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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suprb concept..update soon
waiting for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEY GUYS CHAPTER 1 READY!!!!! ENJOY

CHAPTER 1

Today it should have been the day when the house is decorated like a bride itself. It should have been the day were the whole family chit-chats and makes the environment lively. It should have been the most memorable day for the bride as it is her marriage but here the case was totally different. No decoration, no big crowed, no bridal dress, no jewelry NOTHING. A girl was sitting in her room correction in her step-sister's room when a lady in middle 40s came inside and yelled at her in a sarcastic way.

LADY: - Maharani Jodha, how much time will it take you to come outside, HAAN?????? (She feared her and bent down her face and said)

JODHA: - I am coming CHOTI MAA. (Yes that witch was her step mother. Her name is Nafisa)

And that lady went away from there. She sat in front of the mirror and took a lady's photo frame in her hands. She had tears in her eyes and said.

JODHA: - Maa, today I am missing you terribly. Today your angel is getting married and you are not there to see her marriage. You know today the person to whom I am getting married looks like a prince. You always used to tell me naa Maa that I will get my prince charming who will love me, take care of me, who will protect me, see today I got him. (She hugged that photo and cried terribly)

After a while, the groom had arrived at their door step. He got down from his car wearing a black three piece suit and from other side an old lady got down with a dusky complexion. She was looking very happy (fake one) but the groom was lost. He was getting married today but he didn't have that glow. He was in some deep thoughts when she came near him and said.

LADY: - Jalal, what are you thinking?????

JALAL: - Nothing Badi Ammi. (And both of them went inside the huge bunglow)

As soon as Jalal came at the door step, his would-be-mother-in-law came there and greeted them and said.

NAFISA: -Welcome Jalal and Maham, come in have a seat. (They entered in the hall. It was a beautiful interior done there. He went and sat on the white sofa and was not in any mood. Maham also sat with him. He was growing impatient there. Soon Nafisa came with two glasses of coke and served them. After a while, even registrar came there. Nafisa excused herself and went inside to bring Jodha. She entered and saw her sitting in front of the mirror. She was about to yell but said in soft voice by controlling her anger.) Come out he has come.

Jodha stood up in fear but inside she was happy that finally she will be free from this hell and go with her prince. She was feeling relived, content and any other adjective which you can add to express her happiness but she was seriously missing her mother. She asked Nafisa.

JODHA: - Where is Papa????

NAFISA (irritatingly): - He not interested in your marriage. So he has gone out of town. He will return tomorrow. (She felt bad that her father was not there but she knew that he hated her after her mother's death as he held her responsible for it.)

She came out and saw her Jalal sitting on the couch. She blushed and bent her head down to control her blush. Other side Jalal sensed somebody coming and saw her. He got dam irritated by seeing her. She had worn a very dull yellow saree with red and golden border (Guys that was her step-mother's old saree). She had covered herself with the pallu of the saree. For a second he thought why he wore such a good stuff when she was looking like a servant in that. Nafisa made her sat next to him. She was feeling as if she is now safe whereas Jalal was feeling suffocated. Soon the registrar said by placing the register on the small table

REGISTRAR: - Ok sign on this page. (First Jodha signed and then Jalal. Jodha signed it immediately but Jalal paused for a moment and saw his Badi Ammi who indicated to sign it. So he signed it.)

With this their marriage got over. Now they were husband and wife. Jodha was happy but Jalal was feeling as if someone has poured acid on his heart. He got up in a hurry. Maham and Nafisa knew the reason behind this but Jodha was confused. He saw them and said.

JALAL: - Woh... I remembered that I have a meeting in half an hour. So I have to leave (And he left from that place without turning to see anyone's reaction. Jodha felt little bad but she thought that it must be something very important, so it didn't bother her. After a while Maham asked Jodha to get her bag as they were about to leave. She went inside and bought a small sky bag. Maham was surprised and asked in her fake sweet tone.

MAHAM: - Beta, where are your things???? (To which Jodha replied innocently)

JODHA: - I have only this bag. (Maham was shocked but after a while she ignored it and asked her to come and sit with her in the car. She went out and gave her bag to driver and sat at the back seat. After 10 mins even Maham came and sat at other side and left from there.)

Jodha was happy because now she will be with her prince charming and stay with him. She was happy that now she has to not suffer like before unaware of the upcoming storm which will destroy her dreams, her wish. In short she is now actually entering into a HELL!!!

PRECAP: - WATCH OUT

GUYS THANKS TO EACH AND EVERYONE WHO WERE PATIENTLY WAITING FOR THIS FF. PLZZZ EVEN TELL YOUR FRIENDS TO READ THIS FF. THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN😊😊😊

Edited by shivangiganesh9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update...👏
But feeling sad for her as nobody loves her😔
But why jalal not likes her...??
Update next chapter soon...eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
nice update
why jalal is behaving like this?
update soon
thnks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Interesting first chapi...but last sentence scaring continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
nice chptr dear
why jalal behaving like this?
cont soon...

plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
superb update. ..
but sad for jodha as she dont have anyone to share her feelings. ...
I dont understand what ia jalal upto...
update next part soon...
nd pm me to...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter is very interesting but finishing is little shocked eagerly waiting for nest chapter update nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm dear n nyc chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very noce n intresting dear...plzz update soon n thnx for the pm 😊

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