akdha SS~Melting the cold heart~Chapter04pg67(04/02/2016) - Page 44

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice tsr n update sn n thnxx for pm di
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dii
u said u will update today...
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interesting teaser
who's that girl
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Chapter-03
"We may have our arguments and we may shed some tears,but in the end, you are mine.I wouldn't change that for the world..." She is gazing at the photo which is hanging in the wall of HIS small galary room with teary eyes.there is the same girl whom she seen three years ago with HIM at that resturant, sitting on the chair while hugging HIS waist.the same girl whom she seen her jalal was consoling while caressing her head giving light kisses on it which made her heart and soul burnning alive. She closed her eyes letting to the tears to steam down as much they want, pressing her lips together to control her sobs.the regretness covered her already wounded heart like a gloomy cloud. "you..Womanezier..what the hell are you thinking about yourself ha.."
"I Hate people like you..who consider women as ther toys.."
"remember this,its also a woman whom given the birth to you too..learn to respect them first.."
I hate you..don't show your ugly face to me again,ever..
Her own words being to echoes in her mind making her distressed.She wish to die thousand time,to kill herself in once ,then this sarrow will end forever.what have she done,blinding in anger..wait,what made her angry that much? seeing him with another girl? Yeah,the possessiveness,the jealousness,the overprotectiveness,the LOVE was the behind that anger.those unpleasant feeling,seeing HIM so closer to another girl is the thing which came out through the anger in that day.but unknownly she have killed HIS heart by her own words.HIS emotionless eyes flashed in her mind stabbing to her bleeding heart.will he ever forgive her? 'Beta.." the kind voice took her attensions back. She slowly turned her head towards HIS atgha baba with her teary eyes.the middle age man could see soo many things in those beautiful orbs,they are seeking help from him, to get the preciuose thing of her life back to her, which she lost by her own fault once. He never hasn't a daughter.but this young girl who is infront of him, awaked the old desire to have a daughter in his life again.he could feel her pain as she is his own daughter.not only her's but HIS too, whom he consider like a his own son.he want to give his children to their happiness which them lost by a small misunderstand. He placed his hand on her head with fatherly love which could give some strenghth to her broken heart. 'Now stop crying beta..think me as your father..i, your father will help you to melt the heart of my stubborn son..'carssing her head he chuckled a bit making her too smile through her tears. 'Now come with me..'his words made her confused. "Where baba? "She whisperingly asked unable to understand what's on his mind.
Knowing his stuborn son since the day he came to this world atgha could easily think what he should have to do for slove this matter.now he is going to start his mission to unite his chindren again with the help of someone,special to his son. I have heared that There is a mother in every woman..eventhough they haven't given birth ever...with a smile he said making her more confuse. 'Ok..you'll understand everything..just follow me..'saying he made his way to upstair while she following him quitely.on the way to their destination they could hear a loud cry of baby girl bringing a smile to atgha lips while he thanking to the god for making everything easy for him. "Get out from here..you're fired.."they could hear his angry voice between the baby cry.atgha let out a long breath shaking his head. 'This is the third maid just for this week..'said atgha turning to her with a chuckle making her eyes widden a bit in amaze.
She couldn't take her eyes away from the beautiful scene is in front of her when she entered to the baby room with atgha.there he was pacifying the little baby showning a completely new side of HIM which she never seen before.for her,it's seems like a little boy pacifying another little baby girl.her lips automatcly curved in to a smile seeing HIM soo innocently like this. 'What happened jalal..'atgha's voice took her back from her dream world while taking attention by HIM too. "She made my princess cry baba..she don't even know how to feed a one year old baby.."He replyed looking at HIS princess's pouting lips. "Its okay sweetheart..she'll not come again..okay..don't cry..don't cry.."he softly murmured but seems like she isn't going to stop her cry soo soon.innocent souk started to cry even more loudly.the loud cry cuased her to awake from her dreamy gaze on HIM.unknownly her legs headed toward them making atgha's lips turned in to a sly grin with a confident feeling in his heart knowing that everything will be alright soon.
He didn't looked at her when she went near them though she's constantly looking into HIS eyes.she looked at atgha for a moment and with a hesitant she asked the permission from HIM when HIS baba assured her by eyes.
He couldn't refuse HER as he wanted his princess to stop crying anyhow.without even looking at HER her carefully handed his princess to HER.he hate to see the tears in his princess eyes.but those pouty lips able to make him calm down always with a soft smile though he hate to see her crying.
She feels amaze when she took the tiny figure to her arms.its not that she's carrying a baby for the first time but its something new feeling.the softness of her skin,the fragance of her baby colognes and baby powder slowly created a beautiful feeling in her heart. "Meli shona..kya hua hmm..why are you crling shweet heart..na na..you are not clying..noth clying..hmm hmm.."mumbling sofly in a childish tone she made her tiny head rested on her shoulder while caressing her head and back solfly with closed eyes.the every word she uttered is came out from the deep inside of her heart,from that beautiful feeling.for to amazed of the audiance who are watching them,the loud cry slowly turned to a soft wheep,and then for few soft choaks.with touch of soft motherly hand the innocent soul fell in to a peacefull sleep in HER warmth.it was unbeliveable for both men in the room as its only jalal who has the ability to pacify his princess.but today he too didn't success but SHE,who is completely stranger to the baby.he looked at atgha in disbelife while atgha came to him smilingly. Putting his hand around his son's shoulder he said in a law tone, 'That's what i wanted you to know jalal..she just need a MOTHER,not a maid..'hearing his words he looked away knowing what is he trying to say. "Baba..i have told you..i don't want to marry anyone.."he said with little anger.this made her to open her eyes and looked at them.hearing his words she thought to give them some privacy.after excused herself from them she slowly went to the balconey with the baby while caressing her head thinking about HIM,about that new most innocent side of HIS.that secene made her love for HIM increased more and more.also she love this little soul too,cause she could make HIM smile from the heart, which she herself broke once.she tried her best to controll her tears but vained.
okay..enough for now😆i know, someone want to kill me now🤣(hey soru and priyanka and everyone 🤗🤣)if you want me to update the next chapter ASAP..,then leave your coments and likes..then I'll UPDATE in this week only👍🏼and big thank to everyone for all your support🤗love you all-one of a healing heart-savindi-savindi❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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savi why do i think that u were asking for a song for this update?? 😡
anyways nice update..
Poor jo pta nhi kab tak roti rahegi 😭
adgah is a nice person...he took jo as his own daughter..
Ohh the baby was crying and no one could pacify her..
But jodha is the perfect woman 😊 she handled baby so easily..
Jalal was somehow shocked..
But whose baby is she??
Will be waiting for nxt update..
Edited by kajalparijat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update savi
jodha is shocked with jalal's beahviour😲
jodha said some hurtful things to jalal😭
atgah is very good person and trying to help jodha😊
jodha manage to pacify the baby😃
btw dont tell me that she is jalal's daughter😡
update soon
thnks 4 pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story savi and sorry for late reply. Hey don't tell me that it is jalal's baby
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute chapter dear.
Thanks to Atgah for helping Jo.
Who is the baby and the girl in the portrait?
Update soon and thnx for the pm.

Good..you became healing heart Savindi from broken heart Savindi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Motherly love of jo is awesome hs ha by d way is dat baby jl???? 😲... so he married some other girl r wat ... no no no our jo wil b shattered
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pls one request pls dont say the baby is jalals.🥱😕

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