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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

I am so sorry my dear sisters & friends...

I will be busy in this month..

My cousin brother marriage & he don't have sister.. I need to do all the things related to sister..

I will give updates but it may take time... so plz bear me..

Thank u for asking updates...

Love u all..

Sorry I am not giving reply to ur comments but I am reading every comment...plz comment

It gives me energy to write more..

I missing u guys...

Hope u all understand...

Love u more & more guys..

Happy ugadi dears...

Stay blessed...

CHAPTER 56:

On their wedding anniversary.. at 12:00 am..

Both are already in drenched in sweat making a hot passionate love making.. hugging each other in naked.. wished each other..

Jalal: happy anniversary Mrs jalal..

Kisses her on her forehead..

Jodha: same to u hubby.. Kisses him on his cheek..

Both are kissing each other.. passionate kiss..

But they are disturbed by door bell..

Jodha: did u order anything??

Jalal: nope..I know we will be busy in love making..so I thought y should we get disturbed by some cake & flowers.. I didn't order anything..

Jodha: then who it must be?? But may be Annayya or someone..

Jalal:.first we will go & see who is it..

Jodha: yeah. Wear dress.. I can't wear now..

Jalal wears his dress & goes to open it..

It is delivery boy..

Gaved cake , flowers & msg card...

Jalal says thank u & closes the door..

Goes to jodha again..

Jodha is waiting for him..

Jodha: who is that jalal??

Jalal: my sister.. Vaishu...

Jodha: oh god.. Vaishu..

Jalal:. Here is her msg..

My dear Annayya & my dushman friend happy anniversary.. May god give all blessings to u..

Jodhu one year back I told u.. u will be the happy with this marriage.. see it became true.. poor my Annayya bearing u.. I am so sorry Annayya for my Jodhu torcher.. But she is precious.. take care. I am sorry for disturbing ur day.. But u know I can't wait to wish u people.. Jodhu take care of my brother..

Urs

Vaishu...

Jodha: Vaishuuu...

Jalal: hey don't say anything to my sister..my lovely sister... let me call her..

Jodha: Oie.. wait.. let me wear my t-shirt..

Jalal: what about first we finish our task then phone..

Jodha: no first phone.. then we will do all night..

Jalal: oh god.. really..??

Jodha: hmmm.. nods.. blushes badly..

Jalal jumps on her start kissing..

Jodha:. Jalal first phone..

Before jodha do call her phone starts ringing..

Karthik called jodha to wish her..

Karthik: happy anniversary Jodhu..

Jodha: thanks Annayya.. talks for 2 minutes..

Gives phone to jalal..

Karthik wishes jalal also..

They talk for 3 minutes & hung up..

Jodha calls to Vaishu on face time..

Vaishu: oh my god.. Jodhu.. u called me.. I thought u were to busy In somewhere..

Jodha: Oie.. u are the one disturbed us.. jalal is also here.. stupid stop it..

Jalal: Hai Vaishu.. how are u??

Vaishu: I am good Annayya.. happy anniversary..

Jodha: madam.. u told me to take care of ur brother.. who will see me?:

Vaishu: my brother.. if he is happy automatically u will be happy.. lucky girl.. u got my brother..

Jodha feels happy with her words...

.they talk about few minutes.. ends the call.. in the presence of Vaishu they cut the cake.. feeds each other..

Jodha: so..

Jalal: so.??

Jodha: ufff.. nothing come we will sleep..

Jalal chuckles.. so my baby wants something..

Jodha nods.. yes..

Jalal came on her.. starts kissing..

Jodha also responds...

Jalal feeds cake to her & takes Some from her through kissing..

Both are enjoying themselves..

Having a marathon love making...

They slept at 3 am..

In the morning..

Sun rays hit the couple disturbing their sleep..

Jodha wakes up & kisses jalal goes to freshen up..

Salim is still sleeping..

Jodha had bath.. came out in a towel.. Goes to wake up jalal..

Jodha: get up jalal..

Jalal: yeah.. Sonu.. plz.. let me sleep.. drags her to him..

Jodha: Oie.. plz.. we have to go temple..

Jalal:.ufff.. ok.. opens his eyes.. looks at her.. seems my day is starting in a beautiful way.. kisses her neck..

Jodha: don't start again.. plz baby.. let's go.. my Chinnu my sweetheart.. wake up..plz..

Jalal: ok.. but I won't leave u in the night..

