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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: sho123
I know yaar missing u like hell

same here sweety.. 😭

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: savindi.db
same here sweety.. 😭

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#713

Here I came guys with another update
Chapter-24
Alas jodha reach party with a heavy sorry broken heart her face didn't show any emotion but her beauty doing a great job in hiding her true emotions her true broken state
The moment she put her first step in club all attention naturally falls on her first due to her beauty second without any doubt bcoz of bet but jodha was so lost in her thoughts neither she pays attention to stares nor to the murmers
It's only her mobile ringing that brings her back to reality and also make her aware about her surroundings Seeing the caller ID she immediately cuts the call reminding herself that her friend is not the one who she feel is and now any word from her will make her weaker
after cutting the call she starts taking her steps avoiding each and every stare but also peeking at all the moment her gaze find him both her gaze and step stops in between
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The moment jodha entered in the club jalals trademark smirk just can't stop getting bigger and bigger and her immeasurable beauty and innocence making his ego big as for him jodha is his and he is so confident that today it will be proved to all
Her each and every nervous step making him more confident
Jalal :Now what will u say sharif here comes my jo;says with full ego tone still looking towards jodha and handling his glass to bartender for refilling it
Sharif who was shock with jodha entry was busy in searching of some new idea to make the situation reverse and seems like god too want same he came up with some evil plan but before he could execute it jalal voice halts him
Sharif:oh u made me speechless like always jalal u was right but what If she say no;stops to see jalal reaction so he can play his next step
Hearing this jalal tradesmirk vanishes but he manages to maintain plaster smile
Jalal :why u feel so she comes here only to say yes;said while still looking towards jo and following her gaze
Taking as awaited opportunity Sharif spikes Jalals drink with something
Sharif:oh really then show us;says while handling him his drink again
Jalal :oh I will and will do that now; saying this he gulp whole spike drink in one go and gets off from stool
The moment he offs from stool jodha gaze meet his and both share different eye lock
Where was jalal has ego look in his eyes there jodha eyes full of broken state in that unconscious state both start moving towards each other but there eye lock gets soon broken by the mumures
One girl:seems like jalal was right jodha came to say I love u to him
Second girl :it means jalal will win the bet
Third girl:may be jodha is too naive or may be she don't mind becoming betting stock
Saying this girl's starts laughing
Hearing all this a long tear escape from jodhas eye
Seeing that tear all arrogance and ego vanish from his face and worry pain took place of it in a flick of seconds he reach to jodha to catch that tear from falling off
Jalal catches that tear on the tip of his finger the sudden touch makes jodha force to open her eyes which she closed out of embarrassment
The moment their eyes meet both eyes full of pain for each other but the difference is one is in pain Bcoz of his betrayal other is in pain for seeing her in pain unaware that he himself is the cause of that pain
Jalal :what happened jo why r u crying
Did someone said something ;asks without breaking the eye lock
Jalal:Won't u tell ur jalal
With this line the eye lock finally breaks and the pain in jodhas eye vanishes and anger took place of it
Before she could say something the sudden tug on her arm force her to move her head towards other side to see its owner and seeing the owner the anger changes into accusing look
Trisha :jo can I talk with u for a minute ;pleas while making her drag from there but before that could happen jodhas another arm feels a more forced tug
Jalal :no she is not going with u anywhere ;saying this jalal makes jodha pull towards his own side and in that process he makes her hurt due to his power
Jodha :ah;cries
Trisha:careful jalal u r making her hurt ;says while trying to hold jodhas arm to check but jodha moves backward
Jalal :why u have always came between me and jo
Can't u just stay away; saying while griting his teeth
Seeing this side of jalal both Trisha and jodha becomes confuse
Roby who just reaches gets confuse seeing the temperature of trio
Roby:what happened jalal why u seem so angry
Jalal :tell ur gf to stay away from me and jo
Seeing this behave of jalal Roby too gets confuse but seeing that they r becoming center of attention
Roby:K guys let's talk while sitting there we r blocking dance floor; says while trying to sound normal
Jalal :i don't want to go anywhere I want to dance with my jo ;says while trying to maintaining two steps towards her and again holding jodhas hand tight
Judging jalals walk and behavior trio understand that jalal is get drunk but before anyone could say something jalal drag jodha in centre of dance floor
Trisha Roby too follows them to avert making the situation becoming more embarrassing
Jodha who hadn't speak a single word finally opens her mouth
Jodha :ja..la..l;says while stopping at the centre of floor
Jalal :finally my jo spoke
I love to hear ur sweet voice;confesses while placing his hand on her cheeks
The very touch of jalal makes jodha disgust and also helpless
But composing herself she again opens her mouth
Jodha :jal..al ur con..dition is no..t goo..d we wi..ll da..nce so..me oth..er day let's get off fr..om flo..or
Saying this jodha tries to pass by jalal but he stops her in between by holding her hand from behind and with this music starts playing

With the very beginning of the song jalal pushes jodha to himself due to the unexpected push jodha back collide with jalals front and jalal places his hand on jodhas waist
Dil ibadat kar raha hai Dhadkanein meri sun
Tujh ko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yehi dhun

My heart is praying, listen to my heartbeats
I should get you, only that's what I want

With this lines jalal makes his lips comes near jodhas ear and give a peck on it results in sending shiver in her spine

Zindagi ki shaakh se loon kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujh ko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yehi dhun

From the branches of life I should pick some beautiful moments
I should get you, only that's what I want

With this lines jalal make jodha turn to himself due to sudden turn jodhas face covers with her hair

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkanein Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Haasil
Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

My heart is praying, listen to my heartbeats
I should get you, only that's what I want

With this lines jalal withdraws the hair from jodhas face that were blocking his view and again holds her from her waist

Zindagi Ki Shaakh Se Loon
Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Haasil
Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

From the branches of life I should pick some beautiful moments
I should get you, only that's what I want

With this lines jalal places jodhas hand on his shoulder and places his hand on her back and starts swaying with rhythm forcing jodha to come along

Jo bhi jitne pal jiyun Unhe tere sang jiyun
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera Usse tere sang jiyun
Jo bhi saansein main bharun Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chahe jo ho raasta Usse tere sang chaloon

Whatever moments I live, I should live them with you
Whatever is my tomorrow now, I should live it with you
Whatever breaths I take, I should take them with you
Whatever be the path now, I should walk it with you.

With this lines jalal free jodha waist and spines her three times all the time jodha tries to escape from his grip

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkanein Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Haasil
Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

My heart is praying, listen to my heartbeats
I should get you, only that's what I want

With spinning ends jodha tries to move jalal again hold her and again her back touches his front

Mujhko de tu mitt jaane ab se khud dil mil jaane
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla
Lamhe ye phir na aane Inko tu na de jaane
Tu mujhpe khudko de lutaa
Tujhe tujh se tod loon Kahin khud se jod loon
Mere jismo jaan mein aa Teri khushboo odh loon

You let me end, let my heart merge into you
Why is there so much distance
These moments won't come again, don't let them go
You sacrifice yourself onto me
I should pluck you from yourself, add to myself somewhere
Come to my body and soul, I should cover myself with your scent
whatever breaths...

With this lines jalal holds jodha tightly and rubs his cheeks with jodha and very slowly reaches her neck and gives a peck there making her breath harder and forces her to shut her eyes

Jo Bhi Saansein Main Bharoon
Unhein Tere Sang Bharoon
Chaahe Jo Ho Raasta
Use Tere Sang Chaloon

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkanein Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Haasil
Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Whatever breaths I take, I should take them with you
Whatever be the path now, I should walk it with you.

My heart is praying, listen to my heartbeats
I should get you, only that's what I want

Opening her shut eyes and Breaking the cage of his arms jodha tries to run but jalal her hand with one hand and with free hand he start touching jodhas stretched arm with the nip of his index finger

Bahaon mein de bas jaane, Seene mein de chhup jaane
Tujh bin main jaaun to kahan
Tujh se hai mujhko paane, Yaadon ke woh nazraane
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera
Teri yaadon mein rahun Tere khwabon mein jagun
Mujhe doondhe jab koi Teri aankhon mein milun

Let me live in your arms, Let me hide in your chest,
Where else can I go except you,
From you only I have to get those gifts of memories
that are only mine.
I should live in your memories, I should wake in your dreams,
When someone looks for me, I should be found in your eyes..

With this lines jalal picks jodha in his arms and sways around with intense eye lock

Jo Bhi Saansein Main Bharoon
Unhein Tere Sang Bharoon
Chahe Jo Ho Raasta
Use Tere Sang Chaloon

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkanein Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Haasil
Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Whatever breaths I take, I should take them with you
Whatever be the path now, I should walk it with you.

