Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1. - Page 16

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Yep I'll update soon ashu😛

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

he he Yep both are wrong but isn't it happens in may cases that a couple broke up because of their ego and a small misunderstanding.

I wanted to write something realistic so I showed that they both're wrong at their places.

well yes.. I second u. Boys are born to please us.😆 Well said👍🏼😉

See I made jalal come to jo first 😆

Thankyou so much dear😊

I'll update very soon😉

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

??

I know aapka soon 😆 !

Anyways , will b waiting ...or kr b kya skte h😆 !

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Yep...they has to come us.. Even if we are at mistake...

Hahahha😉

Originally posted by: sho123

its superb payal
they broke up for such a small misunderstanding
thanks for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

😡😡

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Itna krodh aap k swaasth liye haanikaarak h baalike 😊 !

😛 😉 😆 😳 🤣 !

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Now I"ll definitely take 2 -3 weeks to update it's last part and that update will not be for u as U are too innocent ashu🤣