Jodha: ok.. done...

Jalal gets up & goes to washroom..

Jodha calls to karthik to enquire about the car..

Karthik parked the car in jodha house in the early morning..

Jodha gets ready in blue Saree( she learned properly yaar)..

Went to wake-up salim..

Salim gets up..jodha makes salim ready..

Jalal too decked up in blue shirt.. almost same for salim tooo...

It became routine for them.. for special events 3 used to dress up in same Color..

Jodha did pooja & gives arthi to father & son..

Jalal puts vermilion on her maang

Maina told jodha to take blessings from jalal..so she calls for jalal..

Jodha: jalal wait..

Jalal: yes Sonu.. tell me..

Jodha bends to touch his feet & says.. bless me..

Jalal moves back with her sudden gesture.. lifts her from her shoulders.. cups her face.. & says. Sonu ur place is here.. points to his heart.. u don't need to touch my feet Sonu..

Jodha: but jalal it's our custom.. plz bless me.. at least today allow me plz..plz..

Jalal: sonu.. no need to do all this..

But being a stubborn jodha bends again to touch his feet..

Jalal takes the akshintalu( rice mixed in haldi) places on her head..

Jodha happily gets up & jalal hugs both jodha & salim..

Jalal: be happy always..

Salim: u didn't take my blessings??

Come on mom I will do same like dad..

Jodha: salimmm...

Both mother & son gone to chasing...

Jalal smiles.. it is common for him.. jodha & salim are same like Tom & Jerry..salim irritates jodha a lot..

Jalal: jodha come with me once.. salim u go & play beta.. In 10 minutes we will go to temple ok..

Jodha: yeah.. salim..go beta...

Salim runs to play...

Jalal takes her to their bedroom..

Jalal: close ur eyes once..

Jodha closes..

Jalal brings the gift pack.. & says to open her eyes..

Jodha opens & looks at gift..

Jalal: for u. Open it..

Jodha: happily opens.. finds a the same bangles which she liked..

Jalal: happy anniversary Sonu...

Jodha: these are??

Jalal: yep.. the same...like it..

Jodha gives back bangles to him.. gives her hands too..

Jalal understood her make her wear bangles..

Jalal: it's so beautiful on u jodha..

Jodha: I love u jalal..

Jalal:. Me too baby.. chalo let's go.. we are getting late..

Jodha: chalo..

Jodha takes the new car keys with her.. but hides them in her wallet..

Trio goes down...

Jalal looks at the car..

Jalal: hey...nice car.. seems new one.. but y they parked in our parking place.. let me call the security..

Security Security..

But jodha stops him..

Jodha: hey jalal wait.. May be the owner will come.. but do u like it.

Jalal: yes baby.. black always favorite for us.. we will buy in next month... where the stupid owner??

Jodha: hmmm right here... in front of me..

Jalal: where Sonu..

Jodha: hmmm..here.. take it.. gives the car keys to him..

Jalal just gets a 100volts shock.. u are Kidding right..

Jodha: me kidding.. y..?? Don't I have the right to gift u.. happy anniversary husband...

Jalal:. Oh god.. Sonu.. u are gifting me this.. how? I mean how u purchased it.. I mean I mean.. oh god. I am not getting the words.

Jodha: ufff.. I am also working in ur company vp.. u never asked a penny from my salary.. u brings everything for me. So obviously I will have money right.. don't u like it..

Jalal just hugs her tightly..

Jalal: I am not getting words.. I don't know u think about me this much.. oh god... I just lost my words.. u don't need to do this.. but but.. take a break & says...

I love u Sonu.. I love u soo much..

Jodha breaks the hug.. & says..

I love u too Chinnu.. let's go to temple.. we need to do pooja for car also na.. let's go..

Jalal never think in his dreams..

Jalal still in a shock to move...

Jodha: ufff.. jalal.. shall we go.. don't think much.. plz baby.. its getting late..

Jalal:.yeah.. first u get in..

Jodha:. Yesterday I already stepped in... u first plz..

Jalal:. No u first..jalal opens the door for her..

Jodha: ok.. sits in the front seat..

Jalal opens the door for salim also.. he gets in..

Jalal also settled in driving seat..

Salim:.wow.. dad.. is it our new car.. I so loved it. I can sit in the back & play games.. thank god I will be saved from mom silly talks..

Jodha:.salim...