My heart is praying, listen to my heartbeats
I should get you, only that's what I want

With this end of the lines slowly slowly jalal descend jodha on floor
And now both comes eye to eye lip to lip

The song ends with full loud applauds due to which their intense eye lock breaks and before jalal lips touch her jodha came back to her senses and slightly pushes jalal away to avoid any more embarrassment and reminding herself it's a trap
Jodha:get a grip it's a trap don't fall again just say for what u came here but jalals condition is right enough to say anything so I think I should leave
Thinking this jodha about to off from floor towards exit but this time it's Trisha who stops her
Trisha:Plz Jo can we talk
Jodha :there is nothing to say ;says without even looking at her face
But before there Coversation Could go ahead host announcement again makes it stop
Host:lets so cake cutting guys
As there is not much time to welcome next year
Hearing this all screams yes
Jalal who was after his dance performance with jodha was busy with his bestie hearing the announcement proceed towards jodha and again holds her hand
Jalal :lets do cake cutting jo then u have to give me my gift u remember right; says while giving her full child like smile and dragging her towards cake with his not so straight steps
All the scene from the moment jodha enter watched by all jalal hot encounter with Trisha then jalals forced sensual dance with jodha and jalals walk and behavior just left all others more entertaining than expected
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Placing the three floor cake in center of floor jalal finally blows off candles and cuts the cake with left hand as with right hand he is still holding jodhas hand
Finally cutting the cake jalal forwards first piece of cake towards jodhas mouth
jodha who was just keeping her mouth shut all time with one thought soon it just ends without any scene so she can left but seems like destiny don't want this
Jalal :come on jo open ur mouth
With this all eyes stick to jodha so to she has to take it
While holding cake slice a little jodha eats it which makes jalal give full teeth flashing smile
Next he makes roby eat
Jalal :now I have something to say guys I know all must have come with their blessings and gifts but here is one person whose wishes gift was for what I was waiting whole day and now finally it's time she will give me that in front of all of you
Now the one who were saying so many things about my charm about me will get their answer
Saying this jalal holds jodha by her waist
Hearing all this words jodha who was mum till now without any emotion her face fills with anger
But trying to control her anger as saying over and over again it's not correct time and place to say anything she politely yet firmly removes jalals hand from her waist and starts moving towards exit and this time she is hopeful that he too will let her go but alas only If she knew jalal well enough in his this state he is more stubborn
Jalal :come on jo don't be shy;saying this jalal holds jodhas shoulder without bothering about his hand and words jodha tries continue her walking seeing this jalal makes his grip stronger on her shoulder which results in disaster when she takes her next step jalals grip tears her shoulder dress off results in revealing her half side of her naked back and hhalf of front side
All gets shock with this unexpected event but all came out of that shock with the roar of a tight slap which landed on none other than birthday boy
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The moment jodha tries to take her next step she along with hearing the tearing sound of some dress she realises what jalal did and the very first reaction from any girl women lady would be same a slap to that deserving person who did this to u and that's what jodha Do she turns around and gives a tight slap on his face
Jodha :how dare u jalal; roars jodha making everyone more shock
Continuing with same tone
Jodha :dont u dare to try to touch me again
And about ur so called gift
Don't worry I will give u that and that too will now
So here comes my confession in front of all
I love u my foot
I hate u I hate u did u hear me
No one can love u not at least me
And now since u got ur answer I guess now I can leave

After this slap and this roar she realises how all r looking at her some with sympathy some as a awe and some with lust yes lust seeing her beauty
Trying to her cover herself with her duppttta Her very first encounter with jalal comes in her mind when he saves her modesty by putting jacket on her almost naked shoulder but today the very same man humiliated her in front of all by attacking on her modesty
The very thoughts fades away with this encounter the never ever forgettable nightmare
With this she alas makes her move towards exit and follows her her best friend and the ego hurted boy
Finally Trisha gets hold of jodha arm before they could exit the club
Trisha :jodha let me come with u and cover urself with this;says while trying to put her scarf on her shoulder
But jodha stops her in between
Jodha :no need thanks to u I have got this beautiful evening a never ever forgettable evening;says with tear filled eyes
Trisha:let me explain
Without saying anything jodha continues her walking
The moment she set first step off from club she feels a strong masculine hand on her wrist
Without even looking she knows it's owner for this courage of jalal jodha tries to land another slap on his face but this time he hold her hand in time
Jalal:What u think of ur self.how dare u slap me
Jodha:how dare u touch me and tried to touch me;shouts on high pitch
Jalal:So much attitude but u urself know that u cant resist the charm of the most handsome boy and for this slap u have to pay
and start decreasing distance between them.
Jodha :stay away from me jalal
Ur game is over ur bet u lost it

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Maan who just reach near the club was just getting off from his car when he hears his laddo sis voice angry broken voice and when he turns his face and hears everything his blood boils furiously and without wasting a second he reach to them and lands a heavy punch on jalals face and before jalal could know what happened he landed one kick on his stomach
Maan :i will kill u
how dare u touch my sister keep ur hands to urself;saying he held jalal by his collar
Jodha who too flabbergasted by the out of blue arrival of his brother comes out of that state when she realises blood coming out of jalals lips
With this very reality jodha decides to stop her brother
Jodha :plz bhaisa no leave him bhaisa
Maan :no laddo I will kill him
How dare he; saying this he tries to land another punch again but get stop by jalal himself who finally gains some consciousness although still not fully conscious due to drink effect
But before the war could begin and jalal could pay him back Roby comes in time and holds him from behind
Taking it as right time
Jodha :if u care for me and love me bhaisa then plz take me from here
Hearing this maan who was all ready to fight stops immediately and looks towards his laado
Reading her eyes expression maan can't help himself but has to stop himself but didn't moves from there
Leaving with no other option jodha starts dragging maan towards their vehicles but not before listening the last words from ego hurted jalal "I will found you "
Hearing this very words makes their walk halt and maan again turns towards his prey to stop this blood shed jodha holds maan arm with all the power she has but maan who was so furious jerks his laado for the first time in life making her almost lose her balance but the brother in him again awake and holds her in time but in all this jodha dupptta fall off revealing her real state
The moment maan eyes fell on her laddo teared cloths his breath stuck in his throat it's this time he realise her laddo true condition and temper explode from its limit
Firstly covering her with his jacket
Maan : laddo who did it; asks while cupping her face softly as he doesn't want to hurt her now with his anger
The very warmth of her brother makes jodha finally force to break the barrier of Tears and without a second thought she let's her tear fall
And maan takea her in his warmth brotherly embrace
Maan :he did this right
On this jodha remains quite but the brother got his answer
Breaking the hug and with eyes warning and plea don't come in between don't stop me maan again moves towards his prey
Jalal who was standing there itself with his head in his hands and Roby who about to give him water but before that glass could reach him maan kicks it off but before he could land a strong punch on jalals face again jalal kicks him off then maan with his full anger lands a strong punch on jalals face making him loose his balance this time and in anger Starr's searching here and there for something that could help him to kill the person who did this to his sister and alas he find a big rock
Without any second thought he reach the Rock and about to land it on jalals head
Jalal who was laying there emotional less was about to kicks off maan to make him fall too but a voice and then a thud sound stop both of them from their respective actions that was none other than of jodha
Jodha :no jalal ;screams
With this she passes off with little open eye lids and falls off with a thud on floor
Hearing this both looks towards jodha direction and seeing jodha in that state maan runs towards her and jalal who tries to get up and run towards jodha alas too passes off due to drink effect but not before taking one and only name
Jalal :jodha
With this new year fire works start off before both closes their eyes
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Precap:same

Hope u guys enjoy this update
It is big one Guys
Especially dedicated to priyanka aka priyu aka priii
Belated happy Birthday nidhi aka nidhu
Happy Birthday sisters
Love u both a lot
Hope u like my gift
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Do hit like and don't comment
Love u all

Edited by sho123 - 8 years ago

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
RES😉

UNRES

AMAZING CHAPPY

FEELING BAD FOR HER

STUPID EGO N STUPID BET

HER DRESS IS TORN

WHAT HAPPENED TO JO

UPDATE SOON

PRECAP IS SAME??

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

UNRES
AMAZING CHAPPY
FEELING BAD FOR HER
STUPID EGO N STUPID BET
HER DRESS IS TORN
WHAT HAPPENED TO JO
UPDATE SOON
PRECAP IS SAME??

THANKS FOR PM

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priyanka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

Res ..
Will comment tomorrow !!

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Duha Saad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Awesome dear
But so emotional
Poor Jodha
Jalal and his stupid bit
He torn her dress
And Jodha slap oh god
Then maan and Jalal fight
But wait what happened to Jodha at the end
Scary
Hope she is fine
Continue soon dear please

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pillowtalk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#718

awesome and amazing update loved it thank you for PM

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Priyanka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#719

I was really disgusting with Jalal's behavior... He deserved more than what he got... But Sherry, I have a request... Next time you post do recheck before you post... Sentences were quite messed up at many places... 😊

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hala

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Posted: 8 years ago

#720

awesome chapter sherry ..i wonder what jalal was thinking ..how can he do this to jodha but i dont also know what sherif but in his drink ..is it drugs ? i wonder

jodha actions were very mature ..and i respect her ..but seriously i hope trisha burn in hell ...she is the worst friend ever...jodha suffered so much because of her ,,,,my poor jodha ..i feel bad for her..i too loved maan ..he is an awesome brother

i wonder what will happen next ..what jalal revenge on jodha?

anyway he got what he deserve !!