JOJA ff ~HUMESHA TUMKO CHAHA~ new thread link on pg 1 - Page 9

waiting for next part .

now for the chapters... Your updates were short so I had no problem in time management to read both of them in one go. And in one word, they are really awesome.

The plot is very interesting. A simple story of a simple middle-class gentleman whose dreams of love gets crushed before starting to dream. Now it will be really an awesome journey to go through their daily life, how the new seed of love starts blossoming from that heap of ash of burnt dream.⭐️ loved the concept.

And the tit-bit of Jalal's character you have given, he has nothing extravagant in his character- he is just like my brother, or my youngest uncle, or my next-door guy who are very close to us. This simplicity will give him the heart full sympathy and love from the readers later, perhaps much more than a dashing,cool and gorgeous guy would have got in this plot. Jodha has not come in front by now, but from the CS it is looking like she is an opposite personallity of Jalal. And it would be fun to read their story.😃

And last but not the least, 👏👏 for the style you have adapted to write the story. This mixture of present and flashback, the intriguing development of the story along with the past, really wonderful!⭐️

Update next part soon.😳

Chapter - 2

Climbing down from the attic he straight go to the guest room. He thanked his stars that his parents or his brother didn't see him to went towards the guest room.

Entering the guest room he took his mobile off from his pocket and placed it beside the bed. After getting rid of his Naagra shoes, he fell his body on the bed. What a day! Full of surprises! In the morning I was a bachelor and ow he is a married man. Suddenly married man' strikes him. Yes he is a married man now, bt without a beautiful future with his wife

He spread his body try to relax bt all hre word ringing in his ears. She loved someone else, not me...he closed his eyes with pain. A lone tear fallen down from his eyes...yes he is crying...crying for the first time...that too in pain...for not getting his love...

"mera pehla pyar adhoora reh gaya" his voice reflects his broken feeling... he is broke. Broken by the lady he loved.

Tere bin jeena hai aise

Dil dhadka naa ho jaise

Yeh ishq hai kya duniya ko

Hum samjhaye kaise

Aa dilon ki raahon mein

Hum kuch aisa kar jaye

Ik dooje se bichade toh

Saans liye bin mar jayei

(O khuda..

Bata de kya lakiron mein likha

Humne toh..

Humne toh bas ishq hai kiya) - 2

Pyaar ki in raahon mein

Milte hain kitne dariya

Lakh tufano mein bhi dil ko

Mil jaata hai zariya

Iss dil ke iradon mein hai itna asar

Lehron se kinaron pe karta hai safar

(O khuda..

Bata de kya lakreeron mein likha..

Humne toh..

Humne toh bas ishq hai kiya) - 2

He is feeling rest less. He is married now. Both of them family is involved now. "I think I should clear all this thing with my family even the have the rights to know everything." He thought.

"No, no, Jalal u can't do that u idiot. What are you thinking? If you tell them they will accuse her for no reason. No, I can't do that, I can't let it happened with her. God damn it, I LOVE HER.

Suddenly he shocked. Shocked to the core. What I love her? Is that true? No...I just...it's just she is my wife. Then why? Why all this feeling burst up in me when I thought about her. Whenever I saw her. My heart started to beat like a drum roll. Her touch...Oh god! How can I forget about her touch? During the time of marriage whenever her hand or skin touched to mine shivered. Yes I remember I feel like I got a shock of 440 volts. Yes ye I love her...I love her. I love her for not just for being my wife but as a person. I love her for whoever she is. "But she is doesn't love you" his mind speaks, "But you love her. Don't demand her love just love her with your all. If you love her with all, maybe she love you back some day." His heart answers him politely

He got up with a jolt. Yes right, I will love her. I can't let myself defending from loving her. That doesn't matter she loves me back or not, I will keep her happy till my last breath. I will do everything for her. If for this I have to in search of her lover then I will go for that also. If she will be happy with him, then I will make her unite with her love, for her happiness

His heart collapsed thinking about her departure, but he have to be strong, and have to face her tomorrow morning.

He took out a deep breath and lied down on the bed. Sleep is far away from him. Bt for a better conversation he have to rest his brain. He closed his eyes. But all he see her bright face flashing smiling and giggling. He want her to be like this only. He doesn't come to know when sleep took him over.

