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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: lolo91
me sec

Congrats sissy 😉

Originally posted by: lolo91
congratulation on 100 pages

Thanks sissy 😉

Originally posted by: swetiii
amazing chappi soru
poor Jo
she is so grief stricken..
how can Jalal do that
what's going on
he apologised..
seriously..
after doing so much he just asks her to forget it
is vasu behind all this..
is she using black magic
hawww
update asap soru

Thanks a lot sissy 😉 Hehe sissy 😆😆 Maybe black magic or ahm mein kiun bataun 😳 guess karona

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
SORU oh my baby you updated wow...
Love you lot darling

Hehe yup sissy love you too 😉

Originally posted by: harshu27
it was quiet emotional updte soru...poor jo felt so bad fr her...and jalal did dis to her dat was v much shocking... and he did say sorry... sorry se kya hoga...will b waiting fr ur nxt updte... updte soon...😃

Hmm right sissy Thanks a lot for your lovely comment i'll update soon maybe tonight or tomorrow

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
Me 3rd
And congratulations darlo
For reaching at 100 Pages

Congrats sissy 😉 Thank you

Originally posted by: shyana3
Loved this update
Thanks for pm

Thank you sissy 😉 welcu

Originally posted by: lolo91
😭 god ...so emotional and painful 😭
i loved it ...your description to jodha condition break my heart
i wished she killed jalal ..i cant believe that but really he is no human or animal
amber is an awful person ..she is a girl for god sake what is wrong with her ?
jalal is such a🤬after what he did he is coming bragging about it😡😭
but he said something very right ..the girl is the one who always blamed for such injustice ..she bear the pain and the shame that was suppose to be from the predator share and not the helpless dove😭
i cant believe him😡 jodha wanted to kill herself😭 my jo 😭😭 most of rape victim think of this the first thing 😭 god the pain is too much in my heart , i cant stop crying
jalal saved her and apolgized as if he ate her bag of chips😡 ' YOU RAPED HER "😭..I KNOW IT😡he will marry her and she will agree so helpless marring her raper 😭 my poor jo ..why he did this to her? i am asking the same..why😭? but my question is not for jalal only😭

Hmm sissy how could she kill Jalal she loves him a lot 😉 Yup amber is very cruel haina ? Thanks a lot for your lovely comment love you sissy

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: GERUA
very emotional update

Hmm right sissy

Originally posted by: eshalli
Very very emotional update dear
Poor jo
Thxc 4r pm dear

Hmm sissy welcu

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice chapter Soru😃
I am feeling bad for jodha😭
I am very angry at jalal😡I can't understand him⭐️

Thanks sissy 😳 I'm also feeling sad for jodha

Originally posted by: avishi467
Soo sad chapter dear.why men always take advantage of women. Are dey dont hv feelings emotions.now abut chapter poor soul jodha.jalal should realise his big mistake.thanx fr pm

Hmm sissy Thanks for your lovely comment welcu

Originally posted by: kartikaJA
sad chapter
waiting for next update
please update your other stories also
waiting for you next update
update soon

Hmm sissy I'll update tonight or tomorrow

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
Hawww baby I am still crying
SO emotional and painful you write
Poor my jodhu..
How he did to her and easily say to forgot everything...
Plz update soon baby.
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting
Plz update soon baby

Don't cry sissy I'll update tonight or tomorrow

Originally posted by: laughingpearls
awesome and Congo soru... feeling very sad for Jo...please update soon

Thanks sissy 😉 I'll update tonight or tomorrow

Originally posted by: --HANISA--
very emotion updt

Hmm sissy 😛

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: natashathakur
Awesome chapter n update nxt soon

Thanks sissy 😃 I'll update soon

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome...👏

Thanks sissy 😉

Originally posted by: priyadogra
A very sad chapter
Jo tried to suicide but i didnt get why ja stopped her is there something fishy herw too???
Update soon and thanks for the pm

Hmm right sissy I'll update soon welcome

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
such a painful update
poor jodha
we can't even imagine her condition
I thought jodha share all things to moti
but jalal stop
what wrong with him
God jodha wanted to kill herself but jalal save her
I really don't understand him
how easily he said just forget everything
is that so easily to forget
he can't see how much she is suffering
poor now she can't even to tell anyone
now I am very curious to know further
plz update next chapter soon
thanks for pm

Hmm sissy I'll update soon welcome

Originally posted by: neha1998
Siru why suddenly this track
I can't imagine jallu raped jodha
Why jallu change
Why he done such a worst thing
I'm feeling very angry want to kill him

This story is a real life story of a girl sissy 😉 and whatever i have written in my story has happened to that girl 😊

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
Amazing yaar

Thanks sissy 😉

Originally posted by: Naazrt
amazing amazing chapter sissy beautiful ..poor Jo ..I really feel very bad for that victim girl..and jallu shocked me when he apologized to Jo I mean seriously he apologized god know and you too that what going on his mind.. bechaari jo she is in sooo much pain emotionally physically and mentally too i cant see her like this ..but after his apology i fell really better hehe..

