~Jodha's Diary~ Part 10 Pg. 103

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

oye next next kr k reserved kr diya...

update kb dene ka iraada h tera ...hmm??

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
oye next next kr k reserved kr diya...
update kb dene ka iraada h tera ...hmm??

Updated Ashu...😉

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

RESS

unress

Pehle tooo my sweet c Darling!!

This one is for you🤗...

Finally ...You updated...

Now coming the Chapter...

It was written soo beautifully that I was flowing with it👏

Jodha's emotions...You did a great job Darling!!👏

Jodha's shock on Sujamal's betrayal , her own feelings after knowing about her alliance , her feelings for Suryabhan Singh , her emotions being a girl , her responsibilities being a princess...

Everything was described amazingly awesomely...😃

Shareef-ud-deen😡 n his dirty games🤢

Well Jodha's marriage was fixed with Jalal now unbeknown to her...where she was thinking everyone was behaving wierdly coz she was going to leave them soon...

Moti Jodha scene was a nice one!!

Then comes "The Epic Mooh Dikhaayi scene"

Jodha's nervousness...moving towards the hall...

Her heart getting the biggest shock ...

Watching the face she never wanted to...That too at the place she never even thought in her wildest dreams...

Evrything was just soo perfect!!

Loved it dearie!!

Update next soon..

Thanks fr the pm...

Love you❤️

N yeah Me First😆🤣

Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Res
unress
sweety pie my baby awesome update yr...
The way u've explained jo's emotions n inner turmoil is jst wonderful yr...i've fallen short of words...especially that muh dikhayi wala scene, its mind blowing yr...today update was very much emotional :(
thnku for pm
aur is baar jaldi se update dena 🤣

Edited by kajalparijat - 9 years ago

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Nice update shagu ... Sujamal beyrayl ... Poor jodha had to face so much .. Surya died nd sharif's so called demands ... Marriage of joja got fixed ... I expressed each line welll ... Muh dikhayi part was awesome ... I was imaging ishq h vo ehsas while reading this part ...😆

By d way .. U r hell late for update ...😡

Update soon

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
Nice update shagu ... Sujamal beyrayl ... Poor jodha had to face so much .. Surya died nd sharif's so called demands ... Marriage of joja got fixed ... I expressed each line welll ... Muh dikhayi part was awesome ... I was imaging ishq h vo ehsas while reading this part ...😆

By d way .. U r hell late for update ...😡
Update soon

Thank you Priyu di...😳😃

I know di...I'm soo sorry...😛

Iss baar pakka jaldi dene ki koshish krungi haan...😛😉😆

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago