Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1.

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

What yes 😡 ?

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: avika444

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Kya hua dii ??

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#333

PART 1

wow , jodha in red dress , can imagine how tantalizing she must be looking... & her one look made someone's heart race ...

anyways , flashback part was good , both were reminiscing their happy moments of past .

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Geetanjali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Nice update
Jo-Ja united
thanks for pm

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#335

PART 2

"If you so wanted your ex girlfriend to warm your bed then accept it in front of me like a man. Stop acting like a cowardly eunuch."

god , even am shocked , indeed she is too much annoyed & jalal's indifference added more to her resentment . she was piqued at that moment .

hearing her , jalal also got filled with indignation said some unpleasent things shocking her to the core . Too much involved with their insecurities , they lost it infront of their egos , thus losing each other...

Edited by cute.manasi - 9 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Cmon guys.. Read, like and comment.😆

Last 2 parts got very less likes.. why u guys feel pain in ur
fingers to hit like button.😡😡

I am waiting for your likes and comments on last part.. Else no update of any other story till I get atleast 70 likes on last part of this story😆

see your wish got fulfilled , exactly 70 likes on 2nd part...😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

PART 3

finally , after lots of nakhras & jalal's day dreaming , they patched up...

& the much desired romance started...

must say you pick very appealing songs for your storyline counting this one , it only made things more pleasing...

you are really an astonishing writer payal di , write so well all this romance part , it was too hot , steamy , really good one di ...

lastly , jalal also understood how good friends he got , who played their part well & made him realize what he is missing on , ultimately this realization united him with his ladylove...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: mamtasingla
amazing update payal😃

Thankyou😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: avika444
Omg payal ur too good in writing hot romantic stuff dear
>>> Thankyou😆

Simply superb , finally the misunderstanding clouds faded away
And our jajo apologised for their mistakes
But first one was jalal ,how sweet
>>> Boys should apologise first na..😆 So I make jalal to bow down before jo. Afterall we girls like such boys only😆

Aww they expressed their feelings and then ahem ahem
I'm tongue tied here 😉
>>> Kyu?? Gala kharab hai??🤣

Great shot payal
Wish I could say continue soon
But its a TS right ,so its the end of the story
>>> Yep. Story finished😛 Thanks dear😊

Thanks for the pm payal
Love u dearie
>>> Love u 2 dearie❤️

P.S I loved the song payal , appt for the situation
By the way kounsi movie ka hai ??
>>> Thankyou. I loved the song too😆
Movie name's Khamoshiyan

🤗

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
PART 1

wow , jodha in red dress , can imagine how tantalizing she must be looking... & her one look made someone's heart race ...

anyways , flashback part was good , both were reminiscing their happy moments of past .

Thanks dear😊

Yeah I loved the dress too😉

btw funny emojis😆