THE LAST MISTAKE...THREAD 2.. New link on pg155 - Page 79

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I am so sorry my dears.. I was hell busy..so didn't updated..
But today I will give two updates..
From today onwards again I will Give two updates daily.
Thank u sooo much for ur lovely comments..
Thanks everyone for the wishes..
Plz talk with me.. Plz forgive me..
Love u all...
Muahhh...
I hope I am giving a worthy update.. Plz. Give comments..
Love u all...

Payu I will unres soon in our os..
I read all ur comments.. I will give my comments later..
Thank u all


CHAPTER 40:

Whole day jodha didn't talked with jalal.. he tried to talk with her but she ignored his calls..
He wants to go back to home but jodha told him that she is going out for an important work.. so it's no use to go home now..
Whole day he was thinking how to crack this cold jodha..

Finally he decided to send a bouquet of red roses to her.. by midnight.. mostly she won't sleep early.. so he thinks to send flowers & chocolates in the late night..He ordered in online...

Jodha was busy in arranging.. She wants to surprise jalal.. Maina & Bhar went back to their hometown with salim..

By night..

Jalal came back.. & knocks the door..

Jodha opens it..

First jalal was shocked..
Jodha wearing a nightie.. that to fully covered.. She never wear nightie.. always in capris , skirts.. sometimes maxi dresses.. but never in nightie..

Jalal just stands at the door itself & looking at her..

Jodha: will u come inside or
Should I close the door??

Jalal: no no please.. I am coming..

Lights are off in the house.. jalal thinks y all this sudden??

Jodha: if u go freshen up.. we will have dinner.. if u don't want I will eat..

Jalal: jodha.. anything happened to u?? U are behaving strangely.. seems u got fever.. shall we go to doctor?? Where is salim?? Aunty & uncle??

Jodha: salim went to Amma house. They came because they have some work.. & work is done. They went back.. & if u want food then come in 20 minutes.. or else good night.. goes to kitchen..

Jodha pov:
Oh god.. what's happening to me.. I was so tensed... I am behaving like a stupid girl.. I was nervous
.. to avoid it I am commanding him.. can't he just understand.. stupid & buddu... oh god.. First I need to remove this nightie.. it is fully covered me... poor jalal..he was shocked to see me like this.. don't worry soon u will see me in ur favorite dress.. oh god.. give me some energy.. I can do it.. don't panic.. be calm..
Remove her nightie...

( don't imagine any thing.. She is wearing Saree under her nightie..)

Jalal pov:
Oh god.. y she is looking nervous.. She is ordering me..she used to do that daily but today I felt it is strange.. something differ.. her voice & her eyes are not matching..& she is hell angry on me... & y this sudden dressing?? Is she ok?? .. I think she is up to something.. oh god .. save me from angry of my wife...
End of pov.

Soon jalal fresh & came out..
He was shocked.. First time jodha choose dress for him..

Black shirt & blue jeans..
Slip on it..
Wear this..
Jodha..

Jalal wondered y all this suddenly.. & in an hour we will sleep.. but she took out this dress for me... She is comfortably wearing nightie..jeans for me.. did she wants to go somewhere.. but she didn't Said anything to me.. y suddenly aunty uncle came & they took salim with them.. even jodha didn't inform me.. something is going to happen.. save me god..

He gets ready & comes to living room.

He was frozen at his place..

He just looks at decoration & jodha...

He opened his mouth with sudden surprise..

Jodha decorated house beautifully with few candles & roses everywhere.. light cream color curtains.. His favorite food on dining table..

Jodha wearing his favorite colour simple black Saree.. Saree has small silver line patch to it..

Black & silver combination blouse.. only two strings supporting it in the back... transparent sleeves.. her fair skin is clearly visible under transparent black Saree..
First time she wear her mangalasutra around her neck & jalal chain.. ( She never removed jalal chain..but she never weard mangalasutra or anything related to her marriage after her wedding)

She left open her hairs.. sindoor in her maang..Small Bindi..

Small black bead jhumkis adoring her ears..

Two simple bangles in each hand..

Payal in her legs..

She don't wear any makeup.. just lip gloss..

But she is looking very beautiful..

Jalal was just awestruck looking at her.. he wants to talk but seems he forgot words..

Jodha: I want to talk with u..

Jalal: ha.. what?? He is not in a condition to listen what jodha is saying.. still he was in a shock..

Jodha: Chinnu...

Jalal: ha.. yeah jodha.. am I dreaming?? Is this true? U are real.. if I open my eyes all this will gone?? No no please.. this is true na..??

Jodha comes near him & pinches him hardly..

Jalal: ouch.. it's hurting.. it's true.. U are true. Oh god.. jodha.. any party is going on?? Anyone birthday am I missed?? He was in thinking..

Jodha: Chinnu... Will u please listen to me..once.. I am already hell nervous..

Jalal: yeah.. jodha .. tell me.. don't be nervous..

Jodha: what am I calling u now CHINNU???

jalal: Chinnu.. who is Chinnu?? Poor fellow.. in a shock he forgot all..

Jodha: oh god.. nothing.. go sleep... good night..

Jalal: plz tell me.. I can't take this.. I I think I am in dreamland.. for me this is all dream.. I have a dream one day u will say ur love for me like this.. but I know it won't happen.. plz.. say.. who is Chinnu..

Jodha: Chinnu..is u only.. did u forgot ur name.?? Which I kept for u??

Jalal: yeah...oh shit. I am Chinnu for u.. U called me as Chinnu?? Y jodha??

Jodha: seems u are really in dreamland.. oh god.. how to say..
Ok...
Take a deep breath jalal..

Jalal says ok..takes...

Jodha: now I will take..
Takes a deep breath..& says... ok now..close ur eyes jalal.. plz..

Jalal closes his eyes..

Jodha: counts numbers in her mind.. comes near jalal & says..

I LOVE U TO JALAL...
hugs him tightly..





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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww lovely update laksh ❤️❤️ ❤️

Jo was nervous but still commanding her husband. I liked that.👍🏼😆

She sent salim out. Clever girl.😉

Remove her nightie...

>>>>

Ha ha.. As my mind drifted to some other place

( don't imagine any thing.. She is wearing Saree under her nightie..)

>>> I read this.🤣🥺

Jo-ja povs were funny.😆

She was nervous about how to confess whist he was scared that what she's upto.

Stupid husband😛

I loved jo's attire. I love black. ❤️

Beautiful Girls look ravishing in black and men look so hot ofcourse if they have desirable body with delectable face😉❤️

Oh my my she said "chinnu.."😵

Yipee I updated my os before this chapter.

Haww ur jalal didn't listen.. BUT I made him to react atleast in my os.😉 He was quite intelligent u know but ur's budhu as jodha said.😆

But I loved jalal's behaviour. It was so funny and lovely.🤡

Take a deep breath.

Now I will take.

What's this??? 😆 Whatever.. it was❤️

I LOVE U JALAL...

Jalal to gaya...😆

hugs him tightly..

Same same laksh.. I made her to hug him first and then say those three magical words.

But I loved your style of confession than mine. Wonderful chapter dear.👏⭐️


Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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