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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Susan.Dsouza

i guess i read this story in FB

On Jodha Akbar page
why u stop writing in Fb ?


Hi Susan . I haven't stopped writing it . It's still going on . Chapter 12 is next . COH on Fb is different story . Here's it's different . In Chapter 2 i will make it more clear about CoH in Fb and Coh in forums .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

doongi doongi zrrrooor doongi vo 2015 mein hi pkka😆

thank god mujhe to laga ki tu 2016 k pehle nahi dene wali 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
hey sairab..
Nice start dear..
so ja bck aftr 17 yrs...aww i loveja n salima meet so sweet.
precap is interesting waiting fr ja jo meet
update soon dear n thanks fr pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
wow nice one
but one confusion jodha mother name hamida ? jodha tho hindu hai na ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice yr...👏
Update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Susan.Dsouza

wow nice one

but one confusion jodha mother name hamida ? jodha tho hindu hai na ?


Yes yes .. Hindu hai .. Confusion Chapter 2 mei clear hojega .. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Note : PLEASE Read the Prolouge and Character Sketch once again . Some changes have been made . (PAGE 1 )I got some messages saying not to repeat the same story on Forums as they wanted something new from my side. Those who wanted to Read Change Of Heart can read here https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.355284534623347.1073741830.334937526658048&type=3

~ Addicted to You ❤️ ~
Chapter - 2

Jalal entered his Mansion . He saw some of his childhood photos hanging on the wall . Salima was standing behind him and said "bilkul bhi nahi badle . (You have not changed ) " Jalal smiles . Salima then held Jalal's hand and took him to Atgah . While going up the stairs Salima asked " How's Uncle and Aunty at Delhi (Maham and Bairam ) ? Why didn't they come here ? " " di .. Due to weather change Badi Ammi caught cold , so she wasn't able to come with me . " replied Jalal . They then headed to Atgah .

On the other hand , Sujamal and Jodha reached Jalal's mansion . Jodha smiles and says "Come bhaisa . Will give prasaad to uncle . " Sujamal says " Nahh .. I have some important work . I won't be able to come . You better go . I will be back within 1hr and will take you back home " Jodha with a sad face said " but Bhaisa .. acha theek hai .. Take care bye . " Sujamal cupped her and walked .

Jalal knocks the door and enters Atgah's room . He saw his dad sleeping . " Di I guess he's sleeping . Will come later . " said Jalal . "Nope it's his medicine time . So I have to wake him up . " She tiptoed to the bed and sat beside her dad and tried to wake him up . Jalal too sat beside his dad on the other side of the bed . Atgah slowly opened his eyes and saw Jalal . He rubbed his eyes in ordered to see clearly . "Ja..l..jalal .. Is ... that.. y..ou .. beta ? " Jalal held his dad's hand and said " Yes dad , it's me Jalal . " Atgah tried to sit , Salima and Jalal helped him in sitting . Jalal held Atgah's hand and said "how's you dad ? I missed you a lot . " Atgah smiled and stretched his arms and Jalal all of a sudden broadly smiled and hugged him . " I am fine Jalal . I also missed you a lot beta . " Salima almost had tears in her eyes but then she wiped it and smiled . She took the tablet and a glass of water . " Dad , now you please take this tablet . " Jalal takes the tablet from her hand and made Atgah swallow . And he takes the glass of water and made Atgah drink .

Jodha rang the door bell .
Jalal heard and asked "Who's there di ? " Salima was about to answer but Atgah answered " It might be Jodha . Our neighbour . She's really sweet and innocent girl ... " As soon as he heard her name he felt something but he ignored his thoughts and said " You talk with that girl.. i will get freshen up then talk to you .. " he smiles and leaves the room . On the other hand , Jodha in the corridor was heading to Atgah's room . She was about to open the door but then it was opened by Jalal . Jalal saw her and skipped a heartbeat , Jodha looked extremely beautiful with light make up . He stared at her without blinking . Jodha looked at Jalal and said " Excuse Me Mr.. " Jalal came back to his senses , he smiled and said " Yeah .. suree .. " He opened the door for her and Jodha entered the Room . Salima saw Jalal smiling at Jodha , She smirks and coughs . " Jalal what are you doing here ? You were going to get freshen up . Isn't it ? " " Di ..y..eahh . Go..ing .. " he looked at Jodha and then leaves the Room .