Salim: yes.. what mom.. dad is better.. u never stop talking.. better u go to ammamma ( maina place) place.. plz..

Jodha: ok.. drop me at my mom's place jalal..

Jalal: hmmm...salim are u sure should I drop mumma at her moms place..

Salim:no no plz...I am just Kidding.. she is my mom.. mom.. I love u.. gives a kiss.

Jodha: love u too beta...kiss him again on cheeks..

Jalal starts the car..

Jodha: jalal.. actually I want to say something.. sorry first..

Jalal: y sorry?? Tell me what's it..

Jodha: hmmm... dad helped me to buy this.. I told to Amma about it. Actually in the starting I alone want to gift it.. but Amma told to dad about this..

Flashback:

Bhar calls to jodha..

Bhar: Jodhu mom told me that u want to gift car to the jalal..

Jodha: yeah dad.. I am thinking..

Bhar: Jodhu.. I never asked I anything but today asking u.. U have to accept it..

Jodha:.what's dad??

Bhar: hmm I want to help u for taking the car..U are my only daughter.. I never gave u anything. Jalal never allowed me to help him in any way.. plz jodha after me my wealth is urs only.. I will be happy if I give u now only.. plz..

Jodha: don't say like that dad.. plz.. & but dad.. jalal Don't like to take from u.. he is not like a person who harras their wife for dowry..plz.

Bhar: I know Jodhu.. I am giving with my heart..plz.. if u won't take it. I won't talk with u.. plz beta..plz..Like a gift u can take it.. plz Jodhu.. I wanted to give u something.. u never asked anything from me..plz Jodhu...plz take my help...

Jodha: hmmm..ok dad..

Bhar: thank u Jodhu.. I will transfer amount to ur account.. if u need more tell me..ok..

Jodha:ok dad..love u...

Bhar: me too beta..

End of flash back..

Jodha: I am sorry jalal..

Jalal: Sonu.. plz don't say sorry.. thank u sooo much.. I am very happy u didn't spend all ur money on this.. I love u baby.. plz. Don't say sorry.. I will accept it ok.. but it is very special to me..I won't allow anyone to drive it..

Jodha: what about me?? Won't u give to me?? With pout.

Jalal: u & me are same Sonu.. when I said I, we both will come.. we both have two bodies but we are single baby..

Jodha:. I love u Chinnu.. kisses him on his hand..

Salim: mom... I am here only.. plz..

Jodha slaps her forehead.. & says. Ok junior jalal..

Trio reaches to temple..

& do pooja.. for car also they do pooja..

Goes back to home..

Precap:

Radha: don't worry jalal... I will come & stay with u...

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Beautiful update after a long wait.

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Fabulous update didu
Joja were busy in their passionate love making 😳 when vaishu's gifts disturbed them 😉
They both became very haapy after getting gifts and wishes from her 😊
Kartik also called them ans wished..
In morning they did pooja together 😊
jodha took jalal's blessings.
Jodha was very happy after getting Bangles 😊 but not more than jalal...he was surprised shocked amazed seeing the car 😃 and thanked her numerous times.
Ohh so bharmal helped jo in buying the car 😊
OMG precap!!! 😲
ye radha kahan se beech mein aa gayi?
Thnku for pm
continue soon
love u
take care

Edited by chaudhary_kajal - 9 years ago

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Awesome update

Jo-Ja both are amazed by their gifts

Bhar helped Jo

Salim is too naughty

continue soon and thanks for pm.

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#315

awsum
jj in very hot & passionate mood
hehe

loved it dii
both suprised each other

what
what
what
radha will come to jj home
why

jalal ki toh band baj jayegi
jo will not spare him
haha
update asap diii

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Awww this is soo fantastic update dii..
suprbly written..loved it .

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Awesome update di...joja's hot and passonate love making on there anivarsery...amazing...vaisu and kartik both are really nice they wish them but not to mension actually disturb them on there ahem...ahem...but they are really very loving and nice..

The gift giveng part is amazing jodha is happy to the core where as jalal not only happy but got shock to the core...

Salim is really naughty like his dad

but precp is shocking for us...don't ssay me radha is come in joja's house as villian...update soon di

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Lovely n romantic chappy lakshu didu..
Uuhh lala...They are doing romance like a marathon...
Nice gifts..
Mother n son are like a tom n jerry..
Lovely family time..
Enjoy ur cousin marriage n have a blast lakshu didu..