Season1:Game Of Desire Chapter3 Updated on pg1 (10/8/2016) - Page 86

Awesome chapter n thnxx for pm dr

Payal🤗... as always shocking😆...hehehhe... and intriguing😃 ...

Most captivating part of this chapter the way you have portrait all three characters...

Jalal obviously admires and care for Rukaiya but their bond still on a very initial stage... It was sad to see Jalal compromised and married to the girl who is not compatible with him and spontaneously he is getting attracted to the girl who is definitely to his like. Jodha is everything he desired in his life partner but unfortunately, Rukaiya is opposite to Jodha... Shy... Reserved...Conservative... introvert but a loving homely girl. You have portrait artfully the arrange mismatch marriage scenario... Jalal wants to be truthful to Rukaiya but sadly most of the man doesn't have control over their desire and liking.

On another hand, Jodha the outgoing girl who doesn't care for the world😲 gets attracted to Jalal in a jiff... and pursue him sensually... and try to seduce him successfully.

Jalal and Rukaiya's bonding is developing at a turtle pace😕... in other words, still their relation on a thin edge. Why they didn't consume after marriage. shocking😲??? Before this storm, a couple really needed some time to build love and faith on each other. The ill-fated timing for all three... At the end, no one will be happy... It's such a delicate situation and scene to write... What I mean, it's difficult to balance and you have justified every bit of it... Jalal crosses his confine just a bit... where Rukaiya noticed it but doesn't complain. And Jalal sees Rukaiya and realize his mistake and feels guilt... wow... in one chapter you have covered so much. Commendable Payal.

I hate Jodha... she is too selfish... You know if this story was in historical era... I wouldn't even care or but it's in current time... No way, I can't forgive Jodha for lusting on a married man😭... Tooo shameful😡. It's our Jodha so I am not going use any bad words... but I hated it the way she seduced Jalal😕. She was given a chance in the past but it was her choice and she rejected him so why she can't accept the reality... why it annoys her...

Hope Rukaiya and Jalal come close quickly... or Jalal realizes she is only beautiful outwardly... and Jodha learns this a hard way what she has lost in her arrogance and ambition...

I can't put a finger on one line just because every line is written with deep thought and care👏... Beautifully written a chapter.

UR writing is exceptionally good⭐️... to my liking😳... bold 😉and striking😛... hehe👏

Hey thanks for the pm😃

Nice update

finally you update dear
thank you for that
and many many congrats for completing third semester dear
may you achieve lot more in your life
God bless you

and coming to update it was awesome as always
this story is so different from other stories
jodha was some grey shades in this story
if only you change the name of female character than how much we react which was totally different if only you...
I will tell you frankly jalal is not loyal husband
I know he was attract toward jodha since he saw her pic but now he is married to other girl so he must forget her but no he totally forgot that he is married men for sometime in dance floor
the way he was dancing intimately with jodha in dance floor
this is not good for jalal married life
but one gesture like in him in this chapter
the way he care for his wife
he don't force her to dance because he known she is not comfortable
rukaiya I hate to tell you but I like her character
she know that she is not jalal choice life partner
she know what jalal likes and dislikes
but one thing I want to know why jalal and rukaiya don't consume their marriage
rukaiya love him since childhood I guess
jalal try to intimate with rukaiya but in his thought jodha was there right
he say sorry to rukaiya but why she is his wife
but I think we lot yet to know about their relationship in next chapter may be..
jodha God this girl
she try to seduce jalal in dance floor
how can jalal resist himself
after all she is his first choice
because of her continues gazing jalal fell little uncomfortable
I don't know what jodha fell for jalal love or obsess or desire
when she saw jalal pic
she like him but she choice her career
now she regretting her decision
she want him in her life
the way she is thinking jalal in night
what to say that...
but no matter what I love jodha and jalal
and hate rukaiya so much
eagerly waiting for next chapter
plz don't take so much time for next chapter
I really miss your os dear
you update regularly but what happen now
nazar lag gai hamari payal ko
he he
thanks for pm

First of all congo buddy for clear semester...
Thanks for update...
Awesome chappy...
Both r dancings so close...
Ja is lost in jo..
Poor Ruk..
Ruk disheartened seeing his husband with some other lady..
Jo is angry with Ruk disturbances..
Ja is feeling gulity ..
Pls jaldi se jo n jo ko milaoo n Ruk ko bhagaoo..
Thanks ja stop in between..
Ruk is blushing whole time..
Jo rejected ja for her career but she now atrractef toward ja..
Pls update AsAP n update your all story..
Thanks for pm..

Congrats Payal👏It's really a very good news😃

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">and thanks a lot for your wishes guys.. little busy this time. will reply to all comments at night.😃</font>

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most welcome dear
aww you really like my childish comment?
thank you for that

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

most welcome dear
aww you really like my childish comment?
thank you for that