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His sleep broke by aloud knocking in his door. He got up and open the door. Opening it he got a high voltage shock. Jodha! What is she doing here in this time, is she need something. He looked on his face. He is feared and worried face. "I can't find you anywhere so I came here searching you." Said in a low shaky tone. Jalal felt cloud 9. She is searching me? Really? His heart made summersault on her words. He felt happy with her concern. She lift her eyes and looked in his eyes. He shocked. Her eyes showing him what he wants to see in her eyes always. Love, pure love. Its shows full of love and uncontrollable desire for him.

They just stood silent on the door for a minute. Then he sked her to enter. She enters and locked the door. Jalal got confused. "Jodha, why you closed the door?"

"No nothing just...like that" she stammers

"What?"

"Ah...can I say something?"

"Yes say"

"Would u mind if I hug u tightly? I'm feeling to hug u right now"

Jalal shocked. But before he could tell something, Jodha's hand griped his neck and back tightly and caged him in her arms. He was shocked bt not in sense o listen his mind right now. His love is in his arms what else he wants now.

He take her with all his warmth he had for her. He dripped his lips in her neck and kissed her with soft. She shrieked with his touch. He held her more close to himself assure her he will never ever let her go from him.

After some time they broke their hug, Jalal cupped her face... "What happened Jodha? Why are you scared?" Jodha without opening her eyes said "no" like a whisper. Then what happened?" she nodded her head as no and then suddenly he held her eyes towards him. Holding his collar she said "Jalal I can't wait anymore." He got confused first then he got a shock of his life with her further words. "Just make me yours in all manners tonight Jalal, I can't hold my desire to be yours. I want to be yours forever today, just melt me in your arms and just take me." She started to cry.

Her bold yet sensual word inbreeded fire inside him. The desire he was holding for many months now want to come out and rained on her. Is he listening right? She wants me to make her mine forever. He felt blessed. And now after her acceptance he can't hold himself anymore now.

He looked on her lips. Its shivering. Shivering for his touch. She opens her eyes and saw the same passion and desire in his eyes she again closed her eyes and open her lips slightly inviting him to take it. He hold her chi make her look in his eyes. Bt she was too shy to look at hm. He closed his eyes and just put his rough lips on her soft petals. And then magic. A cold chill layered on through her spine when his lips started to kiss her lips with much passion. They didn't know they held so much passion for each other. What happened after that they don't know. They only know they are together and will be for ever.

Both wanted to taste each other's lips so they both open their lips and welcome each other for further testing. Both of their hands engrossed with each other's body and their lips engrossed with each other. Jalal showering all his wild desire for her with his kiss. She also not back off. They licking nibbling and smooching each other's lips. They tasted each other's saliva feeling like testing the best thing. They have forgotten the world being in each other's embrace.

Hm hm hm hm hm hm

Hm hm hm hm hm

La la la la lala la

Ru ru ru ru ru ru

La la la laaa la la

Jodha broke the kissand take a breath. Jalal looked in her eyes.opens her hair clips let her hair float in the air. He snaked his hand inside her hair. Started hissing her hair, smelling its fragrance.

Dil ne ye kaha hai dil se

Mohabbat ho gayi hai tumse - (2)

Jalal decrease the gap between them. He keep his forehead on hers he don't want anything in his life now. He wants her, just her. He felt content holding her in his arms

A man like him who never ever interested or look towards a girl being a handsome personality. Today he was feeling all those passion and erotic hormonal feeling, which a man feel towards a woman and which he never experienced. Feeling all those things for jodha he feel complete today.

Meri jaan mere dilbar

Mera aitbar karlo

Jitna bekarar hu mai

Khudko bekarar karlo

Meri dhadkano ko samjo

Tumbi mujse pyar karlo

Lalala lalalala lalalala lalalala

On the other side she was feeling light like a feather, feeling like flying high in the sky. She is in his arms. He, the person she loves the most in her arms today. His touch on her waist, her neck her lips her naval taking her straight to heaven. His fingers on her waist giving her tickling sensation. She is feeling like that electrical wire which 440 volt current pass through. She capture him more tightly.

(Mere hontho pe tere hontho ki Pyas aisi jagi Mann me mere bhi tann me Tere bhi aag jalne lagi) - (2)

Ho sard mausam hai

Garam aalam hai

Dil me tufan hai

Bekarari hai

Kya humari hai kitne arman hai

Jalal took her in his arms politely. She rounded her hand on his neck. Both are feeling butterflies flying inside their stomach heart is running like a marathon candidate. He placed her on the bed and lay beside her. He took he hand and kissed on it. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

Meri jaan keh rahi hai

Mujpe jaan nisar karlo

Jitna bekarar ho mai

Khudko bekarar karlo

Meri dhakano ko samjo

Tumbi mujse pyar karlo

Lalalala lalalala lalalala lalalala

He turn towards her, kissed her forehead with a deep longing. She keep closed he eyes and slide her hands towards his heart. He turn his head towards her neck and now the last string of his control is out of his hand. He started to kiss her neck. Her soft cotton skin doing some magic on him. His hand started to feel her exposed back which was covered by her choli with only two strings. Too less to cover her beautiful back. Isn't it? He thought

(Ho raat adhi hai baat adhi hai Behke behke kadam

ek dujhe ko Leke baho me aa lipat jaye hum) - (2)

Both embrace each other like they are the second skin of each other. Hi is kissing her neck wild by nibbling it with his tongue, making her moan loud with his name. she gripped his white kurta tightly with one hand and his hair with another hand more passionately.

Ho kaisi masti hai

Kitni madhoshi hosh khone laga

Tune dekha jo aisi nazro se kuch to hone laga

He snacked his hand towards her blouse dori. Jodha got alert. But before she could do anything or tell Jalal unknot her both dori with both of his hand. She just can do only moaning with his name loud.

"Ahh shhh Jalal" she moan in pleasure of his touch.

He started to open her choli and within a blink it was out of her body. Jalal got up and took his kurta off is body. Jodha laid turning her back to Jalal he lay down beside her.

Ab to hai yehi tamana chahat beshumar karlo

Jitna bekarar hai dil khudko bekarar karlo

Meri dhadkano ko samjo

Tumbi mujse pyar karlo

Jalal kissed her neck again. She moan loudly as he bite hard on her neck marking with a love bite.

"Ohhh god Jalal...ahhh..."

She looked on his eyes. Indicating his intention she though off he all shyness and started rubbing her hand on his manly chest

"aaaghhh Jodha" he moan as her hand roaming around his abs put fuel on his desire.

She lay beside him and Put her hand on his left side on his heart. She pull her head towards him and kissed on his chest .He shrieked on her action. She continue her torture started to kiss his chest more wild and passionately. Jalal had no other option than moaning. He slide his hand and started to kneading her bosom gently first than he turned wild and do it roughly. Now she can't control herself. "aaah Jalaaal" she moaned loudly. Her moaning encourage his to move further.

He undid her ghagra in one pull of its string

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HE jumped up from his bed with a big shock. Oh man! What a wild dream! He still on the trance of that dream. He did all those thing with her? His mouth fell open with his discover. And she? She was so wild on that dream. Hope she shows that wildness in real life too.

'Get a grip on yourself u fool. Yesterday she wasn't ready to see ur face and now you are dreaming about his wildness on bed? Offf bt in dreams she was so hot and sexy and her skin was like a melted butter...ohh' he thought.

'Stop it Jalal. U can't see her like this, at list now because she indirectly rejected you to be close to you. You have to control your feelings.' his mind chided on him. 'You have to confront her, talk to her. Ask about her life, if you have to control your erotic dreams about her and your future with her, better you have to talk to her.' he tighten his fist in and took a deep breath.

He rubbed his eyes as the sunlight making eyes burn. He got up from bed and headed towards the bathroom.

*Song OH KHUDA is from the movie HERO (2015) sang by Amaal Mallik & Palak Muchchal

* Song DIL NE YEH KAHA HAI DIN SE from the movie DHADKAN (2000) sang by Sonu Nigam & Alka Yagnik

hope u all love it😉