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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful chapter n thnxx for pm di
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good morning bangaram
Ela unnavu??
Ugadi baga celebrate chesava?? Ni princess ela undi ra??
Coming to update ,no need to say its superb as usual
Jalal and Jodha r busy in their business when vaishu dosturbs them .
Aww cake and all haan ,how sweet of her .
They call her ans talk for sometime ,karthik too calls them and then they spend another few minutes .
Finally they have some time for themselves .
Their gifts to each other were superb .
Precap :- why is radha coming home ?? Oh yes anniversary party maybe .
Hope everything goes well other wise jallu is gone😆
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc chappy dr
Joja life soo buaetiful yr alwys stay ...
Precap who's radha y she stay with jalal
Its k u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappy Akka
Both are enjoying their anniversary to the core
Update soon Akka
Interesting precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chapter dii!
jo gifted ja a car!
awesome!
thanx for the pm..😃
update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. ..lakshmi akka. ...
What a anniversary it was akka...
They started with there hot love making. ...
Got disturbed by vishu gift...
So cute of vishu. ... nd her message. ...
Jodha was surprised by jalal gift nd jalal was shocked with jodha gift...
Good to kne bhramal also help jodha in gifting jalal...
Update soon. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Update soon dear & why d hell radha is going 2 stay with jl big twist in story
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update laksh...no problem with delay psl take care of urself...wow jj enjoying their anniversary to the fullest... loved vysh & karthik surprise & convo..jj & salim dressed in same color..both r happy with gifting each other..seems new twist in precap..hope it wont create anuy mu in their life...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments my dears...
I.am giving two updates...
If possible I will update tomorrow also..
Love u all..
Take care...
Thanks u all...


CHAPTER 57:

Trio reaches to home..

But all their friends are waiting for them...

Karthik radha & few colleagues are waiting for them..

They bought the cake to celebrate..

Jalal , jodha & salim cut the cake..
Feeds to each other & salim too..

Jodha served cake & snacks for all of them..

All are sitting & started eating..

Karthik: so my dear sister do u like my jalal gift??

Jodha: Annayya.. U know everything but u didn't tell me.. very bad..

Jalal: yeah ra. U know about Sonu gift & u didn't told me..

Karthik: oh god..look at this guys.. if I told to each other.. Will u both spare me..I am sure I will dead by now if i reveal... but u both are best couple.. most adorable couple..I am so happy for u Jodhu...

Jodha: thanks Annayya..

Karthik:. Ok common.. take this.. gives gift box to her..

Jodha: for me?? Really.. thank u Annayya... what is it?

Karthik:.open.

Jodha opens it.. & says.. oh my god.. the same ear rings.. gets up from her place & hugs karthik..
Thank u Annayya.. gets tears..

Karthik:.no Jodhu.. don't cry...U become my sister exactly one year back.. so I have to gift something to my baby sister.. wipes her years. so..do u like it??

Jodha: I love it Annayya... thank u soo much..

Jalal:.where is my gift ra??

Karthik:. I gave my precious sister to u.. do u want more than her?? If u want I will take my sister to my home.

Jodha:yeah..jalal tell me.. should I go??

Jalal: oh no plz.. I don't want anything.. U are more than enough..

Radha: jalal don't worry if she goes I will come & stay with u...winks at jalal..

Jalal grabs jodha from karthik hug.. no I don't want.. plz.. I have my beautiful wife with me.. so plz..
Jodha blushes...

All chuckles..
They chit chat for sometime..
All goes to parking to go to their respective homes...
Jodha didn't went down...

Karthik: to jalal.. should I take salim with me.. winks at him..

Jalal: no ra.. i asked jodha to go out. But she told me to stay in home only.. today is special day for us.. & we can't miss salim in our special day..

Karthik:. Ok ra. I am so happy for u.

Jalal: thanks karthik... I am so happy.. I owe to u karthik.. u become brother to her..to support her.. she always wants a brother, but u replaced that place.. hugs him...

Karthik: yes jalal.. take care of my sister.. I know u will.. u both are lucky to have each other.. Bye..
We Will meet tomorrow in the office.. ok...Bye..

Jalal: bye..
All their friends leaves...

Jodha went to kitchen to clean up the mess...

Salim was busy in playing..

Jalal bids bye to their friends & goes upstairs.. search for his lady love...

Jalal watched her cleaning in the kitchen & salim is playing..

Jalal silently & slowly sneak into kitchen..

Where as jodha is humming song.. doing little dance.. she is happy.. she is enjoying her moment..
she didn't observe jalal..

Jalal leans on the door & looks at jodha..smiles looking at her.. recalls his wedding day...

Jalal thinks ..how much u cried on our wedding day Sonu.. but thank u so much god. Now u are Happy.. if u smile then I will be happy.. I love u more & more...

