Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1. - Page 30

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Oo god payal what I read in part 2 was Jalal's dream... haha poor jalal...

Finally he left his ego nd bow down for his love jodha...

Wow lovely there superb hot romance payal. ...

Surya also want joja to be together again. ...

Ooo jalal cant be away from jodha ready for round 2...

Thanks for pm payal. ..

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Awesome update dear..
soo hot nd romantic..

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Thanks for pm dr

Originally posted by: vjctpt378

ha ha short n sweet story...:-) loved it...

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Excellent, superb and utterly romantic. Song hot and beautiful and perfect for the situation.😳

Originally posted by: Bthakur

Your are such a marvellous writer. I really loved your all stories.

Fabulous update dear 👏

Finally their misunderstanding it's clear.

Jodha - jalal hot romance superb.

Happy ending.

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Nice story ... 😊 thanx for the pm & keep updating like this nly ... it was a pleasant shock to see back to back updates frm u ...

Originally posted by: anu012

Fabulous update dear
hot & romantic ... loved it
keep writting dear

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: GERUA

fantastic update

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

he he ok ok I am not saying anything now😆

Thanks dear🤗