Thanks sissy 😉

Originally posted by: Naazrt

plzzz sissy don't made us wait too long na plzzz update soon OK..thanks for pm me..

My sweetie sissy i'll update soon welcome 😉

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@lolo91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Prologue
What will happen
When the love of your life turns into a monster hell bound on seeking revenge and making your life more painful than death and you will held captive by your own husband like a salve ... every love story doesn't have the happiest ending ...

i like the future of the story 👏

but you will make love has to be true eventually right?

but the last part of the prolong is scary

"every love story doesn't have the happiest ending ..."

what is that means sorath ? no happy ending for this story ?😲

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@lolo91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

the chapter was very good

amazing but i think jalal is planning to hurt her further

i wonder why the revenge?

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sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: Naazrt

sorry for late sissy..
and one more request plzzz update ek mai aur ek tu .sissy plzzz iam dying to read that story...

I will update soon sissy 😉

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
awesome n emotional
jis ki bhi dil he usse jarror dard mehasoos hogi
update soon
why he stopped her from killing herself
he is just acting in front of her like he cares

Thanks sissy 😉

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

thanks for pm sissy

Welcome sissy 😉

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

sorry for the late reply soru

so disgusting of jalal

Its okay sissy 😉

Originally posted by: --HANISA--
as you daid its a real accident with a girl its so painful for her i could not control my emotion n tears so sad hope she got a better life

Yup this story is a real story of a girl 😉 thanks for your lovely comment sissy hehe

Originally posted by: duhasaad
Amazing and hurting Chappy 👍🏼
Again and again I will say that the way you are showing Jodha's feelings is just impossible 👏
the way you wrote the chapter is also impossible
now what the hell is happening 😲
why is Jalal with two faces
does he love her or hate her
maybe he is forced to do that with her but he love her 😭
I seriously don't know but I'm sure that you know
anyway just continue soon dear don't take ages 😡
and a big big thank you for the PM
love you dear ❤️

Thank you shooo shooo much sissy 😉 I'll update soon welcome love you more

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Heart wrenching update 😭
sorry but i can't say much 😭

Kaju tu rona band kar 😉

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
jalal taunting her that if she reveals the rape incident 2 others he will b safe but hers n her family reuptation will b harmed.so cheap.but when jodha tried 2 cut her wrist he confessed that he luvs her n will marry her.is he genuine or is he pretending?i'm confused abt his character

I will tell more about Jalal in upcoming chapters thanks for your lovely comment sisu 😉

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sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09
I read whole story in a single go.😃
I don't know is Jalal pretending or showing genuine care for Jodha??😕
Please clear the doubt as fast as possible
Update soon 😃

You will know everything in upcoming chapters sissy 😉 I'll update soon

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Thanks for the pm 😊

Welcome 😉

Originally posted by: CindyTruong
Emotional update..sis
Thanks for pm..Soru..

Hmm sissy 😉 Welcome

Originally posted by: misty22
Sooo awsmmm soru . . . I mean ur awsm honey . . . I know how painful is it to go through ds. . . D pain embarrassment hrt. . . Is soo difficult to go through . . . Nd hats off sweety . . U wrote it soo bfully. . . Nd gv it a new twist. . I mean ja was guilty of wat he did nd said dat he ll marry jo. . . . Hp he keeps upto ds promise . . . Nd it wd tk time fr jo to recover frm dat incident . . . Its gonna be sooo interesting . . Muahh. . Sweety . . Lv u. .
Thnku fr pm nd update asap 👏

Thanks a lot sissy for your lovely comment 😉 My dear love you too

I'll update soon

Originally posted by: Naazrt
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and update your other stories too plzzzx sissy,,

Aw love you sissy i'll update soon

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993
Awesome update
Jo is in miserable state
Ja was able to stop jo from telling everyone about the truth 😭
Ja is worrying about jo now but what he did to her is unforgivable
Jo should not take any wrong step
continue soon and thanks for pm

Thanks sissy for your lovely comment 😉 i'll update soon

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome update
jalal behaviour confuse me... plz explain about jalal behaviour
poor jo ... hope moti know about wht happen to jo soon
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thank you so muchh sissy 😉 i'll update soon