NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 1 - CHAPTERS 1 & 2 - Page 92

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Posted: 9 years ago
Writer-e-khaas,
Reviewer-e-khaas! Here I go.. trying to match you by reviewing your review
Thank you very much for the beautiful chapter you created, well timed for my Monday morning commute.
Awww hope it made for a good commute!
It was a very interesting world you created in this chapter- a microcosm of strong women, a world that is rare to find in a historical setting. It is not only your lead sisters that are strong, but also the women that surround them which is my take 5 theme for today.
Here goes my favourite word 'microcosm' - but I never realised that the women around them appeared very individual too!
1. And we start with Bindiya, who armed with a bit of weak urdu, defends her "honour" both in fairness of deal as in words. Even Ratan Kaka finds himself helpless in front of her. She would later be tongue tied only in front of Harka, when the long list of excuses in her mind evaporated into a sheepish smile and apology.
Loool... while I never imagined Bindiya to be the 'strong' type, you have me sold on a few of her qualities!
2. As a contrast to the headstrong Bindiya, is the instinctive and measured Gauri. Her instinct told her that Bindiya had landed herself in trouble, ensuring they received timely help. I definitely see her as a rock to Harka in the future. However, as serious and dutiful as she is in the surface, there was a sense of humor not far away to join Dhani and Bindiya who were teasing Harka about the man of her dreams.
Gauri is another lady I love... and for precisely the reasons I've underlined!
3. Bringing us to Dhani, the mischievous one. You seem to tell us less about Dhani than the other girls but yet we can sense she likely will lighten proceedings in the coming future as she constantly asks Harka about her dream Kunwar.
Of course, we need a mischief-maker now, don't we? And I guess she fills the blanks... I guess today we'd call her the 'life of the party'
4. Then we come to the center of gravity of this microcosm, the two sisters, beginning with the blazen sun of the two- Durga. We continue to see her strength and outward display of it - from how she goes horseback riding with her fiance to how she refuses his support to deliver the farmaan and even goes against his advice to do her duty. Her strength is outward and shines out like the sun.
Yes... she is in every sense the 'head' of a clan
5. By contrast, Harka's strength seems like the cool moon - seemingly in the shadows of the sun, but able to step out on its own (as I had mentioned last week). In this chapter, we see Harka's strength in many ways - the way she saved Bindiya with tact while treating her adversary with respect to her intelligence and knowledge to her staying back to keep her mannat for the Mahapuja. At the same time, she was also a teenage girl at heart who was also awaiting her dream kunwarsa and pulled her compansions' legs back on the same topic.
Awww my favourite, Harka I daren't add anything to the beauty your words have weaved!
There was something very beautiful about this microcosm ... a bubble of strength and energy and positivity ... that had survived amidst the kings, courtiers, and Mughal rulers around them. Yet, this microcosm will be disrupted soon ... I will not jump to any conclusions till I read the next chapter.
👏 Loved how you've realised and explained it here... that era where women were restricted to zenanas and harems, was a difficult one to carve out their personalities so the world could see... I guess that's why the strong women of yesteryears have impacted us such!
For now, thank you writer-e-khaas for drawing me into their beautiful world.
And thank you for making the trip with me.. 🤗
Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


I would like to know one thing, that is who is the current emperor of Mughal's? Is it Shahjahan or the timeline of the story is even after that? You have taken the name of both Akbar and Jahangir but not of Shahjahan so asking. And also don't know why the character of the prince resembled to young Aurangzeb to me.😆😆
*ahem* All I am saying is you aren't entirely wrong! 😉*ahem*

😲Is it really?😃 Why you are keeping it in secret?😕Dying to know the full story.😆

by 2nd chapter itself you want the whole story, Stuti? 😆 it will come re baba!

Child-like in the sense she was very cutely urging to her sister, like any kid sister does with her elder.😳 Eagerly waiting to know what happened in this journey and what is going to happen after this...

You are right... I stand corrected... 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful awesome waiting to read further continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Nooo!!! No apologies! The right of the author to the story - is sacred! 😃
Just your characters are very "live". And though, in those days, they matured earlier, but these two young girls have took a lot of hardship and responsibilities very early. And my feelings and sadness as a reader - from the experience of life? 😊
"For in much wisdom is much grief: and he that increaseth knowledge increaseth sorrow". (Ecclesiastes 1:18, King Solomon, This the translation didn't I).
in short:
"In a lot of knowledge, a lot of grief" - than I living longer... 😃
What tough call will wait of girl 16 years in a men's world to save her lives, honor and country?
I know it will be very exciting! Eagerly wait to continuation.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Shrads..thanks for your reply dear...
This story is yours so you can use any reference for the hero or heroine..we cant be more thankful to you for writing such a wonderful story, taking time from your v v busy schedule...
Waiting for the next chappy..wink**
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Posted: 9 years ago

👏 that's all I can say! Waiting for the story to unfold
Edited by rs_fun2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Awesome review Divi 👏I specially like your Take no. 5 about Harka</font>



Thanks so much! I am glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rs_fun2


👏 that's all I can say! Waiting for the story to unfold

😆

Yeah can't wait for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
What an intriguing story.
I know with each update its going to be wow, wower, wowest...

Durga bai did feel what's coming, still she took the risk of her life like a true leader. She indeed was sure of Harka's capabilities to take care of their land and people. The Prince or his fellowmen killed the heiress for the farman?

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