JJ FF**Love - An Innocent Emotion** [ Chptr 6 pg 136 ] 01.04.16

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#981

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Unress😊

Nice update ashvaneeta 🤗

Loved ur new style of writing ... U did a brilliant job ashu 👏

Jodha my sweetheart missing her dad very badly ... poor girl... Instead i should say poor him ..i pity him..

how can he leave such darling daughter.. once he called her Daisy.. how can he forget her ?? 😡

Poor girl shares everything with her bestie means her dairy dearest 😆

Her new arrogant friend doing same mistake again n again ... hurting her knowingly or unknowingly..

Mr handsome invaded into her privacy ...read her dairy..oh no !! he has to face Jodha's temper 😉

Now Ja knew almost everything about her past ... hoping he would make her happy ..😊

Will she let him to come close ??Waiting for their friendship to blossom

I must say ashu you really r very talented girl ... keep writing more👍🏼

Edited by shruthikarthik - 9 years ago

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priya

@sweety992

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Posted: 9 years ago

#982

Good chappy dr..
Want to jo reaction seeing ja
Update dr

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#983

awsum ashu
jo hugged him & cried
jalal having naughty thoughts 🤣

woah..
did jalal read it
update asap dr

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#984

superb update
loved it

thnks for pm

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#985

Beautiful chapter n thnxx for pm

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Christy

@....Anabella...

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#986

Loved the chappy. The pov's justified both jodha and jalal

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#987

Ashu...

Lovely update!

jo was addressed as DAISIE...

ja read the diary???😆

i'd love to make him read that...🤣

bani didn't come...

and jo cried hugging ja but didnt talk to him...

update soon...

otherwise i'm not gonna leave u this time...🤣

love u...❤️

thanks for the pm..😃

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#988

Heartfelt update gudiya...

I should appreciate jodha for her strong hold on her emotions...

well she don't want to breakdown in front of her loved ones , in front of her mother also, its a very good quality every girl should possess...

otherwise this bloody society will take worst advantage of her emotional weakness...

But every time it won't work... some time we should open up with our trusted ppl... it will help to reduce stress from our mind... Otherwise it would turn destructive for our personality...

Of course here jodha is taking the help of her dairy but at last the sorrow will remain in her heart only.. then what's the use???? She should pour out her pain with her mother or at least with her friends...

Ok ok overall the chapter came in the best way... you portrayed her n his feelings in an effective way...