Goes near to jodha...
He sneaks his hands on jodha bare waist...

Jodha jerks suddenly with jalal action...

Jalal: relax baby...its me.. who have that much dare to hold my Sonu...

Jodha relaxes...leans on his chest..place her hand above his hand.. hmmm... yeah... nobody..but my jalal Had that...

Jalal: yes.. only me..my property...my wife...

Jodha: hmmm... really..

Jalal: kisses her ear.. whispers I love u baby... makes her turn.. now both are looking at each other..

Jodha: can I ask u something??

Jalal: from when u are asking like this stupid questions Sonu?? Better ask directly...

Jodha:. I know but..

Jalal: then.. y all this stupid questions?? Can I.ask u something.. tried to imitate her..

Jodha: jalalll...

Jalal: sonuuu...

Jodha: Abba plz.. jalal.. don't irritate me...

Jalal: Abba plz... Sonu.. don't irritate me...

Jodha:. Ok.. leave me..I won't talk with u.. tried to move from his hug..

Jalal: ok..ok..say it.. Plz..

Jodha:.are u happy?? U didn't get angry on me right??

Jalal: I am happy.. more than happy...till 4 years back I was living like hell.. U don't know Sonu.. I wanted to die..but I decided to punish my self...if I died my pain will gone in few minutes but I want to bear this pain , that's y i didn't die...I was living but nothing left in my life..I lost everything... but last year u are back.. the moment I heard about salim I am decided I will not leave u this time.. even if it cost my lifetime still I want to face everything.. I don't want anything Sonu.. U & salim are enough for me.. I just can't put my words how important u are in my life.. still today I can't forgive myself Sonu what I did to u.. I still remember ur pleadings.. I was like monster.. U deserve better than me but I am sorry.. i still remember ur face at our marriage.. U are crying very badly.. U missed ur parents.. but now U are smiling..that is more important to me.. ur smile gives life to me.. I want u always be happy Sonu.. I hope I am making u happy now.. at least I will try to do Sonu..forgive me if I am not...


Jodha hugs him tightly... &.says.. U made me cry again.. y always brings that ... Plz stop it jalal.. today is the most happy day.. Plz.. forget it.. thinks .. I am sorry jalal.. we both are facing problems.. I am a stupid.. if i came back we will be happy.. thank god nothing happened to u.. if anything happened I will die jalal..

Hugs him more tightly..

Jalal hugs her.. caresses her hair..
Says.. ok ok. Don't be sad.. tell me u want to say something..& y would I get angry on u..??

CHAPTER 57.1:

Breaks the hug..

Jodha: hmmm..nothing.. dad helped me na.. U don't like to take penny from dad..now I took.. but I was helpless jalal.. dad felt bad that he can't able to give anything to u.. so I took.. are u ok with that...??

Jalal cups her face.. says.. U know Sonu still now I am in shock.. I can't able to get over the shock. I know u always thinks about me but I didn't expect u will buy a car for me.. I was surprised no no no... surprise is also small word to say it.. I got 100 volts shock..seriously I never get this much expensive gift from anyone.. even I purchased my car with my own money.. I was like... ufff... .. I can't say... I am happy.. I feel like I am the king of ur stubborn heart.. of course I am..but I felt like I am so special very loved person on the earth.. I am happy uncle helped u.. U know one thing son in law always likes their father in laws money...tell ur father to give more.. hahaha... just Kidding... I don't want baby... he gave me the best gift he can.. I am glad u took uncle help or else I feel bad because ur all earnings on me.. which I don't like..so don't think much about it.. I will say my style of thanks in the night.. what u say?? Winks at her..

Jodha: jalal ...Plz.. don't tease me... blushes badly..

Jalal: I forgot to ask u.. do u like the bangles??

Jodha: I think I am the one selected them...

Jalal: hmmm... yeah.. it suits on u perfectly..actually anything suits on u baby.. do u like my gift.. sorry baby.. my thinking was at near bangles only.. I think next time I need to think little more to gift u...

Jodha: to be frank actually on that day I felt bad jalal.. because u didn't asked me to buy anything for me.. but later I composed myself.. because I know about u.. U first think about me only.. I convinced myself that u are thinking something or may be in some different mood..that's y I didn't felt bad... but see finally I got them.. thank u jalal.. I loved them...I don't want any gifts jalal.. I have u.. that's the best gift I can get in my life..

Jalal:. Thank u for the trust on me Sonu... U are my first priority.. i always think about u Sonu...

Jodha: I know baby...

Jalal: love u Sonu.. kisses her forehead..

Jodha: me to Chinnu...chalo I am feeling hungry.. I will start cooking...

Jalal: let's go out for lunch...

Jodha: no we will go in the evening plz... I am hell tired... I want to sleep in the noon today...Plz...

Jalal: hmmm.. ok.. but how about cooking me & u take rest...

