Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 49

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👏Omg... Sherry... Superb ... awesome... Love it... what a shocking heart wrenching beginning... I questioned few time why Jodha ? Why? How Jalal will survive... How he will take care of two kids?

Sherry I have not read your work before...but I just loved this os... In your simple words you brought tears in my eyes... last kiss... there is no tomorrow... ringing in my ear... What an amazing start.

Diary: I love how this two cute kids met... the way you portrait bonding is amazing... I just wanted to read further and not write comment... It something about your writing I don't know what it is but I wanted read more... I love Jalal how protective he became towards Jodha in such a young age and took care of her until college not realizing his friendship turned into an intense love. He regrets for not realizing until her marriage is finalized even after that he didn't admit and after reading her disappointment I can imagine how painful for him. One side I am feeling sad... and other side I want to read more about this couple how they bonded and celebrated their life together.

Poor Jo... One side his silence tore her apart...In many years first time when she really wanted him on her birthday he was not their... eventually she agreed to get married... and other After realizing his love frustration anger .anxiety instead of confessing to her he had to go to London for sake of his abbu. But der aaye durust aaye'... What a dreamy confession Sherry... Love it... the way Jalal confessed and kissed her to shut her up... omg... Superb... and Jo also denied his proposal... And shocked him...hehehe ... superb...

Ohhh they got marry on Valentine Day... beautiful chapter...

I loved how both of them trying to please each other by bringing wedding dress of their mothers. You know I was so lost in the chapter and forget for a while the reality of the diary ... Jodha is no more... nowhere but only resides in his heart and diary... such painful ending...

Without thinking second thought Jalal promised ... He bought her home... five years ago... wow... so touchy... It is making me cry... he loves her so much...

Where is your promise JO??? Not Fair... Ohhh...

Love how U wrote sensual scene... blushing J Enjoyed Jalal teasing Jo and demanding for kiss for helping her in return... Honey moon in Paris sounds promising...

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👏Omg... Sherry... Superb ... awesome... Love it... what a shocking heart wrenching beginning... I questioned few time why Jodha ? Why? How Jalal will survive... How he will take care of two kids?

Sherry I have not read your work before...but I just loved this os... In your simple words you brought tears in my eyes... last kiss... there is no tomorrow... ringing in my ear... What an amazing start.

Diary: I love how this two cute kids met... the way you portrait bonding is amazing... I just wanted to read further and not write comment... It something about your writing I don't know what it is but I wanted read more... I love Jalal how protective he became towards Jodha in such a young age and took care of her until college not realizing his friendship turned into an intense love. He regrets for not realizing until her marriage is finalized even after that he didn't admit and after reading her disappointment I can imagine how painful for him. One side I am feeling sad... and other side I want to read more about this couple how they bonded and celebrated their life together.

Poor Jo... One side his silence tore her apart...In many years first time when she really wanted him on her birthday he was not their... eventually she agreed to get married... and other After realizing his love frustration anger .anxiety instead of confessing to her he had to go to London for sake of his abbu. But der aaye durust aaye'... What a dreamy confession Sherry... Love it... the way Jalal confessed and kissed her to shut her up... omg... Superb... and Jo also denied his proposal... And shocked him...hehehe ... superb...

Ohhh they got marry on Valentine Day... beautiful chapter...

I loved how both of them trying to please each other by bringing wedding dress of their mothers. You know I was so lost in the chapter and forget for a while the reality of the diary ... Jodha is no more... nowhere but only resides in his heart and diary... such painful ending...

Without thinking second thought Jalal promised ... He bought her home... five years ago... wow... so touchy... It is making me cry... he loves her so much...

Where is your promise JO??? Not Fair... Ohhh...

