Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1. - Page 35

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993

Nice update
Jo-Ja united
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

PART 2

"If you so wanted your ex girlfriend to warm your bed then accept it in front of me like a man. Stop acting like a cowardly eunuch."

god , even am shocked , indeed she is too much annoyed & jalal's indifference added more to her resentment . she was piqued at that moment .

hearing her , jalal also got filled with indignation said some unpleasent things shocking her to the core . Too much involved with their insecurities , they lost it infront of their egos , thus losing each other...

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

see your wish got fulfilled , exactly 70 likes on 2nd part...😆

Hey Payal

All the 3 parts were awesome. You rock dear⭐️
But we were shocked by your outburst on the readers. But I agree one should atleast like if not write a comment.

By the way the last chappy was sizzling, I hope its not complete yet😉😳
I loved JoJa friends for making Ja jealous to an extent to leave aside his ego and patch up. True friends😃
About first chapter, it was very obvious for Jo to behave in that manner but she could have heard him once.
And then comes the writing style, you are just awesome.

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

PART 3

finally , after lots of nakhras & jalal's day dreaming , they patched up...

& the much desired romance started...

must say you pick very appealing songs for your storyline counting this one , it only made things more pleasing...

you are really an astonishing writer payal di , write so well all this romance part , it was too hot , steamy , really good one di ...

lastly , jalal also understood how good friends he got , who played their part well & made him realize what he is missing on , ultimately this realization united him with his ladylove...

awesomely written ts payal .enjoyed your changed writing style in recent updates as well as old one.insecurity and misunderstanding mix with his ego break their relation . friends play their roll to unit them .jealousy ,love and care break ego shell of jalal and love blooming again after separation😛. 👏

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Hey Payal

All the 3 parts were awesome. You rock dear⭐️
But we were shocked by your outburst on the readers. But I agree one should atleast like of not write the comments.

By the way the last chappy was sizzling, I hope its not complete yet😉😳
I loved JoJa friends for making Ja jealous to an extent to leave aside his ego and patch up. True friends😃
About first chapter, it was very obvious for Jo to behave in that manner but she could have heard him once.
And then comes the writing style, you are just awesome.

Originally posted by: 155pari

Lovely update diii!!!!

Jo has so much rage for Ja...

Surya and Abdul in full mood to re-unite the lovers...

After a long time both are back...

And finally they are together.!

yeah!!!

So cute...!

Update soon!

Thanx for the pm!!!😃