Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1. - Page 31

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Wow...payal.. finally... got the update..

>>> Yep😛

It was superb.. & hot update..

>>> Thanks dear🤗

Finally jalal bows..hahaha...that's what girls want..

Poor boys I can say...😉

>>> he he yes I am with jodha na so I made jalal to apologize first😆

But I liked when jodha said sorry tooo..

Even she is at mistake..😳

>>>> Yes she slapped him.. she was insecure and she was not going to him due to her ego😛

But after jalal sorry only she expressed her feelings...😆😆

>>>> That's our janam sidh adhikar😆😆

As expected hot hot update payal..

Beautiful.. but I felt little short dear..

>>>> I didn't want to write much mature content in this story so I kept it short dear😊

Waiting for temptation os payal...

Jalal wants her again.. 😉

So we also wants again payal😆😆

>>> Ohk😆 I"ll update in few days 😉

Beautiful & lovely os...👏

>>> Thankyou so much laksh🤗

Thanks for the pm...🤗

>>>> You're most welcome dear😊

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

🤗 !

But kis liye 😕 ?

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Wow super hot update. ... finally jj United.

Originally posted by: harini1482002

It was awesome sissy , will be waiting for your next TS

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

awesome TS.i loved it.Actually i love all ur stories,full of love ur writing is flawless as crystal as Baikal Lake.thanks for pm.please update ur other stories ,too.

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

For reading and liking this story dear😊

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Unressed on pg 1 !

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Well , in tht case , a bigger Thanks to you !

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

me?? why??😕