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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: kartikaJA
awesome update
waiting for precap
precap was shocking
update soon

Thank you dear. 😳

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#462

The first part was quite emotional one
Jalal just like a kid doing zidd of not eating
Everywhere now they remember that night
Blaming themselves for their death
Finally they poured out everything
Update soonish
Well I know the pattern ur updating ur stories
I m excited even for the both
Thanks for PM

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#463

Superb chapter dear
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#464

Awesome update,Stuti👏

Tears flowed together..wonderful👍🏼.Loved Jalal's childish tantrums,Jo's parenting attitude.It was funny and cute as well😆

The next part where Jo-Ja reminisce HH's sleeping and eating habits was touching😭.How do you manage to write these so naturally??

Finally,they cried in each other's arms😊

Kabul's situation has become worse.I was wondering how can Maha Chuchak trust Haider over Faisel..but she isn't a fool.Haider was caught off guard.But Abul Mali made an entry finally.Will Fakhr's name come into the picture?Eager to read further😊

Thanks for the PM😊

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#465

Amazing nd emotional update..
joja part is soo nice..
suprb

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#466

superb update , Stuti...👏

abul mali, as next king of kabul???😡 why increasing Jallu's headache??
Jallu himself has right now slipped in a kid's mode.😉.just a news of that Mali will increase his tensions...poor guy...

anyway, waiting for next chappy...update soon

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Hermione Granger

@misspotter

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Yeah at last I updated. 😆
Thank you so much for liking this chapter and adding your 2 cents dear. 😳 And wait for precap dear 😉 Abul Mali has someone in his own home who has the power to change the whole game.

ya his wife Fakhr-Nisa.. she is the game changer now here..
lets see what happens nxt..

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#468

Marvellous update..
Aww jalal was acting like a kid and jo was just giggling looking at him..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
wait evening ko padhke comment karungi

unress

it was too nice yaar... bache gawane ke itne dino baad dono ke aansu nikl...ab sab thik ho jayegi think...

so nicely described...

but kch request...

1. please chapter end Akdha ko leke karo...resh theke jaay..

2. please ei kabul ki sab khatam karo n ek fuul on akdha update do...

3. tune jo socha h open air use jaldi haqiqad me tabdeel karo

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: mickeymini
The first part was quite emotional one
Jalal just like a kid doing zidd of not eating
Everywhere now they remember that night
Blaming themselves for their death
Finally they poured out everything
Update soonish
Well I know the pattern ur updating ur stories
I m excited even for the both
Thanks for PM

Thanks for reading dear. 😳

@bold 😆😆😆