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Originally posted by: Naazrt

hehe sorry i behaved total crazy sometimes haha OK sissy mai abhi upar aapka super update padh ke aayi haan wait.. YIPEEE ME FIRST hhaha..

Originally posted by: harrystyolic

wonderful update sorath

Originally posted by: Naazrt

now iam back after reading your such a lovely emotional update oooh sissy believe me I really don't have words now every words are full of pure love I think that night jaroor shaitan hi tha jalal me Mann me warna jitna WO jodha se pyaar karta hai shayad hi kisi ne kiya ho kisi se haaye Maine to roo hi diya ab what to do aapka update tha hi itna fabulous ki aaj to mai 5-6 aur padhungi oooh sissy what a update sissy what a update jalal and jodha madly in love with each other WO ek doosre se jyada door reh hi nahi sakte haaye their pure love I loved it very much and yess aaj to jodha moti to batane hi wali thi but our hero come at last moment my hero my jallu baby love you shona ..and dii mujhse to jallu ka rona bardaasht hi nahi hota Maine bhi roo diya because your writing skills are amazing sissy amazing its sooo marvellous it really shows reality in each word iam fall for your story again sissy ..now finally jallu confessed and usne apni galti bhi maan li and iam sooo happy for both ki ab jodha ne bhi use maaf Jo kar diya my worlds best couple in the whole world ..and end me Jo kiss the na haaye iam blushing like idiot here hahaha my naughty jallu red me jodha apni wify ko dekhna chahta hai uff sooo romantic scene pehle to mujhe laga ki WO apni so called girlfriends ke chakkar me jodha ko bhool gaya but iam sooo happy that iam wrong how can he forget his lady love his heart because he love his JAAN more than his life ..now both are happy and yaha mai yaha pe sabse jyada happy ..sachchi sissy I really don't want to end this chapter I loved it sooo sooo sooo much its its fantastic fabulous wonderful ...plzzz continue soon OK sissy don't be late na plzzz plzzz plzzz iam dying to read further plzzz na don't be late ...and THANKS FOR PM ME ..
and when you are going to update ek mai aur ek tu haan??
plzzz na ab update kar bhi do na sissy plzzz..

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Res

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Unres dear

Nice chappy

How can her family can't see her pain

Poor Jodha

Is he playing with her again

Plz save her

Update soon buddy

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Sorry for the late reply soru baby

Originally posted by: GERUA

beautiful update

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

wonderful update

Originally posted by: duhasaad

Omg this story is so confusing
Now does Jalal really love her or what???
Jodha still love him how???
And they met after long time and she forgives him that easily
No she should have not forgiven him he doesn't deserve it
And what is happening now
She went back to be his slave who do what he want seriously
Oh I wished to go and punch both of them in the middle of their faces
You know I think this story should continue for ever
Like it has many ups and downs
And every time you make us so excited for the next chappy dear
Like you have to update as soon as possible
You know this story is so different for me as after knowing its a real story I'm really excited like I want to know what will happen next like I don't know how to tell you my feelings
Just continue sooon sora
Love you

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

wonderful update dear
but I really don't understand jalal
he really loves her or now also playing with her
he enjoy his night with other girls and he said he missing her
poor jodha
nobody understand her not even her family
what type of family they are who don't even notice her pain and fake smile
moti is true friend of her
atleast she try to know what's going on with her
now jalal ask sorry
he ever understand her pain
but I am shock jodha forgive him easily
she really blind by love or what
let's see how the story move
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing chappi soru
Jo was so disheartened
poor her
Jalal consoled her
was he speaking truth or again he was building a trap for her
update asap buddy

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful chapter Soru

Originally posted by: melovesja

soru that night was a total shock but you very well bring out the things in light dear . does he really loves her or ? 😕

Originally posted by: Aaradhya01234

lovely update
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Superb update sissy

Well done

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi

Jalal asked to Jodha for forgiveness. Jo forgive him. And jalal promised to jodha never he does not leave her. Is this true? Or cheating? ...Eagerly awaiting for your update. Please update soon...

Originally posted by: --HANISA--

superb dorsh love it

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Wonderful update soru👏

But I am not able to understand Jalal.

he is telling her that he missed her but then y is he spending the night with other girls😕😲

Does he even love Jodha or again trapping her in his plan.

Y did Jodha forgive him so easily?😡

After knowing that it is real life story

I wanna read more.

Please update soon soru

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Thanks for the pmm.

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Sorry for the late reply😕

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awesome update
please update your other stories also
waiting for you next update
please update soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: piya58

Woow Jalal change really
Update
Thanku

Originally posted by: eshalli

Wonderful chapter soru
Loved it
Poor jo. .
ja is missing jo
I like convo between joja
It's so emotional nd lovely..
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Superb update Soru
But, I am not at all understanding Jalal at this point of time
And how can Jo forgive him after his such a disastrous act
& then he says he considers her his wife and was longing to see her in red dress..
Waiting for next update, I think I will be able to understand this after reading a few more chappies

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Awesome update buddy but I didnt understand dude

Jalala is happy with his life though he knows what Jodha will be going through😕😕

I guess there is seriuosly something fishy coz hes completely normal whilst Jodha how could she forgive him so easily I mean he has done a really bad deed to which forgiveness should not come so easily

Update soon yaar n clear all my doubts plzz

Thnks fr d pm😊

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

poor jodha.but jalal apologized n said he luvs her.last scene was sweet.but is jalal faking?

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Awesome chapter n thnxx for pm

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Hi sora...
Read 4 updates today..
Chapter 11 was good with r good this going on except Jalal mom thing
Chapter 12 was a disaster what did this Jalal to to innocent Jodha nd I felt really bad for d girl u told about
Chapter 13 there is so much going in Jodha life she can't say anything nd do anything poor soul
Chapter 14 this Jalal is all acting like split person if I'm thinking right is it all become of d black magic Jalal mom was up to poor innocent Jodha is suffering
Update soon nd thanks for pms

Originally posted by: avika444

Im feeling so sad for Jodha ...poor girl has so many people around her ...but only for name sake ...no one notices her pain ... ot even her parents ...such an unlucky soul she is ...and this Jalal ...he is so confusing ...does he really has feelings for Jodha or he is again playing around ?? Out of all i loved moti very much ...atleast she tried helping Jodha .

Continue soon dear

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: shyana3

Lovely story

Jalal loves jodha

She forgive him

Waiting next part

Update soon