story I have shown him lonely and deserted... From very young age that is how he felt release... and so much is happening... so fast... Radha's harsh letter.. He has bend down so much even after that she rejected him... and constantly praising other man... constantly making him realize that he is weak ... cannot fight for himself... He is in more pain then Jodha...Love u...

Thank U for such a lovely comment and most hilarious update request😆

Originally posted by: navdeepmehra473

Wonderful Chapter ... 👏

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

ello... di!! Vas happening? m sorry m late bit busy with patients :-P

Mavi... Hello... 🤗 busy with patient😲 Are U a doctor😃

OK first of all u need a big hand round of applause for the update, that so shweet of u ... love the every bit of update

Thank U so much😳

u know when at morning I logged my id in if I got notification of pm n then I opened it after seeing it I was like OOO MYYY GAWWWD!!!

Sachhi☺️

OK now coming to the chapter, I loved the chapter ...waise to there is nothing to say that I love because whenever u update I love your post ..so there os no need to say I love but still n saying it what to do it gets habitual ..😳

Hello I love hear that again and again... My memories are too feeble😆

Di what does it mean the most awaited message has arrived? I mean what and how it linked to radha n adham ...its confusing...

Adham is part of her mission... and the way he looked at her in the function... she knew he is going to invite her soon. that is why she she said awaited message😃 I was trying to give hint of her past connection...

rukayia is totally frustrated, now she is thinking to revenge over radha ...changing the duties of radha n Reva again confusing...

Aree nahi She is changing Reva's duty... to hurt Radha... she knows Radha and Reva too close and she can't do anything directly to Radha otherwise Jalal would not spare her so to hurt her she has changed Reva's duty and degraded her.😕

OK now HAMIDA the dignified lady of mughal sultanate talking to radha in a way as if the venom is dripped in each of her words...really radha and JALAL pissed her off to an extent ... she is thinking about sultanate and her son's welfare as well but ... whilst the other side radha is not less than any fiery princess (I know she is JODHA but they r not aware of that) she make HAMIDA understatement by her attitude n deep down in her heart HAMIDA know that beside jalal this girl has courage n attitude to rule over entire Hindustan ... finally hamida did the selection of HINDUSTAN KI MALLIKA...😆 :-) ...

Yap indirectly she chose her... 😃she wished😃

Oh god letter of radha to jalal was aghhh...how can radha be a sadist ... she did this knowingly she called JALAL heartless tons of times .it pained me also di😔 like it hurt my jalal ...pwease di ask JODHA not to call jawaw a heawtwess...

I think she should apologize to Jalal... I also feel she was being rude in her tone... she was angry at Hamida and and wrote letter to Jalal... she is being sarcastic.

y they r doing this to each other but by her words JALAL easily understood that how much in pain she is as well... don't know what will happen next how will their world will turn upside down...
Faisal part I forget to comment ...he is doubting radha, now I understood y JALAL trust him most his sense of humour is just KAMAAL KA 😆

Heheh...😆

Don't worry soon their life will turn upside down

thanks for the update di love you tons
n thanks for pm
update soon n waiting for hate n love

I am so stuck between two story... I love both of them and takes me forever to move to other story. It took me so long after IS IT HATE UPDATE to come in RKG mood and now I can't think about anything else then RKG.

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
beautifully penned

Thank U my dear😃

I feel really bad for Jalal
he had always craved for love
& now even Jodha is betraying him

he will be way too shattered to know her truth

Seriously... This story is really tough to write.

that she came Agra not only to destroy him
but to eventually kill him

she is literally playing with his emotions
she very knows that he loves her
still...
she wants to hurt him beyond repair
she brutally crushed Jalal's heart with her letter

Both are equally in pain... One by one... started from Jalal... Hamida... and salima... all of them threatening her... She also loves him but he is not ready to down either... he has not admitted that he loves her but wants her in his life... This letter was a way to force him... push him to admit his love and agree to marry her officially.

I think radha has stolen the decree
poor Jo
along with Jalal's , she is playing with her own emotions & life

Yapp... both are playing with each other.

woah
even Faisal doubts radha

Yappp game is getting dangerous

uff this adham khan
inviting problems by messing with radha
he is such a shit
chiii

Chii...😆 this word make me laugh

update asap diii
can't wait to see what will happen now

Thank U so much for commenting and reading.😃

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Res..

will read tonight.

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Finally mera wait over...
This time u took long time Di...

Aree everytime I am late😆

Fantastic chappy Di...

Thank U😳

Faiz is suspicious abt jo..

Jo did right to reject Adham prosal...

😛

Poor bandi.. Adam beaten up so hardly n then taking hardly also..

It is too sad😭

Ja is angry to know abt Adham proposal..
Now Faiz will inspecting Jo..
Very scare when ja will know that Radha is none other than jo..

Oh god I am also scared to write that scene...

What Hamida did is wrong but i am proud of jo.. How nicely jo talk to Hamida n hamida is shocked by jo behaviour...

She is tikhi mirchi😆

Jo give aarogance to Salima whine talking..

Mostly her behavior is like a princess...

Jo is also shocked by hamida word..now what will jo do??

Lets see...😃

Ja is heart by jo word in letter... She said that ja is heartless..
jo is also right if ja loves her then why he didnt want to marry n want to keep jo as concubine...
But jo is also wrng for betraying ja ...

BOTH ARE WRONG... AND HURTING EACH OTHER

Hope so before happening any tragedy jo herself confess tp ja everything..
Pls update AsAP..
Pls dont take so much time to update...

I WILL TRY MY BEST😳
Thank for pm Di n love u.

LOVE U TOO MY DEAR😳

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Originally posted by: JalalLovesJodha

Bhavuben superb chapter.

Thank U sonu🤗❤️🤗 LOVE U MY DEAR... AND THANK U FOR UR SUPPORT... U call me when i needed u the most... I was too upset...and sad... but as always u cheered me up.

Not commenting in detail since we already talk but I will repeat it again this was the best chapter out of all chapters.

😳

Keep this style only.

I will try not to let any comment influence on my writing.😃

Last three chapters giving me feel that I am reading a professional novel and this chapter I felt for the first time I am reading my favorite suspense novel.

I am so happy to hear this from you... because I know you very well... U don't read unless you love it. and U love mystery...

Sometimes too strong emotions drain the beauty of the chapter and character.

I agree... but again I will repeat... readers love emotional scenes I write... 😃

LOVE U SONU😎

Originally posted by: Ishitafan

hai dear.sorry for the late reply and thank you for chapter.

I am so sorry My dear...for late response😭

i wasnt expecting your update i have opened forum after so many days and i was surprised to find your update.i felt really very happy yarr.

Thank U so much... It really feels so good to hear readers really wait for me to update.

coming to the update it was really really complicated dear i dont how you are managing it.

I am confuse most of the time... heheh

starting from the new spy character that you have introduced seems intresting .like true spy he has already guessed that something is really off with radha.and his convo with jala that was really commandable the way jalal spoke with him maintaing his royaltly.here you have written about the kings behaviour nicely.

I am glad U enjoyed it... It was about the time to move the pace of the story... It's been more than 15 days she in Agra... now close to almost all royal family member and no one doubted... so it was time.

I am glad U felt majestic aura in scene

radhas behavoiur towards spy is little confusing for me and for her also ha ha ha.does she knows him before???

NO she doesn't know him... but when she comes to know he is a spy and the way he was looking at her she sensed his suspicion.

now coming to adamkhan he is really really scary yarrr.please dont mind dear i cant read or watch woman abuse physically.

You won't find any scene like this again... I just wanted reader to see how his childhood impacting on him currently... and how cruel he has become.

he is ruthless and what not.i hate him. i hope he doesnt do any harm to radha or even before that i really wish jalal or radha to kill him.

His days are soon to be over.

then hamida oh my god she is a true politician and yes you are fablous in writng the entire convo between them.both of them are tigresses.

Tigress... I am blushing reading all compliments😳

specially radha she is really tough yarr.i was having goose bumos while reading that .i dont know what will happen to me when jalal knows the truth and confronts radha.but i felt bad for radha when hamida scolded her because radha regards her as mother.

Yes... her sudden harsh behavior tore her inwardly.

then salima part it was small but good and much needed.saleema truly cares for jala.i felt like one by one radha is loosing her loved ones i felt bad for her.

I love Salima in this scene too... she truly cares for Jalal.

then rukayya part i didnt understand her part dear.i didnt get it why you have mentioned about rukayya and adam.are you in future trying to show rukayya involving with adam to revenge radha if you are planning something like that please dont show it as physical relationship yarr .

You are the second reader who requested... I will repeat the same answer... No way... I can not degrade Jalal's chief queen to this level... she will have tie up with him but physical relation.

i cant see a girl stooping so low for revenge even if she is a vamp.and one more thing why is she revenging on reva pour soul.

To annoy Radha

then the final blast that letter of radha to jalal initially i felt it as clumposy then i thought yes we girls are clumpsy,annonying,frustated,unreasonable when we are cranky or miffed with our loved ones.your letter has shown all these things.

Yes... It was her frustration... anger... and love... Plus she wanted to push him to edge so he admit his love for her.

i thought jalal will go for radha after the letter.but then he is the jalal of rkg he wont go and radha wont come .ha ha ha.

Yaappp... He knows she is probably regretting for this letter... so he will make her wait for the answer. 😆 but he is deeply hurt by her words.

finally about entire lost order thing i hope you are planning something nice and big with this

Next chapter😃

.please dont tell me radha has stolen that.already they are fighting like tom and jerry and if jalal finds that she is the thief i dont know with what weapons they will fight.ha ha ha.

if Jalal comes to know... oh god what he will do

yarr please write some romance between them atleast as imagination.otherwise these two are always fighting like kids.anyways that is their speciality.

For a change... I have do something😉

finally please bear with my mistakes because i am extreamly sleepy yet i wanted to give this review because you took sooo much strain and spent your personal time on writing this entire story.

I read Ur comment at least three times... and enjoyed it... but sorry for late response... lately I am so busy with my daughter.. and her school just started so shopping... school supplies and lot more... plus my office also keeping me too busy... but I really appreciate your comment... It's really motivates me to write... U know when my mind freeze and can't think of further story plot... I simply read comments... and it works... I again feel connect to story...

this is the least that i could do.thank you once again yarr.bye .take care.

I am also sleepy... it's almost 12... but thank U ... 🤗