AkDha OS ..Memories.. Updated - Page 6

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Simply fab write-up Shagun !!! This is your first work I am reading and it was beautiful. Such a smooth flow of writing... with emotions awesomely taken care of ! I loved how you portrayed the longing emotions of the old Empress... in memory of her husband... the lovely flashbacks.. the restored faith and determined love..the comeback of the brave empress ! Amazing work.. keep it up! 😃

Originally posted by: piya58

Awsmmm
Thanku

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

This was expected. 😆

But thanks anyway. 😳

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Expected???😲

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Awesome os buddy

This is after Jalal's death

Perfect title for perfect story

Originally posted by: CindyTruong

Congrats new OS...dear...
Adorable update
flashback so lovely...
all sweeet memories are the strenght for Jo live the rest of her life without her husband...
wow...mindblowing ...Thanks for pm Shagun...

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

that's just amazing, Shagun👏👏

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

SHAGUN what is this yaar?
is this is an os or a torture . You know how m feeling right at the moment m feeling like crying after reading this but can't cry because what will my family members will think off . Bdw love the way you describe jodha's loneliness her craving for JALAL . Her mental condition, the past you described was awesome . JALAL support her and love her so much . his simple one touch give her so much strength she want to relived all the moments . SHAGUN please don't torture us like this m unable to control my cry 😔

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

and SHAGUN I can't even think jodha's life without JALAL 😔 because I can't accept it .
M still crying thinking bout the feelings of loneliness of JODHA
awesome os

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Haan, after all I haven't unresd on New Life yet. 😆