So finally we are here with the update, after a long long wait. 😃
Congrats for completion of your semesters🤗(I learnt about this from other comments 😊)...
Coming to the update, you've written very very well, as always...the characters, their unusual equations, and the way, the plot is proceeding...really makes it all interesting.
The story has three angles to it so far- a socialising and flamboyant Jalal who respects his wife, but is not as complete a couple as they appear, there are still issues to be "sorted" between them (?).
Second angle is definitely Jodha, who has broken her popular image of a sweet, soft and gentle feminine in this story...her thoughts and needs are clear...and complicated for sure...waiting to see more of her 😉
Third angle, Ruquaiya is an exceptional again,very much unlike her bohemian image,she's a sweet homely soul...she loves her friend and husband, but does not confess...and her feelings remain unreciprocated as of now...
This story looks damn interesting ⭐️
Would wait to read more...thank you for the pm and for writing in spite of all your difficulties...update soon if you can😳
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