Jodha:. No jalal.. I will cook.. y u took burden on u.. that's ok..I Will do..

Jalal: hello madam... U learned cooking from me only... don't worry I won't mess ur kitchen.. Plz..

Jodha: I am happy if u cook but u will ask me lot of questions.. where is the salt where is the dal like that.. its better I cook... I can't come again &.again to give items to u... so Plz...

Jalal: I won't ask anything...ok.. believe me.. I will cook ur favorite.. chicken.. Plz...

Jodha: oh god.. chicken... jalal..Plz.. U can't wash it.. U never put ur hands in the raw meat.. U use spoon to eat chicken & how can u cook.. Plz.. U better go...

Jalal lifts her in his arms..takes her to their room...put her on the bed..&.says.. I never did that.. but today i want to do it... for u...Plz.. only once..plz.. even I won't ask u single question.. don't step into the kitchen for 1 hour.. I promise I will clean properly.. I won't mess ur kitchen..

Jodha:. Jalal but...

Jalal: no buts... ok.. i will do it... believe me..U sleep baby.. relax.. moreover u need rest because u have to stay awake in the night.. i won't allow u to sleep.. so better u sleep now.. Plz Sonu...

Jodha:jalalll...

Jalal: plz baby...

Jodha: ok...if u want anything call me ok..

Jalal: ok.. now sleep.. don't u dare to come to the kitchen..

Jodha: ok sir...

Jalal: good girl... now sleep... do u want to change ur dress... should I help u??

Jodha: no no.. I am really feeling sleepy.. I will sleep... Plz stay for few minutes..

Jalal: ok my baby.. come & sleep.. take her into his hug..

Meanwhile salim also came to their room..

Salim: dad dad...

Jalal: shhh... mom is sleeping.. come u also sleep for a while..

Salim: yes dad..

Jalal holds both jodha & salim in each hand..

Soon both sleeps..

Jalal gets up from his place to do his experiment in kitchen.. before going he places kiss on both forehead & left..

Soon jalal started his cooking cum experiment..

Being a Brahmin he never touched raw meat.. he didn't ate but after marriage he is eating for jodha.. touching a raw meat is a big thing for jalal forget about cooking..
But he was determined to do it for his lady love..

Jalal says to himself but bit louder... I am so sorry mom.. I have to cook this.. prays to god.. closes his eyes touches the raw meat...
Hayialla... after marrying my Sonu I kept a pullstop to all customs.. if mom got to know this no doubt she will cut me into pieces.. but I am happy.. I am doing for my Sonu.. she will be happy if I do this.. anything for u my darling...

Cleans the meat.. opens YouTube how to cook chicken curry.. follow it..

Meanwhile jodha gets up from her place.. thinks about jalal & comes to kitchen to help him.. but she listened his talking to himself.. she felt happy & sad.. happy because he is doing it for her.. sad he never did all this.. but still doing for her..

She wants to go help him.. but stopped herself..
Jodha thinks.. let him have the satisfaction of making me happy..
Goes to their bedroom & sleeps again..

Meanwhile jalal is fighting with chicken curry.. he did exactly the same way shown in YouTube..

Smell was good.. he wants to taste it.. but he after cooking with his hands he felt little nausea so he didn't tasted it..

He kept rice.. he prepared lunch finally...

Soon he wakeup jodha & salim..

Both mother & son fresh up.. all sits for lunch..

Jodha: wow... Smell itself telling how tasty... can't wait to eat it jalal..

Jalal: Sonu.. I know how I cooked.. it won't be that much tasty.. I like to hear honest comments.. ok.

Jodha: I am telling truth baby.. u are best..

Soon jalal served three plates.. jodha wants to do it but jalal denied..

Trio started eating..

Salim: mumma y today curry is spicy.. not that good...

Jalal: sorry beta.. its me did the curry.. not mumma... he feels bad for that much spicy..

Jodha: salim u have ur rice with curd..

Salim: ok mumma..

Jalal:. Sorry Sonu...

Jodha: jalal it's good for me.. really tasty.. Plz don't be sorry..
Holds his hand & says.. u are the best husband anyone can get.. u tried for me..that's a big thing.. I really loved it jalal...thank u soo much.. I love u Chinnu..

Jalal: love u tooo baby...

Salim: love u dad & mumma..

Jodha& jalal: we love u salim..

Soon the trio finished lunch..

Went out for strolling..
They had their dinner outside..
By night they came back to home..
Salim slept in the car itself..

Jalal & jodha enjoyed with each other.. Soon they hit the bed.. made a hot passionate love making till their energy dropped..
Soon jalal slept holding jodha ear.. jodha too slept hugging him..


Precap:

Jalal: y u did that jodha?? It hurts me.. very badly...



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Woow supurb chappy yr
Jalal cook nv fr jodha
Wht jo did its ja lot?
Update soon yr

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