Akdha os: A Time For Love Note on page 25 (2/4/2016)

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

continue this one also ...

why did I ask?? 🤣

Btw loved this emoji😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

why did I ask?? 🤣
Btw loved this emoji😆

😆 plzzz...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

😆 plzzz...

I already said that I will write it's next part whenever I get time😊

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

I already said that I will write it's next part whenever I get time😊

reallly...😳

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

reallly...😳

Yes dear😊

many of them were asking to update it's 2nd part so I decided to update their SR in 2nd part but it will take time dear😛

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Yes dear😊
many of them were asking to update it's 2nd part so I decided to update their SR in 2nd part but it will take time dear😛

will wait patiently...😳

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

will wait patiently...😳

Thanks dear😊😆

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
It's amazing
>>>aww Really??

First of all I am mesmerized with your wonderful skill of writing. Your lucid language and juggling with words are really appreciating.😳👏
>>> Thanks a ton dear🤗

The story is a cute one, drunken Jodha opening her heart out in front of her lover just like he had done in the show is something we always had wanted to see😃... But the way she expressed her love is really a touchy one. 😳
>>> I am so glad to read this😃

Jalal is good like always in this OS- controlled, understanding, sometimes mad at her,sometime sad and jeulous of her old fiance suryaban, sometimes too caring...you have portrayed both his vulnerability and rigidity very beautifully.
>>>> You noticed his every shade and I have no words to let u know that how pleased I am with this dear😊 Tysm❤️

But Jodha outshines Jalal with her deewangi❤️...when she pleads to not give Benazir the place of Jodha in his heart, or when she utters 'don't hate me'...
>>> ❤️
The whole scenario after the conversation was divine!
>>> I am in daze with ur comment stuti😆
Thank u for giving me the chance to read this wonderful os.⭐️
>>> Thanks to u for this loveliest comment dear🤗