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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
this was a cute update dear. ..
enjoyed read it...
ruks always thinks she is smart but in real she acts like a fool...
jodha so sweetly missing jalal...
nd jodha nd moti talk was superb...
nd jalal want ro surprise jodha with his return.
update next part soon...
nd plz do pm me on next update. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: jiya.k


Thanks dear n yeh ruku yanha pe jyada din tak aise nahi rahegi jaldi iski asli jagah pata chalegi issko...
Trying to update soon...

u know jb ruku ko uski jagah pta chltj h kisi story m by god bada acha lgta h ...🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..lovely update n update nxt part asap n pls pm me pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely chapter diii
awesome..
ruks part ws hillarious...
it wiilll b fun to watch her expressions whn she'll get to know her real place
moti jodha part ws a cute 1
update nxt soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all big thank u to all my friends who likes first chp..n gv their wonderful comments thank u very much to all of you... 😊 😊
Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ch.-2
Somewhere near Agra Mughal army lead by none another than Shenshah-e-Hind Jallaludin Mohammad Akbar returning Agra and just more two hrs and they reach Agra n meet their respective families n love ones but one person Jalal himself cnt wait anymore to meet his ladylove n he want to reach palace at time of Jodha's evening prayer...
JALAL - ya khuda do mahine ho gaye hume jung pe aaye huye aur apni Jodha ka chehra dekhe huye waise toh hum jab bhi apni aankhe band karte hai wohi humein dhikhayi deti hai woh pal pal humare saat na hokar bhi humare saat rehti hai phir bhi hum jald se jald unse milna chahte hai unhe apne seene se lagana chahte hai unki khubsurat aankho me kho jana chahte hai unki woh haseen hasi sunna chahte hai ya khuda hume sabar ata kar taki hum Agra tak pahuchne ke yeh do ghante kaat sake humne do mahine sabar kiya par ab yeh do ghante ka kya humse do pal ka intezaar nahi ho raha hai and Jalal calls one of his commander JAHEER KHAN n ordered him for increasing speed of their troop coz at any cost he want to reach at Jodha's prayer time coz at that time Jodha is completely lost in her kahna's prayers...
JALAL to himself - humein har haal me Jodha ki pooja ke waqt mahal me pahuchna hai taki humare aane se jo hulchal or shor baki begumaat haram me machengi Jodha tak woh na pahuche nahi toh hum apni jaan ke chehare pe hume achanak dekhkar jo khusi aur muskurahat aayegi usse nahi dekh payenge...n he start imagine how Jodha react after see him long time n he lost in his Jodha's dreams...
AGRA PALACE ENTRANCE :-
Jalal just reach his palace n Hamida n other Elder ladies welcome him n Jalal meet all n took his mother's blessings n without looking at any of his other begums with happy n excited he reach jodha's chember n enter n see his life his love his jodha is busy in her kanha prayer n jalal goes near her n stands just behind her, after finishing her prayer jodha turns with pooja thal n see jalal but thinks she again imagine him n start to move towards doors for giving aarti to her maids Jalal who wants to gives surprise to her but instead of her he got big shocking surprise...
JALAL- ya khuda yeh kya huya Jodha ne toh hume dekhkar bhi andekha kar diya jaise hum yanha ho hi na yeh kya ho gaya hai unnhe,woh humse naraz hai kya jo aisa kar rahi hai n he came to his senses n called Jodha...Jodha begum kanha ja rahi hai hum itne dino baad aaye or aapne hume dekha tak nahi...
JODHA - hey kanha yeh kya ho raha hai ab tak toh shenshah sirf dikh rahe the aur ab humein unka swar bhi sunayi de raha hai lagta hai sach me shenshah ki judai ne hume pagal kar diya hai n jalal smirking after listen her words n jodha again start to moving towards door but this time someone hold her hand from back n with surprise jodha turns around and see Jalal n for a moment she cnt believe on her eyes but soon she realised that her shenshah her life her love is there and she hug him jalal too hug her very tightly for sometime they hug without saying any words they just feeling their love for eachother after sometime jalal broke the hug n lift jodha's face from her chin n make her to see in his eyes n with tears in her eyes jodha look at him n Jalal feels somekind of pain in his heart coz of her tears n says..
JALAL - yeh kya JAAN humne toh socha tha hume itne dino baad achanak dekhkar aap bhut khush hogi aur apni haseen mushkurahat se humara swagat karengi par aap toh ro rahi hai lagta aapko humara aana accha nahi laga...Jodha without saying anyword again hug him n hide her face on his broad chest n start crying again..now jalal asked her worryingly...
JALAL - Jodha kya huya aap aise kyu ro rahi hai kya huya aapko kisi ne kuch kaha kya humare picche ya phir aapko kisi ne koi dukh pahucha hai khuda ke liye kuch toh kahiye aap jaanti hai na hum aapki aankho me aansu bardasht nahi kar sakte humein bataiye kon hai woh jiski vajah se aap aise ro rahi hai n he starts caressing her back n make her calm n jodha stop crying but she still sobbing n in between her sobs she says...
JODHA - woh aap hai jinki vajah se hum ro rahe...
JALAL - kya hum humein kya kiya hum toh bus aapko achanak se aakar khush karna chahte the...
JODHA - ji shenshah hum aapke hi karan ro rahe hai parantu yeh aasu dukh ke nahi kushi ke hai aapko do mahino ke baad dekhne ki do mahino ke baad aapki awaaz sunke ki aapko gale se lagane ki khushi ke hai yeh aansu aap nahi jaante yeh do mahine humne kaise kaate hai pal pal marte rahe hai hum aap ke bina har pal zindagi jaise bojh lagti thi pal pal ghute rahe rote rahe kabhi band aankho se toh kabhi khuli aankho se aapko dekhte the mahal ki har cheez humein aapki yaad dilati thi aap nahi jaante hum pe kya gujari hai aapke bina inn do mahino me aap agar kuch din aur nahi aate toh sayad hum ma..jalal puts his hand on her mouth n stop her to saying that word n says..
JALAL - bus JAAN kabhi bhi apni jubaan se yeh alfaaz mat nikaalna hum jaante hai aap par kya beeti hai inn do mahino mai kyuki aapke bina humara bhi wanha yahi haal tha aap nahi jaanti yeh jung humari zindagi ki sabse mushkil jung thi isliye nahi ki dushman taaqatwar tha balki isliye kyunki humari zindagi humara dil humse dur yanha tha hum pehali baar jung me maut se darre kyunki hum ab marna nahi chahte hum jeena chahte hai aapke saat, apna har sukh har dukh aapke saat baatna chahte hai aapko duniya ki har kushi dena chahte hai iss zindagi ka maqsad sirf aapka pyaar aur saat hai toh vaada kijiye kabhi bhi marne ki baat nahi karengi aap jodha release herself from his arms n take his hand in her hand n give him promise n jalal with happy again hug her n jodha also hug him tightly n they lost in eachother arms till moti disturb them moti enter in jodha's chembrer with her food without knowing that shenshah is there...
MOTI - Jodha chalo aa jao bhojan kar lo aur aaj agar aapne thik se bhojan nahi kiya toh hum shenshah se aapki sikaayat karenge ki kaise aapne unke picche bilkul apna dhyaan nahi rakha na thik se khaya na piya or nahi aaram kiya n she put plates on table n look towards jodha n there r jodha standing with shenshah giving her angry looks n moti face turn into white looking shenshah there n she thinks..
MOTI - aaj toh tu gayi moti shenshah yanha hai aur tu bina aagya ke ander aa gayi aur upper se itna sab kuch bhi bol diya shenshah ne chod bhi diya toh jodha se tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta n jalal's voice brings her back in reality..
JALAL - Shukriya moti jo tumne hume bata diya ki jodha begum ne kaise apne aapko kamjoor bana liya hai jao ab humare liye bhi khana lekar aao aur kisi kaneez se humare hozare me ek sandook rakha hai usse bhi mangwa dena aur dhayaan rakhna ab koi bhi humari baaton me khlal na daale moti nodded n left n after some time with other maid she brings food n that box in jodha chember n again left..
JODHA - iss sandook mai kya hai shenshah?
JALAL - woh hum aapko baad me batayenge pehale aap khana khayiye dekhiye apni kaisi haalat bana li hai aapne kitni kamjor ho gayi hai aahiye hum apne haato se khilate hai aapko..
JODHA - shenshah aisa kuch nahi hai woh moti toh aise hi bol rahi thi hum thik hai bus mausam badal raha hai na toh thodi si tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi bus isiliye aapko hum kamjor lag rahe aayiye hum aapko bhojan kara de phir aapko vishraam bhi karna hoga itne lambe safar se jo aaye hai n she takes his hand n drag him towards food table...
JALAL - humein banane ki aur baat ghumane ki koshish mat kijiye hum aapko acchi tarah se jaante hai aur aapko apna khayaal na rakhne ki saza jarur milegi par baad me abhi aap chup chap se khana khahiye n he start feeding jodha n they both feed eachother n after finishing their dinner they went to near window n sit on the couch n jodha put her head on jalal's shoulder n start talking..
JODHA - shenshah aapne apne aane ki khabar kyu nahi di..
JALAL - di thi jaan ammijaan ko di thi bus aapko na batane ke liye kaha tha hum aapko achanak se aakar tofa dena chahte the kaisa laga aapko humara tofa..
JODHA - bhut accha humare jeevan ka sarvsreshtha(best) uphaar hai yeh shenshah..

see next post for remaining part...
Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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JALAL - smile with happy n hold her hand n said hum aapke liye or kuch tofe laaye hai umeed karte hai woh bhi aapko aise hi pasand aayenge..

JODHA - with happy n excited aur uphaar sacchi toh jaldi se dhikhaiye na..

Jalal open that sandook n first he give glass bangle to jodha n jodha with big smile hold them n says..

JODHA - kaanch ki chudiya woh bhi itni saari issme toh sabhi rango ki chudiya hai shenshah lal peeli hari neeli sab dhanyawaad shenshah sach mai yeh bhut hi sunder bhet hai n she look in his eyes with lots of happiness n love n now jalal give her second gift a bucket of raw mangoes n jodha screams like little child with happy after looking mangoes

JODHA - aah kacche aam humare liye aapko kaise pata hume kacche aam bhut pasand hai n look at jalal n jalal smrik then jodha pouted n ask again batayiye na shenshah,.

JALAL - accha batate hai raaste me hum ek aam ke bagiche se gujar rahe the toh kuch bacche aam tod rahe the jinnhe dekhkar maan singh ne bataya kaise aap amer me ped pe chadkar aam todti thi or aapko kacche aam kitne pasand hai toh bus hum chad gaye ped par aur tod laaye yeh aam aapke liye jodha looking him emotionally n with happy tears in her eyes she says...

JODHA - aap khud todkar laaye hai yeh aam humare liye n jalal nod his head in yes shenshah hum bata nahi sakte hum kaisa mehshus kar rahe hai iss waqt shabdh nahi hai humare pass bus itna keh sakte aapka itna aur aisa prem paakar hum sansaar ki sabse shobhagyashali stri ban gaye hai n she start crying..

JALAL - yeh kya aap phir rone lagi lagta hai aaj jo kuch bhi aapko khush karne ke liye kar rahe hai woh hasi ki jagah aapko aasu de raha hai mat royiye abhi toh ek aur tofa baki hai...

JODHA - with cute n innocently ek aur uphaar..

JALAL - smile at her cuteness n innocence n said haan JAAN..

JODHA - kya hai jaldi se dhikhayiye na..

JALAL - haan dhikhate par aapko ek vaada karna hoga..

JODHA - kaisa vaada?

JALAL - uss tofe ke badle aapko bhi hume ek tofa dena hoga..

JODHA - thik hai hum bhi aapko uphaar denge..

JALAL - aise nahi vaada kijiye jo hum maange woh aap hume dengi...

JODHA'S - impatiently n in irritating voice accha hum vachan dete hai jo aap maange hum denge ab toh dhikhayiye humara uphaar..

JALAL - smrik mischievously n put one plate infront of jodha iss kapde ko uthayiye Jodha aur apna tofa dekh lijiye n jodha lift that cloth n saw beautiful statue of baal gopal..

JODHA -with moist eyes look jalal.. shenshah baal gopal aap humare liye humare kanha ka baal sawroop lekar aaye hai yeh humare liye sabse anmol uphaar hai ek hi din me aapne itni kushi de di hai ki hum sambhaal bhi nahi paa rahe hai n with happy she hug him...

JALAL - jodha aapko pasand aaya na ?

JODHA- haan yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai..

JALAL- toh ab humari baari hai aapse tofa maangne ki,.,

JODHA - ji shenshah kahiye kya chahiye aapko waise bhi aap ne jo uphaar humein diya hai usske aage hum kuch bhi de de woh kam hi hoga aur waise sach kahe toh humare pass aisa kuch bhi nahi jo hum aapko de sake iss anmol uphaar ke badle..

JALAL - he hold her face with his both hand n looking deep into in her eyes with very intense n emotional tone he said nahi jodha hum jo maangne wale hai aapse woh sirf aap hi hume de sakti hai aur koi bhi nahi de sakta aur humare liye uss se badhkar koi cheez nahi hai iss duniya me kyuki humari khusiya iss cheez pe tiki hai..

JODHA feel seriousness in his voice n now she is more curious to know what he wants as his gift,...

Precap:- like jodha u guys also wait till next chapter to know what gift jalal wants from jodha...

P.S.-plz hit like button n gv ur valuable comments n sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes...



next chapter link..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4514582&TPN=21
Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb, excellent chapter. i know what jalal is going to ask from jodha 😉. pls update next chapter soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!! again an awesome chapter di...
such a cute n lovely 1...
loved jodha n jalal's love n care fr each other..
ahhh!! u ended at wrong time...
but i guess i know he is gonna ask..hehehehe...
update nxt sooon
thnks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nice chapter jodha jalal care,love and everything
and most interesting is prologue
continue soon

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