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rameshwari11

@rameshwari11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#981

27 chap give some piece and hope that jodha accepct jalal with love last give their happy to 3 chaps whole stories are very pain so give last 4 or 5 chap with happy life of their give one more child

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#982

Awesome akka

Jalal's confession is highlight

Hope Jo understands soon

Update soon akka

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#983

Wow jo decided to marry ja nd told the reason for marriage. .atleast now ja did one right thing. ... next part really scaring me..hope ja will handle the situation wisely. .continue soon nd do pm

Edited by RSlovesJA - 9 years ago

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: rameshwari11
27 chap give some piece and hope that jodha accepct jalal with love last give their happy to 3 chaps whole stories are very pain so give last 4 or 5 chap with happy life of their give one more child

Should I end in 4 or 5 chapters???

I am thinking to write more...

Plz girls all are thinking same??

Should I end in 4 or 5 chapters??? 😭

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#985

Lovely updates,akka😃

Jo accepted to marry him,even though for Salim and Vaishu has become Jallu's behen.

Jalal has now got a clear picture of what had happened and liked his gesture😊

Proceed with ur own ideas.Don't end it soon pls.

Waiting for the third update of the day😳

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Should I end in 4 or 5 chapters???
I am thinking to write more...
Plz girls all are thinking same??
Should I end in 4 or 5 chapters??? 😭

we want complete story. how they got married and after that how they will come close..

It must not be end in 4-5 chapters laksh😡😡😊

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

we want complete story. how they got married and after that how they will come close..
It must not be end in 4-5 chapters laksh😡😡😊

Yep...even i am thinking same... lot of chapters are there...

But if anybody wants to end it...I will do it... 😭

Which I don't want to do it...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Yep...even i am thinking same... lot of chapters are there...
But if anybody wants to end it...I will do it... 😭
Which I don't want to do it...

This woman wants everyone to end their stories here😡

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Should I end in 4 or 5 chapters???
I am thinking to write more...
Plz girls all are thinking same??
Should I end in 4 or 5 chapters??? 😭

Write it as you plan don't wrap up in hurry burry want to read more .

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago