Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1.

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

she's not that innocent laksh😆
she knows what's gonna happen in next chapter that's why she is asking to update soon😆

Yep Payal..

I can see eagerness in her...

Right ashu???

U are really innocent ashu..Hahaha...😳

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Haaain 😳 Sissy 😭 Jalal will not kill her na 😭 ? Ur kidding na 😭

Payal look...

Innocent No.2 agaya...

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

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What happened ashu Baby...

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We are just saying that u are innocent... That's it...Hai na Payal...

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Yep Payal..
I can see eagerness in her...
Right ashu???
U are really innocent ashu..Hahaha...😳

Lxshmi diii...aap b meri innocence k peeche pd gaye 😭 !

Mai too iss liye maang ri hu update coz abi abi dii ne mu j btaaya k Jalal will kill her 😭 !

Aap khud hi btaoo agar Jalal usse maar dega to fir whom will he hold in the rain 😕 ?

Payal dii ne itna confuse kr diya iss nanhi c bachi ko k kya btauu , huh !

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Payal look...
Innocent No.2 agaya...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
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No dear he will not kill her. Infact he will love her but I really doubt that u would like his way of loving her😆

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

What happened ashu Baby...
😳
We are just saying that u are innocent... That's it...Hai na Payal...

Wo to mai hu prr Jalal usse kyu maarega 😕 🤔 ?

I mean glti to ussi ki thi naa 😛 , usse mnana chahiye tha Jo ko too kayide se too Jodha ko Jalal ko maarna chahiye right 😕 😳 !

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

What happened ashu Baby...
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We are just saying that u are innocent... That's it...Hai na Payal...

Yep she's very innocent. I will update temptaion os in few days but she"ll not read that one too😆

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sorathsheikh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Lxshmi diii...aap b meri innocence k peeche pd gaye 😭 !
Mai too iss liye maang ri hu update coz abi abi dii ne mu j btaaya k Jalal will kill her 😭 !
Aap khud hi btaoo agar Jalal usse maar dega to fir whom will he hold in the rain 😕 ?
Payal dii ne itna confuse kr diya iss nanhi c bachi ko k kya btauu , huh !

Muje bhi confuse kr dia ha ashu 😕 Jallu kiun marega usse 😕 Bechari ka kasur kia ha