Love how U wrote sensual scene... blushing J Enjoyed Jalal teasing Jo and demanding for kiss for helping her in return... Honey moon in Paris sounds promising...

thank u so much di for ur such beautiful appreciation
i with give u a proper feedback soon
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Finally i updated after two three months
Sorry for that and thank u for waiting for the update till now

Recap-
Atgah:Plz if u both respect me u will go
Jalal:K fine but when we will return u will only rest
Atgah:PROMISE
Flashback end
Jalal:U kept ur PROMISE uncle but in a different way;said with teary eyes
Chapter-6
Jodhas Diary
U know baby On Our first day of marriage ur father loved to tease me and he flabbergasted me with his surprise and also with the intensity of his love for me
Reading this a smile creep on jalals face
Flashback
After having a family breakfast jodha enters in her sorry their room for packing her and her hubbys staff
Jodha:Wow i am flying to paris with my jalal
i cant believe it i will sit in plane for first time ; thinking this jodha stands on stool for the bag that was on the wardrobe
Jodha:Now where is this bag why my hand is not reaching it;murmured while stretching her hand to hold the bag
Finally after many attempts jodha succeeded but the moment she took her first step down from stool she lost her balances but instead of facing ground she finds herself in a strong muscular arms which is of course of our jalal
Jodha:Thank god u came on time jo
Jalal:Of course jo i have to
how can i let my jo touch ground
Jodha:But now u can let me touch ground otherwise how will i complete our packing
So plz put me down
Jalal:But i am enjoying carrying u like this;said while winking towards her
Jodha:Jalal plz na
Jalal:No;said while grinning over her helplessness
Knowing her jalal very well jodha thinks of some way about freeing herself from her naughty husband and finally she got one
Jodha:if u wont put me down then how will i do packing for our honeymoon and if i wont do packing how will we will go for our honeymoon to paris;said while making innocent face
Getting her point and smartness
Jalal:U have point jo but this excuse is not enough for letting u free from my grip;said while smirking towards her
Seeing her plan backfired
Jodha:K fine but u don't put me down right now i will not go anywhere with u and will remain only in this room;said with pout
Jalal:K i won't mind caging u in this room just u and me
In fact that would be more romantic; said with teasing look
Jodha:Jalal!
Jalal:What i did;said while making an innocent face
Jodha:U very well know what i am indicating;said while giving him deadly glares
Jalal:K fine i am putting u down;saying this jalal puts her down
Jodha:Thank u;said while settling her saree and was about to move but jalal holds her hand and captures her in between his arms while placing both hands on her waist
Jodha:What r u doing jalal;asked with confused look
Jalal:As i freed u
Now what i will have in return;asked while pulling her more close
Jodha:What now u want something in return on this too;said with fake shocking look
Jalal:Of course jo
But dont worry i wont ask for kiss
Jodha:Really!;asked with suspicious look
Jalal:Yup really
Jodha:Then what u want in return;asked while placing both her arms around his neck
jalal bends his lips near her ears
Jalal:I want u to wear short dresses in our honeymoon trip;said in ears while bitting her earlobe as a result of which sending shivers in her spine
Jodha:N.NO i wont wear any short dresses;said while lowering her eyes
Jalal:If u wont then i will not stop doing this;with evil look
Jodha:What; asked with confused look
Jalal:This
Saying this jalal start tickling jodha on the stomach and as a result of which she starts laughing loudly
Jodha:P..Plz J..Jal..al
St..op It
Wh...at un..cle wi..ll thi..nk of me hea..ring my lau..gh...ter;speaked between her laughing
Jalal:No i won't first promise u will wear short dresses;said while decreasing his speed
Jodha:N..no i wo..nt
Jalal:K as ur wish;saying this jalal increases his speed
During this tickling process jodha falls upon bed and jalal above her
Jalal:Even now u wont agree;said while along with tickling jalal starts licking jodhas neck
Jodha:J.al..al P.l.z i ca.nt ta..ke it an..y..mo..re ;said between her heavy breaths
Jalal:So u r agreeing on my demand; said while giving her winning look
Jodha:Y.es
Hearing this jalal stop his tickling and licking section
After taking finally a sound relief
Jodha rests her head on jalals chest while lying in that same position
Jodha:U r really bad and naughty
u know that;complained while hitting on his chest playfully
Jalal:That i know jo
but what to do seeing u i can't hold back my naughtiness;said while pulling her closer
Jodha:And that i know
With this both start laughing while looking into each others eyes and with this jalal start descending his face towards jodhas face and seeing jalal approaching and reading his intentions through his eyes jodha closes her eyes in shyness and taking it as yes jalal firstly kisses her for forehead then cheeks and finally captures her rosy lips
The moment his rough lips touched her soft ones both transformed into another world
He then started kissing her lower lip making her urging for more and sooner unknown to herself all her shyness fades away and she parted her lips inviting him to savour her mouth ,their tongue started playing for dominance and neither of them was ready to give up and during this jalals hand which were freely traveling on jodhas back untie jodhas blouse knot
And finally both parted for air , his forehead touched hers while they grasped for air
Looking into each other eyes both knows what they want but before they could take next step sudden Ringing of mobi force them to stop
Jalal:Now who want to stop me from romancing with my wife;said with frustration while getting up from bed
Seeing jalals frustrating face jodha starts chuckling
after seeing the id caller jalal control his temper and picks up the call
Abdul:Hi jalal
Jalal:Hi Buddy
Abdul:I hope i didn't disturbed u
Jalal:No not at all;said while trying to sound normal
Abdul:How's my sis and atgah uncle told me u both r going to Paris for honeymoon tomorrow night
Jalal:ur sis is good and yup we r going tomorrow at night
I am sure u didnt call to ask about ur sis nor about conformation regarding our honeymoon trip
Abdul:Ya ur right
i called u as we all friends has a arranged a party for u and jodha
Jalal:But why
Abdul:I guess on ur marriage ;said in amusing tone
Jalal:That i know idoit but what was its need
i mean throwing a party i don't think there is any need of it
Abdul:U know na ur boths marriage done quite hastily and except me none of our friend was present their So now all friends want to celebrate this moment
Jalal:But
Abdul:i know what u will say now as u both r going for honeymoon so u must do packing and shopping but u r leaving on tomorrow night and more overly u still have today's half day
So plz yaar come na
Jalal:But
Before jalal could say no or made some excuse jodha snatches mobi from his hand
Jodha:abdul bhai
We will come
Hearing this jalal was about to say something but jodha puts her hand on his mouth for preventing him Saying anything
Abdul:Hi lil sis
Thank u so much i knew it u won't let me down
Jodha:So where and on what time we have to come
Abdul: At Panensula hotel at 9:00 pm
As u both r guests u can come late
Jodha:K we will be there
Abdul:K lil sis
see u both
bye
Jodha:Bye bhai
With this jodha place the mobi on table and also takes off her hand from jalals mouth who was not giving her so pleasing looks on her decision
Jalal:Why u agreed jo
Jodha:If i wont agree it will hurt Abdul bhai;said while controlling her mischievous grin
Jalal:And what about me
ur decision hurts me a lot;said with fake disappointed look
Jodha:Ohhh really
But its ur punishment for troubling me this much
Jalal:What i troubled u when; asked with innocent face
Jodha:Sorry hubby ur this look wont work on me;said while giving him teasing look
Jodha:K now can i resume my work hubby as u can u see i have to do packing plus also choose a dress for party;said while heading towards their wardrobe
But before Jalal could compalin further msg beeping seeks his attention
It was from Abdul
Jalal:What he want now; murmured
and starts reading msg
Msg:Buddy i forgot to told u we have booked everyone's room there so u both r staying at hotel with us tonight of course in honeymoon sweet
Reading this jalals vanished smile again appears on his lips
Jalal:Thanks Buddy;says in low tone
Jodha:Did u say something;asked while turning towards jalal
On this jalal just turn his head in no with a poker face and with this jodha again turns her back towards jalal and resume her work
Its only after this jalals eyes fell on jodhas tempting bare back especially on open strings and naughtiness again comes in his naughty mind
With this jalal move towards jodha and places his both Hands on her waist
Jalal:Forget about packing lets stay on bed and finish our work
Jodha:Which work;asked while taking out jalals cloth from wardrobe
Jalal:That work which u left in the morning and ya now too
Understanding her hint jodhas cheeks turns red
And seeing her reaction jalals naughtiness gets green signal