While Going to his room , flashbacks of her appeared in his mind , he smiles while remembering her ."Jalal ... !!! what happened to you Stopp thinking about herr !! " says Jalal and enters his Room .

"Pranam Salima di .. How's you ? " asked Jodha . " Adaab Jodha . Pretty Good .. ! You say how's you and Aunty .. " "I am Fine and Masa Too . " she looked at Atgah , took his blessings " May God bless you Jodha . " Jodha smiled , she forwarded the box Prasaad to Salima . " Jodha , What's this ?" Jodha smiled and replied " Prasaad ! I made it . Taste it and tell how's it ? " Salima looked at her with astonishment . " sure I would love too. " She takes a piece of it and tastes it. " yum .. it's very delicious Jodha .. " Jodha smiles and says " Thanks di "
The conversation went on ..

Jalal came out of shower and was wrapped in a towel . He wore his track pants and remained shirtless . He looked himself in the mirror and picked up a spare towel and began vigorously drying hishair . He ran his fingers on his hair setting them backwards " Cool . Let's grab a coffee !! "

On the other hand , Jodha was talking leave . " It was a great pleasure meeting you Di and Uncle . Well now i shall leave . Take care Di .. will see you later . " "Come I'll leave you .. " says Salima but Jodha stopped her and said " Nope Di I will go . You be with Uncle .. " she smiles and leaves . Jodha was walking through the corridor , she receives a message from her Brother .
*Mobile vibrates *
She reads the message and gets busy on her mobile . On the other hand , Jalal comes out of his room , Jodha collides against Jalal . Jalal held her by her waist & saved her by falling encircling his hands around her waist. Jodha whose eyes where closed tightly, her hand encircled his neck . Jalal looked at her angelic face and skipped a heartbeat . Jodha then slowly lifted her eyelids and saw Jalal . They shared a passionate EyeLock .

|Tose Naina Jabse Mile .. Tose Nainaa
Jabse Mile . Ban Jae Silsille . |
[ Since my eyes met yours, new tales began, Since my eyes met yours.. ]

Jalal who was intensely staring at her made Jodha uncomfortable .
She hesitated " ... um... " Jalal came out of her beauty spell and made his stand . Jodha who was looking down the floor , said "I am Sorry .." "No ! No .. it was my mistake .. I am Sorry " says Jalal to Jodha . Jodha looked at him and said Thanks and walked . Jalal kept looking at her until she left the Mansion .
He smiles broadly .
Someone whispered in his ear " I caught myself smiling for no reason . Then I realized , I was fell in love " Jalal blushes and says " Yes I'm in Love with her . "

"BHAIJAAAN !!! " yelled Murad . Jalal came back from his dreamworld and looked at Murad "Kiya hua chilla kiyu rahe ho ? (What happened , Why are you screaming ? " Murad tries his best to not to laugh and says " Nothing Bhaijaan . You continue dreaming with Bhabhi Jaan " he winks and runs from there . Jalal was shocked and runs behind him . "YOU IDIOT , WAIT !!! "

Precap - Jalal looks at Jodha's earing and remembers Jodha .

Don't forget to like and comment . I hope you like this Chapter . Any suggestions please tell me through commenting below . If you need PM add me as a Buddy .
Thanks 😊
Edited by Sairab_Khan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice concept .. Update soon .. congo for ur first story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Unress
awesome update dear
jalal is full too lattoo on jo i their first meeting itself 🤣 ohh god love at first sight :)
thnku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
nice update plz pm me also next time plz update soon next chapter

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