||..Jalal's Diary..|| Part 6 Pg. 68 - Page 47

Originally posted by: Pindborg

Amazing all parts r superb

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum
beautifully described
jallu became latto on jodha
"how many men she has behind her"
hahaha
update asap

sorry dr my like button is not working

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Hii shagun jaan .🤗.. Sorry for the late comment ... 😊

Its okay di... 😃

Lovely update .. While reading i compared ur words with the scenes of akdha's first meet ...

U described each part beautifully ... 👏

Thank you so much...🤗

Jalal was excited to watch amer .. He loved the atmosphere ... He feels good being aam here ... 😆 ... How can he find such environment in agra where most of them r fake ... 😕🤢

Best part of update .. Jalal saw jodha .. He was lost in her beauty .. Cant describe in words ...

Jalal never felt such feelings before even for ruks ...

Jalal saw his reflection in water where jo floats diya ... Now he knew wat he have to do ...

I was playing ishq hai vo ehsas in my mind ... 😆

Yar iske bina akdha scene ka maja kha

Sahi baat hai...😆

Update soon

Originally posted by: vjctpt378

nyc n pls send me pm n accept buddy list

Originally posted by: jiya.k

Awesome update shagun dear...
U described jalal's feeling beautifully as always...👏

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

😆

I love you so much for this excellent take sweetheart🤗 Jalal's adventurous journey in Amer, his conversation with the common people of Amer, his first meeting with Jodha, the reflection in water...all came in front of the eyes just like a dream while going through your writing.😳

Thanks a ton for this lovely comment Stuti di! 🤗

Though I love both of your diaries, but still I feel I can connect much with Jalal much than I can o with Jodha via your writings. You are doing his character analysis so nicely in your writings. I feel analyzing Jodha is easier than Jalal's. Jodha's character is like a fresh stream, Jalal is like a deep sea. He has so many layers in his character, and I love the way you are successfully touching each and every layers with your simple and lucid language. 😳

Very true. Jalal is a character much tougher to analyse than Jodha. Glad you're liking it. 😳

Like the way you wrote about his feelings while roaming in Amer and comparing with his Agra... You are expert in expressing these delicate things beautifully in your writing. So beautiful!

Thanks a lot di...😳

His light-hearted enjoyment while talking with the 'golu-molu' common man is very nicely expressed. That is actually one of my favorite comic relief of the throughout show. 😆

Mine too...😆

And his feelings of mind while seeing Jodha at the first sight. He is ignorant of any type of special feelings in heart, he is even not used to praise the beauty of a women, he is even not familiar with much adjectives that can express the perfect beauty... But still he is feeling something new in his heart...which he cannot express with words but still...And you have sketched it out so perfectly.⭐️

Glad you liked that part. I was so unsure of it. 😳😆

And I loved the way you captured Jalal's possession to Jodha with the ritual of seeing future in gangaur's water. the last part of the entry was very interestingly written.

And the way you ended this part is awesome!😃

Thank you so much for your lovely words di...🤗

Continue soon... can't wait to read the confrontation in prison.

Will do today or maybe tomorrow. 😃

Originally posted by: akdha98

Thanks for pm and sorry for replying late I was not feeling well. The chapter is awesome

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

i loved it.i am enjoying their inner thought through their diary.a very very big thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: sycho

Fantastic update dear

Please continue soon.