Jalal:And even ur back saying this to me
plz jalal Complete ur unfinish work;said while roaming his finger near her upper waistline
With his this unexpected touch jodha starts gasping and seeing her reaction jalal starts smirking
Jodha:J.Jalal plz don't start now
Packing is still and we neither choosed any dress for party;said while controlling over her emotions
Jalal:But we still have time and ses there r so many dresses we can choose in a minute
Jodha:But i don't have much dresses
Jalal:Who said u dont have much dresses;asked while coming out of his naughty mood
Jodha:U can see urself
I have only three four dresses;said while pointing towards her dresses
Jalal:But why u r checking in this wardrobe
U should check ur wardrobe;said while turning her towards himself
Jodha:My wardrobe Means
I thought we r sharing this wardrobe, its our wardrobe;asked with confused look and hurtful look
Jalal:Jaan how can we share this small wardrobe and how can u think i will buy for u only three four dresses
Come i will show u ur wardrobe; saying this jalal took jodha in the attached room
And the moment jodha enters in she gasps with shock and surprise
Jodha:J...Jalal what's all this;asked with surprising tone
Jalal:This is my jaans wardrobe; said while holding her from back and placing his chin on her left shoulder
Jodha:but it seems like a clothing mall;said with disbelief look
Jalal:Ya its ur own clothing mall
From where u can wear whichever dress u want and that dresses in our wardrobe is only for todays morning
I just placed them so u can choose whichever u want to wear on todays morning ONLY
Hearing this jodha turns her face towards him
Jodha:But what's need of it
How could i wear so much dresses in this single life ;asked with an impossible look
Jalal:But who said u have to wear them in this life jaan.
Jodha:what do u mean;asked with confused look again
Jalal:U will wear them only for this month and for next month we will buy new ones but this time we will go for shopping together;said in a very casual manner
Hearing this jodhas mouth got wide open in 'O' shape
Jodha:U r kidding right
How can i
i mean how could u buy so much dresses for me and now demanding wearing them in this month and we will buy this much dresses for next month too;asked with utter shock look
Jalal:I am saying what u urself asked from me as PROMISE
Jodha:Me!!!
When!!
Jalal:When u was 12 and i was 14
Jodha:Dont tell me u r talking about that promise which i took from u on Abdul Bhais birthday party
Flashback
Abdul was about to cut cake but jodhas sudden entryseeks everyones attention not due to her beauty but due to her not so good dress
One of girl whispers she is wearing her regular clothes
Other one she dont know its birthday party and she should dress decently and stylishly
then other see her dress is so old ! also clumsy
Hearing this all start laughing
Although they whispered but it was loud enough to be heard by all and make jodha laughing stock
Hearing such comments jodha runs away from there
There were two souls who were fuming after hearing such comments for their loved one from which one was jalal and other was abdul as from the first day of his school he considered jodha as his soul sis
After running away from there jodha and seeing her running jalal too runs after her signalling abdul that he can take care of it
Running from there jodha sits on a bench of the lawn and continue crying while looking up at the sky jalal who was looking for her too comes there and quietly sits beside her
Jalal:Why u r crying jo on their useless gossips
Jodha:The..y we..re say..ing ri..ght jal..al i a..m look..ing ug.ly as my dre..ss is ve..ry old and no..t fan..cy lik..e th..em;said between her Hiccups
Jalal:Firstly Stop crying otherwise
Jodha:Otherwise what jalal;asked while looking at him confusingly
Jalal:Otherwise ur already red rose will become ultimate red;said with amusement while weeping her tears affectionately
Hearing this jodha smiles a Little
Jalal:Now about what they all said doesnt matter
Ur looking most beautiful jo as u have most beautiful heart and what matters is our heart not cloths;said while placing his hand on her hand giving her emotional support
Jodha:If my heart is so beautiful then why my mama mami not bought anything for me and why they have gave me only three four dresses to wear and not bought me a new one until it fully torned and u know they shout on me when i demanded for new dress ;asked with tearful eyes
Jalal: Forgot about them
my jo is so beautiful that if u will wear fancy and stylish clothes then some evil eye can fell on u and i can't take that so indirectly they r protecting my jo ;said while trying his best to convince her with his not so convincing explanation
