THE LAST MISTAKE...THREAD 2.. New link on pg155 - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
jalal really caring husband
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome amazing nd funny chptr dii..
bichara doctor..hehe..
really jo is vry lucky to have jalal..
jalal was silently crying..aww yar he loves her soo much..
precap..oh god new journey of life..amazing..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow such an amazing chapy...jalals concert towards odha was amazing and for jodha i say a one line "adha ishq hai...adha ho jayega"
precape is very very interesting FIRST DATE..lovely...please update soon...
Hey dear i have a suggesion is there any dance or romantic moment in there date...if it so please add a romantic song in that.(its only suggetion ok its upto u...if you like the suggesion than and than only think about it or otherwise skip it...bcoz i don't want any pressure on you at the time of writing...ok)...tysm
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww what a lovely chapter laksh❤️
I am loving this jalal more and more
I was laughing when jalal said to doctor that he will break his leg and then he should laugh on him🤣
Jo realized finally that he's the one who loves her so much😃😃 Chalo baat " I Like u jalal" tak to pohnch gai😆 waiting for "I love you jalal"😉😛
After that just like jodha I couldn't hold more and laughed hard when Doctor said "plz spare me"🤣
Indeed you are lucky jo to have jalal as ur husband😉
and wait... he lifted her in his arms twice and she felt secure❤️❤️
precap: first date😲😊⭐️
Waiting waiting😆

Thanks for the pm dearie🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
I just loved the update bangaram
Wow jalal is such a loving and caring husband
jodha is so lucky to have him by her side
But poor doctor ... jalal literally scared him like anything.
And im happy that she started liking him
Precap sounds good
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww... awesome yet cute update Lakshmi
Love it yaar
Poor the doctor.. he treated by Jalal 😆
Wow.. precap... first date..
Eagerly waiting..
Thanks a lot for the pm dear :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic update😆
poor doctor😛
jodha get to know about jalal's care for her
update soon
thnkx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat an update...😊
Ja want to break d bones of doctor dat was very funny..🤣
A new journey for Jo has started ...
Eagerly waiting for next update..
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments dears..
Love u all...


CHAPTER 36:

Jalal: u didn't ate anything na.. let's go home.. I will cook something for u..

Jodha: jalalll... home food aaa.. puts a yacky face... no ..plz...

Jalal: smiles at her.. ok ok.. tell me what do u want??

Jodha: biryani..chicken..

Jalal: now.. jodha.. look at the time..it's 12 am.. where will we get biryani now/?

Jodha: we will try jalal.. some restaurant will be open..

Jalal: jodha.. have u gone mad?? U want to go to restaurant now?? After all this??

Jodha: won't u do this for ur jodha jalal.. starts fake tears.. puts a puppy face.. & between u are there for me to lift.. so plz plz plz jalal.. my jalal is a sweet guy na.. plz plz..

Jalal melts looking at her pout face..& says ok ok ok.. stop acting.. we will go ok na...

Takes her to the restaurant..open roof...total complete city is glowing in lights.. late night so not much crowd.. only few are there..
he carry her to the table.. she snaked her hands around his neck happily.. she is enjoying his caring.. where as jalal is enjoying her closeness ..he is happy hugging her to his heart .. & he ordered her favorite food..

Soon food came..

Both started eating..

Jalal: let me call to karthik once.. for salim..

Jodha: ok..yeah.

Jalal calls to karthik..

Karthik: hello jalal. How is jodha now??

Jalal: how is salim??

Karthik: he is sleeping.. he is fine..

Jalal: y u didn't tell me about jodha in the morning?? U took her to the normal hospital.. that bloody bas***d didn't examine properly.. she got hair line fracture..u know.. u are gone ra tomorrow in my hands..

Jodha grabs phone from jalal..
& says.. Annayya.. I am fine.. don't think much about me.. bring salim tomorrow plz..ok na.. don't worry about jalal.. I can handle him..sleep now. Good night.. hungs up the phone..

Jalal: jodha.. y u took the phone?? He deserves my punishment.. u don't know how I felt when I saw u at that condition.. I was almost.. stops.. he got tears... but hides from jodha.. turns other side..

Jodha places her hand on his hand & says.. jalal I am fine.. pain is there..but now it is fine.. u are with me na.. I only told Annayya to don't tell about all this to u.. I don't want to give tension while u are away.. I only suggested to go near by hospital.. Annayya asked lot of times to doctor said.. but that stupid doctor said normal.. so plz.. leave it jalal.. plz.. have food..I am really good..few days. & moreover we are in our first date.. u are screaming on me...

Jalal: first date????

Jodha: I mean I mean.. her words get stammered...(she don't know how she said first date..)

Jalal smiles...yeah we came first time out for dinner na.. first outing...

Jodha: yeah yeah...

Jodha pov:
what happened to me.. how can I so comfortable with jalal.. am I starting falling for him.. no no .. I am not.. but I like the way he hold me.. I feel so secure & happy in his hug.. his warmth.. oh god.. what's happening?? Jodha.. it is just friendship...that's it.. don't think much.. ok.. enjoy this moment.. he is helping u that's it.. don't get more ideas in ur mind..stop thinking.. i have to control on my tongue.. it always slips in front of jalal..

End of pov.

Jalal pov:

Oh Sonu.. I love u soo much.. I can't live without u Sonu.. I will be dead if anything happens to u.. u r my life.. still I don't know y I love u this much.. I was so worried for u.. I will never leave u.. & what happened to u suddenly.. r u started feeling for me??. oh god.. really.. the way u behave.. if it is true I am the most happiest person on the earth.. hahaha..first date that to after ur fracture.. I think we are the most different & difficult couple on the earth.. but I love u more..still I have hope... u will love me one day.. I will wait for that day..love u more Sonu..

End of pov.


Both having food..
Both are loving each other..
One is loving her endlessly..
But she still don't know about her feelings.. she is in confusion...

Talked few things about office..
Completed their dinner cum first date...

Returns to home..

Jalal takes her to their room...


Precap:

Jalal: give a promise to me jodha...

Confession...
haha.. what u people think ?? Is jodha going to confess?? Wait for it...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely chapter dear⭐️👏👏
I was amazed to see jo's antics just to get biryani chicken😆
She was very comfortable with jalal.. she said "my jalal is a sweet guy na" and all the time I was like😲

Poor kartik had to face jalal's wrath😆😆
But jodha saved him only to get embarassed in front of him🤣
"First date"❤️ but our jalal is indeed a sweet guy.. he got her out from embarassement and made a casual remark.. yeah first outing😃

There povs were beautiful dear.. I was laughing on line.. First date that too after ur fracture😆😆

I am loving this jalal and ur story more and more with each chapter laksh❤️

Waiting for next chapter😊
and yes I don't think jodha will confess her love so soon.. 😛
Thanks for the pm dear😊
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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