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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

sahi kh rhi h shagun ... Itna chota chappy ... Nahi chlega bhai nhi chlega 😆😆

app bhi ok next time big wala

sooo cute pls updte next chapi soon

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss

app bhi ok next time big wala

koi na shikhu ... Abhi shagun ki update baki h ... 🤣

really very very different and very cute the bird is jalal wow what an imagination beautiful very eager to wait yaar please post soon and soon give some long page this much when we read this much short we loos the interest yaar please give us long page. important is post soon don't get long time to wait for us to read.

Originally posted by: rameshwari11

really very very different and very cute the bird is jalal wow what an imagination beautiful very eager to wait yaar please post soon and soon give some long page this much when we read this much short we loos the interest yaar please give us long page. important is post soon don't get long time to wait for us to read.

thanks buddy actually my post deleted twice after that my hand starts paining so I can write this much only...

Lovely start Shikhu

Superb start

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Superb start

looks vry comical

u said its like a fairy tale

and yeah its nice to read dis story

plz update asap

thnks 4 d pm dear

gland u like it...

nice update shiku...
so u maid the bird as jalal nice...
update next part soon...
nd thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: garg_sahil

nice chapter shikhu, i just loved it. update soon

thankuu...😃