Jodha:Really!
Jalal:Yes really;agreed with fake trust me look
Jodha: U know i still remember mom dad always bought for me new clothes on each and every occasion
i really miss them if they were here then;said while looking towards sky on which light stars were seeing as it was twilight time
Jalal:Then;asked with curiosity look
Jodha:Then i will ask them to give me a big wardrobe
Jalal:Ohhh how big
Jodha:Almost equal to a big room
Jalal:Oh so u will ask for a wardrobe room
Jodha:Yup
Jalal:and what next
Jodha:Ammm; said while thinking Jodha:Oh ya i will ask them to fill whole the room for me with latest collection and u know what i won't repeat those clothes after one month;said in dreamy tone
Jalal:Ohhh so those full wardrobe clothes will be only for ur one month use
Jodha:Yup and after one month i will refill my wardrobe with new ones;said while showing her full teeth
Jalal:And what about the used ones jo
what u will do of them
Jodha:Oh about them i will give them to needy people
Jalal:Only after one use
Jodha:Yup after all they all have right too to wear beautiful and latest clothes
All the time jalal just Looking at jodhas innocence
Saying this jodha again starts crying making jalal come out of his adorning state
Jalal:What happened jo why u again started crying ;asked while cupping her smallface between his not so big plams
Jodha:Th..is w..ill ne..ver hap..pen jal..al as m..om d
.ad is no m..ore th..en who w
.ill do it for me an..d h..ow wil..l i hel..p oth..ers; said between her tears
Jalal:I will complete ur this wish jo ;said while weeping her tears
Jodha:U!;asked with questioning look
Jalal:Yes me;said while giving her assuring look
Jodha:PROMISE?;asked while forwarding her hand
Jalal:PROMISE; replied while placing his hand on hers
On this jodha gives him her sweet smile and jalal gives her his determined look
Jalal:Now can we go inside abdul must be waiting for us
Jodha:I dont want to go inside all will again laugh at me;said while turning her head on other side
Jalal:No one will laugh And till u won't go inside Abdul wont cut his cake
Jodha:What abdul bhai didnt cutted his cake
Jalal:How can he when his lil sis is here crying;said while making a fake disappointed face
Jodha:Then what r we doing here
Abdul bhai must be waiting for me for his cake cutting lets go inside; said while getting up from the bench and dragging jalals hand to take him inside
And like jalal said no one laugh at jodha after receiving warning from abdul and deadly glares from jalal who again entered in with jodha
Flashback ends
Jodha:U stupid how could u do this
For completing my one childish wish ;asked with teary eyes while pointing towards the whole wardrobe which was full of clothes
Jalal:Bcoz U took PROMISE from me; said while weeping her tears which was start flowing now
Jodha:But it was my childishness
How can u take it seriously jalal;asked with disbelief look
Jalal:Any word from ur mouth is everything for me jo and for me it is serious and i can go to any limit to complete it;said while cupping her face between his palms affectionately
Jodha:Why jalal
why u love me this much;asked while hugging him tightly
Jalal:Like i said that time u have most beautiful heart and which u always proves jo
On this jodha just keep mum
Jodha:Now after one month we will donate this cloths na;asked with excited tone
On this jalal start laughing
Seeing him laughing
Jodha:Why r u laughing now;asked with confused look
Jalal:Bcoz again u prove that u claim most beautiful heart;said hugging her more tightly
Jodha:Means;asked while breaking the hug
Jalal:that day when i asked what will u do of those used clothes how excitingly u replied u will donate them to needy people even after growing up u feel the same excitement regarding it and when i told u that Abdul is waiting for u
U immediately runs inside forgetting about all the humiliation and fear and today even too u forgot about ur happiness about spwndoq alone time with me said yes to Abdul ur all this kindheartedness makes me adornes u more and ya of course increasing my love for u more but ya thats another thing i realized my true feelings for u quite late as I'm very stupid na;said while making fake sad face
Jodha:Don't u dare to say my jalal stupid
He is best and i am most lucky to have him;said while again throwing herself in his warm hug
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So finally done
I hope u all like it
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Love u all
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