new ss THE LOVE:GAME OF LOSS $ GAIN new link added, THREAD CLOSED - Page 8

Originally posted by: shgu

Interesting CS

Pls update soon

thank u dear

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Character sketch is very interesting update the first chapter soon make it fast please pm me thanks for pm

thank u so much

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Nice cs nd storyline along it also interesting.
Eager to read it.
Update soon...

thank u dear

Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

Wonderful CS...👏

Really very excited to read more... 😊

thanks dear

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum


why this jo has to do this

she has no right to ruin Ja life


ab shayad ja usse nafrat kare

hope aisa na ho

update asap

thank u dear

Originally posted by: swriter

Nice cs pagaloo but i hate neha and i also hate jodha more than her. Poor jalal
Plz update first chapter so soon

thank u my pagloo
JALAL Z not poor here Jo have to suffer a lot

Originally posted by: lovespari

hey mavii...
super chrctr sktch dear n intrsting too..
oh god...ja jo bf gf but neha bcum ja wife n will die soon also...hmm
now m intrsted to knw hw ja jo will cum togthr..
waiting fr frst chap..
update soon dear n thanks fr pm..

by nidhi
thank u dear
u will come to know soon

Wow di how you manage so many story at the same time

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Update ... Waiting😆😆

meee tooo😆

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss

Wow di how you manage so many story at the same time

its a talent dear 😉