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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the Jodha Akbar forum dearies 🤗 its an awesome start...do continue soon n plzz pm me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb Update dear...
Thnku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part : 2


He felt weak . A lone tear escaped from his eyes . He bowed his head and walked to the idol , he prayed silently.
After some time he asked

"Shradha aap hume kshama nahi kar sakthe , ek aur avsar nahi de sakthe "

Wind opened the windows and blew in . Both of them kept their hands to protect the lamp. The storm had strengthened
As the wind played with her hair she said

" Hazaar avsar de sakthe hai ap ko par kshama nahi kar sakthe "

Silent he went and closed the windows .

" Hazaar avsar nahi chahiye " he said " sirf ek avsar de dijiye , baaki hum sambhal lenge "
"Denge hume ek avsar "

Shradha remained silent

" ap ke yaadein na kabhi hume chodkar gaya , na humne kabhi jaane diya . Ab hume ap ke yaadom ka nahi , ap ka saath chahiye "

He cut his thumb and filled her maang with his blood

" Ab rishtha nibhane ka baari humara hai , hum ap ko vachan dete hai , ap ke vishwaas ka , ap ke bhavanaom ka , ap ka , poorn roop se khayal rakhenge hum . Phir se ek baar Amber ka Kuwarani bankar , humara patni bankar , phirse ek baar grahpravesh karlijiye na "

"Ek nayi shuruvaad hongi yeh "
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
nice chapi plus nice story
update next chappi soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Part 3


At Amber :-

Servents were decorating the whole palace , Jodha and Rani Bhagwathi Sahiba was supervising them .

" Shikr Shikr haath chalayiye wo log pahunchthe hi honge " Jodha said

"Oho meri Jodha ... Unhe kaam karne ke liye thoda samay toh dijiye , ap yaham shanthi se baitiye tabhi ye log kuch kaam kar payenge " Ranisa said

"Bhabhisa..."
They both started laughing

"Waise Jamaisa nahi aaye "

" Nahi aaye ... Acha toh hai , ap ko pata hai na Shradha ko Mughlom se kithna Nafrat hai . Pata nahi humari vivah ke samachar kaise batayega unhe "

"Jaise humne unhe apnana sikha , waise woh bhi Jamaisa ko apnana sikh jayenge "

" Chodiye bhabhisa dekhthe hai sajavat kaham tak pahunche "

" Are abhi tak kuch nahi hua sajavat ka , kya kar rahi hai ap log "

"Jodha..." Ranisa said to herself " Yeh aaj koi kaam nahi hone dega "
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At another part of the palace a girl was surprised seeing the decorations .

" Yeh sajavat kisliye " She asked a servant

"Kuwari Chand ap ka bada bhai bahu lekar aa raha hai "

" Maan Singh bhaisa... Matlab Shradha bhabhi laut raha hai ..."

" Ji kuwarisa "

"ap log apna kaam kijiye "

The servant left . Chand said to herself

"Yeh Samachar Anamika tak pahunchane Hi hoga . Bechari..."

Inside the palace in a room another girl was admiring a painting . Chand reached there and said

" Chittor ki Rajkumari Anamika kiske chitr ko ithne pyaar se dekh rahe hai "

The girl turned , She was a strange beauty . A poisonous beauty .

" Kuwari Singh ka " She said

" Tum chod kyu nahi dete yeh kaam , woh kisi ka pati hai "

Anamika smiled lightly mocking the statement .

"Waise tayaar ko jao aaj tyohaar ka din hai " Chand said

"Kis baat ki tyohar "

"Kuwarani Shradha Kawar ki lautne ka tyohar "

Anamika stood there shocked . She felt as if someone had attacked her with a sword .

"Chod dete hai tumhe tumhari halat par " Chand said " Jashn mein aana mat bhoolna "

After Chand left Anamika said to herself

" Aisa nahi ho saktha ... Kuwar Singh sirf humara hai ... Kya kuch nahi kiya hai hum ne ap ko paane ke liye Kuwarji ... Ranisa ko zehar tak de diya humne , sirf ap dono ko alag karne ke liye ... Phir bhi ..."

She sat on the floor . Tears ran down her cheeks .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Superb updates..
Shraddha is coming back..
I dont like anamika...she is too bad..
But what is this yr..again no akdha :-(
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Parvia dear u r not getting likes or comments on ur updates...
U should inform everyone...make everyone aware of ur story...pm the link of yr story to everyone
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Welcome to the forum and thanks for the new FF ...waiting for Jo/jo to surface ...hopefully soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
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" Amber ki Kuwarani Shradha Kawar ko Amber ki Raja ka Pranam " Raja Bharmal welcomed her

" Aap aise , yeh sab karke hume apmanith kar rahe hai " Shradha said

" Nahi beta , tumhari kami ne hume yeh esaas de diya hai ke tum Amber ke liye kithne vishisht ho .Tumhare bina toh pura Amber suna tha..."

"Dadaji ab hum aa gaye hai na , purane baatom ko bhool jayiye ap "

"Maharaj bahurani ko pravesh dvaar mein hi rahne denge kya . Unhe andhar aane dijiye " Maharani Meenavati said

" Chalo beta , tumhare maaji aur bhuasa prathiksha kar rahi hongi " Bhagwan das said

"Humse rusht hai na , koi baat nahi hum mana lenge unhe "

" ap ko akele hi manana hai " Maan Singh said

"Jaanthe hai waise bhi ap humare saath dete kab hai " She said in a silly manner

" Ek baar ap ka saath chodkar galati kar chuka hu , Ab ap ke saath nahi chodenge Yeh Vaada Raha humara "

Waqt bhi tehara hai
kaise kyu yeh hua
kaash tu aise aaye
jaise koi dhua...

"Jaanthe hai hum ap humare saath nahi chodenge ,Aur ispar vishwaas rakhne ke liye hume kisi vachan ka avashygatha nahi hai "

They stood there looking at each other's eyes

Tu rooh ki raahat hai
tu meri ibaadat hai...
Apne karam ki kar adayein
kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein...

"Hum bhuasa se milkar aaye hai " Shradha said breaking the eye lock .

"Hum Sonu se milne jaa raha hai " Maan said in embarrassment that everyone had noticed the eyelock

When both of them left Meenavati said

"Ek dusre ke liye bane hai , ishvar inka saath humesha banaye rakhe "

"Sach kaha tumne Meenavati ... Pata nahi Jodha ke vivah ka kya asar padega Shradha par

" Jo rishte bane hai unhe chodo ... Jo rishte tute hai unhe kaise sahenge woh " Bhagwan das said

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