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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Super updaye pariva..
ohh so Anamika was the one who gv poison to mann mother disgusting hw cn she do tht n she said she love him..seriously she is sich man..
well i dnt undrstnd chand is mann sis means mann mothr is hr mothr dnt understand hw cn anyone help aur hd sympathy to tht human who killed hr mother...
Anamikaa iis schyco she need medical treatmnt not mann 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice update pariva..
finally mann n shardhaa came amer fort.
n ther welcome prt was sweet dear..
everyone iis thinking abut hr reaction on ja jo mrrage n m also eager fr tht..
update soon n please do pm dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
I read ur story in one ago n loved it very much..
It us different from other story..
Why are u not updating ur any of ur story
Hetic marne ka irrada hai kya? 3 months se jayada ho gaye hai ...
Wait karwana aur hum sab ko sad karna accha lag raha hai kya ??
Pls update na..its my request..
I love ur storty..
Whenever u will update in years then pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
I read dis ff its very nice nd interesting
Plz continue soon
Plzzz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
CHAPTER - 5


" ap ko pata hai bhuasa hume kithna ajeeb lag rahe hai , sab kuch ek sapna jaisa lag rahi hai , humne toh socha hi nahi tha ke kabhi iss kaksh mein vaapas pravesh kar payenge "

Shradha said entering Maan's room

" Jo log ek dusre ke liye bane hai unhe koi alag nahi kar saktha , woh ek hokar hi rahthe hai , unhe ek hona hi padthe hai " Jodha replied
" Jaise ap aur fufasa , hai na ..., waise ap ne hume bataya nahi ke woh kon hai "

" Kyu batayega hum ap ko , humare vivah pe toh nahi aaye aur..."

" Teek hai , mat batayiye hum swayam pata laga lenge "

Ranisa WS sure if this convo continued then Jodha will not be able to hold on for a long time

" Bahuranisa... " She said " apne puchtach khatam ho gaye ho toh thoda vishram kar lijiye , lambhi Safar se aayi hai ap "

Shradha sat on the bed and said in a childish ordering tone

" Teek hai sab ko bata dijiye ke Kuwarani Shradha Kawar ke vishram mein koi samasya mat dalna "

Jodha replied playing along ,
" Teek hai Kuwranisa ...aur koi adesh ...??? "

" Nahi , ab hume ekanth chod dijiye "

" Chaliye bhabhisa ..., jisse pehle ki hum khud Kuwranisa ke vishram ke liye samasya ban jaye hum Chalthe hai "

They left , Shradha looked around examinig the room

It was a large spacious room with a grand bed at the center . There were two balconies for the room , both faced a beautiful garden . From both the balconies a staircase starts which leads to the garden . There was a small pond and a swing in the garden . The Krishna Mandir in the room was beautifully decorated . Coloured curtains were hanged and the bed had a purple curtain covering it , which was now hooked up . On either Side of the door there was a statue holding a lamp .

"Kaksh toh bilkul waise ke waise hai , par phir bhi badla hua kyu lag raha hai " Shradha said to herself

" Kyunki ab ap ke paas hum hai , toh zaahir si baat hai sab kuch ap ko naye naye lagenge ma iss nayi Safar mein "
Maan said hugging her from behind

" Pati parmeshwar ji " She said breaking the hug " hume vishram karna hai "

" Toh kijiye na ... Chaliye ... Let jayiye ..."

" Maan ... Chodiye. Hume... Hume vastr toh badalne dijiye "

" Teek hai " He left her hand

" Maan ap humesha hume tang karthe ho kabhi humare sahaytha nahi karte " She murmured walking towards the hamaam

" Acha toh yeh baat hai ... Chalo aaj Kuwranisa ki sahaytha kar hi dete hai " Maan said and turned to the hamaam .

Inside :-

Shradha remove her dupatta and kept aside
" Are yeh Dori kyu nahi khul rahi hai...??? "

She tried again but it was stuck .

" Hum sahaytha kare ... " Maan asked

Shocked Shradha hid behind a curtain

" ap chup kyu rahi hai , hum ap ke sahaytha karne aaye hai "

" ap jayiye hum khud kar lenge "

" Nahi nahi ... ap ko lagtha hai hum ap ke sahaytha nahi karte , toh aaj hum karke hi jayenge "

" Maan hume tang mat kariye jayiye .. "

" Nahi..." He stepped closer , more closer , Shradha ws nervous by now . She tried to step back but she was standing by a wall . Maan locked her between his arms

" ap aise kaamp kyu rahe hai " HS asked with a mischievous smile

" Woh tand ... Tand lag rahi hai "
He moved a little more closer and asked softly

" ab bhi lag rahe hai ... "

" Nahi ... Ab ... ap... Jayiye ... Hum ..."
He stepped back grinning ear to ear

" Toh Teek hai ap kud karlijiye , hum baahar intezaar karte hai ap ka "
He walked back winking at her .
Shradha lowered her head blushing



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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
CHAPTER - 6


Anamika tried her best to look happy , inside she was sad or angry or ... Even she didn't know .
Absent mindly she wandered here and there pretending to be looking for Shradha .

" Anamika ... " Someone called her

" Ji Jodha Begum , kuch kaam tha ap ko " Anamika asked normally controlling herself

" Haan woh ... Anamika ..., Shradha ko kuch bhi pata nahi chalni chahiye . Afar galti se bhi usse pata chal gaya toh ... "

" ap befikar rahiye Jodha Begum hum iss baat ka khayal rakhenge , aakir sakhi hai woh humari "

" Waise tum Shradha se mile ?? "

" Nahi... Usssi se milne jaa rahi hu "

" Acha woh apne kaksh mein hai jao .. "

Walking a little further Anamika turned

" Pata toh chlengi usse , woh bhi khud Shehansha Jalal ke saamne , unhi ki muh se "

Instead of going to Shradha , she retraced to her room. Once inside her room she closed the door and composed a letter

" Ranu ..." she said to her caretaker " Yeh patr humare sabse nishtaavan sandeshvahag ke haath Agra bech dijiye "
" Par kuwarisa yeh patr hai kya ????? "
Hindustaan ke Shehansha ke naam , unke Begum Khaas Jodha bai ka Nimanthran "


Precap :-

" Shehansha ap yahan kya kar raha hai "

" Aap hi ne toh bulaya hume Jodha Begum , Sehzaade Maan Singh ki Begum ko dua dene "

" Kya hume ... "

" Shehansha hume pata hai ap bahane banane mein ustaad hai par humare saath mat kheliye , aap vaapas jayiye yeh sahi ... "

Jalal coverd her mouth
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
beautiful
loved it
update asap

my like button is not workings dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Beautiful story. ..
Loved it. ..
Please update soon. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awsome chappy ..
I am new reader..
U r wonderful writer..
I totally loved it...
Pls next time pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Pls accept my buddy request...
Pls update na

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