Akdha FF - ISHQ IBADAT updated teaser ch.22 on page123(01/04/2017)

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

loved jalal's surprises and jiya you nicely write up their feelings during separation and when they get back with each other. Thanks for pm.

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

superb update dear...
loved everything...
jodha reaction on jalal came...
jalal gift for jodha was so cute loved it ...
knw what is that jalal wants for jodha nw?
nd also waiting to see ruks reaction nw...
sorry for late comment...
nd thanks for pm...
nd update next part soon...

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Superb update jiya👏

Loved the scene where Jo thinks Jalal in front of her as her hellucination 😆

Jalal's gifts r so cute ... Jodha ko kacha aam pasand hai 😆

Bal gopal ... hmmm he gonna ask for a baby i guess 😉😆

No ruks in this update ... phew

Thx for pm😊

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

hey riya..
congratulation fr ur frst story..
prologue was awesome n tittle is also nice..
please add me in ur buddy list n pm me nxt..

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

hey riya...
wow nice start..ja is cuming bck aftr 2 months n he want to surprise jo...aww
aww..jo was thinking abut ja n lost in ther beautyful momment...nice
aagghh...this ruks bhi naa always giv hrself so much imprtnc with out any reason...huh
poor rukks too much dreaming but soon going to feel a shock which was givn by ja...hehe..nice dear...waiting fr it.

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

wow super awesome update jiya..
ja want to surprise jo but he was the one who gt shock..hehe..too gud.
aww..jo talking hrself abut ja illussion prt was soo funny n yet soo sweet...
aww..both ja jo spend sum quality time togther n jo was super excited seeing hr gifts..love ther love n care fr echother..
ahh...u stop on wrong tim..but i guess i knw wht he gonna ask fr jo..hehe..
eagerly waiting fr nxt update...
update soon n pless pm me also..

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Namita

@155pari

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

lovely chapter jiya!..update soon..😊

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jiya

@jiya.k

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

thank u to all of u my lovely friends for liking ch.2..sorry for some problem i m unable to reply ur each comment...but i read all of them n i m really feel happy after reading all wonderful comments...as almost everyone guess that jalal wants baby as gift from jodha but sorry buddies u guys guess it wrong...toh socho socho kya gift chahiye jallu...

Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago