Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

🤣 aree update krne ke bare m bol rhi thi ki go ahead u cn do it..cn update tmmrw😆 kahin jaane ke liye nhi😉
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Originally posted by: lovespari


🤣 aree update krne ke bare m bol rhi thi ki go ahead u cn do it..cn update tmmrw😆 kahin jaane ke liye nhi😉

oh that way kya kro innocent hoo na isslie samzhi nahi 😳
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try?? :(
not jst try...u will have to do it

yeh order hair kajukaju?
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yeh order hair kajukaju?

yup it is an order...aur 2 times kaju bolne ki koi zarurat nhi thi...mai ek hi baat mein samajh gyi thi 🤣
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Originally posted by: kajalparijat

yup it is an order...aur 2 times kaju bolne ki koi zarurat nhi thi...mai ek hi baat mein samajh gyi thi 🤣

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oh that way kya kro innocent hoo na isslie samzhi nahi 😳


oohh aisa..😉 aap kuch jayada hi innocent nhi h..hmm😉 hayye ni kuddi sharma kyu rhi h😉😆
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oohh aisa..😉 aap kuch jayada hi innocent nhi h..hmm😉 hayye ni kuddi sharma kyu rhi h😉😆

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Originally posted by: kajalparijat

sunday means tomorrow!!!!
Ooyyee hoooyyyeee balle balle

today is Sunday😕 update
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K guys Now here we go with its second part

Part -2

After completing all rituals of funeral of jodha,jalal entered in his huge mansion carrying his both infants and entered in their(kids) room as he doesnt want to enter in his and jos room .But on seeing room decorated along with welcoming balloons jalal really got shocked but then he remembered jodha in last days keep shut this rooms saying its a surprise
After keeping both sleeping kids in craddle jalal eye sight catch a glimpse of a dairy on side table,picking it up he recognized it its his jodhas dairy a long tear escape from shattered mans eye as she always hide it from him as jalal always tries to read it.But today she is not here to protect her dairy,turning it in right position jalal finds a note on it "Do read it hubby" reading this without wasting a second jalal open the dairy on whose front pae there is his and jos wedding pic in which he carried Jo And jos is giving her sweetest smile ,seeing this tears again started flowing from his eyes.
Jalal: Why Jo why
why u tke such a PROMISE from me how will I live
this life is a burden for Me now
plz jaan come back ; saying this jalal turned to second page reading first few words jalal understands that Jo started writing it during her pregnancy period

2nd page of Jo's dairy
"Hi baby mumma is here u know its best day of my life as today I got the best news of my life that I am becoming mother and its u bcoz of whom I am getting this title.
U know u bring back smile on ur father's face After the death of Atgah uncle ur father really got depressed but when I share this news with him I could finally see a real and happiest smile on his face.U know baby when I first time saw ur abbu i fell in love with him although I was only 10 years old but still it happens."

Reading this jalal a little smile appeared on his pale face and he reminds the time when he and jodha met for the first time
Flashback
Jalal lost his parents at the age of 12 in a Carr accident and left him with a huge inheritance and a trustworthy servant atgah who took him in new city
Its jalals first day of school and he was moving towards his class but stops at his class gate seeing whole class surrounded a girl in which boys are teasing and taunting her In the name of orphan while girls r enjoying all this ,seeing all this jalal felt bad for girl and anger for others he immediately rush for her rescue
Jalal in high voice : Stop teasing her
Hearing the voice all turned their faces along with jodha to see its owner
Boys got jealous seeing such a handsome boy and girls got blowed out but Jo could not see her rescuer bcoz of so many students
Boy 1- what if we don't and its not ur matter so stay away from this ;and continue their teasing
Hearing this jalals blood got boiled
Jalal:Leave her otherwise
Boy 2- Otherwise what? u will complain teacher or principal
But before The boy could continue jalal puch him on his face and kick the other one on his stomach seeing this all moved back
Jalal: No I will do this
now there is anybody who want to say something
But Whole left the place along with that the two boys for class Only after this Jo and jalal could see each other
Jalal:R u ok
Jodha:Th.. thank Y..you for help...ing m...e
Jalal:But why r they teasing u
Jodha:Bcoz I am orphan
Hearing this jalal felt bad for her
Jalal: So that doesn't mean they can treat u like this
Jodha:Wow actually as I am orphan so nobody do friendship with me
Jalal:So what if u r an orphan
Jodha:They all say its a bad thing and I am bad
Jalal:Its all rubbish
Jodha:How can u say so
Jalal:Bcoz I'm too an orphan
Jodha:What
I am sorry
Jalal:Sorry for what
Jodha: U must feel bad na and now no one will do friendship with u like me
Jalal:So what I don't care
Will u do friendship with me ?
Hearing this
JODHA:Me
Jalal:Yup
why u don't want to do friendship with me?
Jodha:Its just that I can't trust anybody what if u too left me just like my mom and dad
Jalal:I will not
Jodha: PROMISE?
Jalal: PROMISE.
It means u too will not leave me right?
Jodha:PROMISE I will never leave u.
With this both handshake
Flashback ends

Jo's Dairy
'You know baby when I gave ur father this PROMISE their was a spark in his eyes like a spark of Hope in lonely world
And from his eyes I can clearly saw that he meant that PROMISE

Jalal:See Jo I keep my promise its u who left me;saying this fresh tears started flowing from his eyes
He turned next pages to read their journey from school to CLG
There fighting ,helping each other ,supporting in short their love journey which was unknown to them

Jo's Dairy
'You know baby It was last day ofour college when my cruel mama and mami inform me that they fixed my alliance with A boy '
Reading this jalal again went back into flashback
It was last day of CLG jalal was waiting for Jo in their favourite place that is CLG back garden
Jalal:So finally u came and why u missed the class Jo ;saying this he Finds Jo lost somewhere and also her face is turned pale
Jalal:What happen Jo why r u looking so sad
something happen
did ur mama mami done something.
Hearing this the most awaited tears Finally flowed from her beautiful eyes and concerned boy took her in her warm embarce
Jalal:Say na Jo
won't u tell ur jalal
Jodha:JAL..al they fixed my marriage
Hearing this unexpected news the boy got shocked and breaking the hug
Jalal:What !
How can they
I mean suddenly
So what u said to them
Jodha:What can I say
Jalal:What do do u mean
Don't tell me u said yes
Jodha:I don't have choice and reason to say no
Hearing this jalal felt a sting in his heart
Flashback ends

Jo's dairy
'You u know baby that was worst day of my life when I informed ur abbu about my marriage he really got shock I was expecting that he will say those three magical words but alas I thought he never love me

Reading this jalal felt bad and angry on his own stupidity in delaying realizing his true feeling
Jalals POV
I still remember when Jo give me that shocking news my heart got break but only after that I realized my true feelings for her'

WITH This he continued his reading

So done guys

Many requested me to turn jos death into dream or something else but I can't do that guys its demand of my story to kill Jo to show grief over death of the person whom we love the most
Its last part will be updated in next week
Do like and do comment as its really important for me to know ur point of view And sorry for sad os.
Love u all

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